12/13/07 - Back To Work

Reptillian · 12-13-2007, 04:08 PM

A soft wind blows up pages, my pen rages, tangling English language like Mazes
Ink stirring imaginations, lyrics creating visualizations, my favorite occupation

Contemplation; on looking mediocrity, a student of Socrates, transcending Philosophy
Projection, an offering, turning paper to a boxing ring; Mohammad is a Mockery

Elapse of a second takes a century, words written as Ancient History, Titled a Mystery
Fingers and hands blistering, Misery repeated again wisdom in the end Whispering

Christening new hope, physiological soap wise men spoke, I quote “Go beyond a vote”
Conquer the slope; don’t cope, this should denote, the second you chose to Revolt

Make the tyrants elope, expose weakness, go for the throat storm the fucking Beaches
Tear these oppressors to pieces, time for impeachments whoever this message reaches

Please believe this, speeches are insignificant we have our chance and we are missing it
Leaders aren’t Omnipotent, flawed and admitting it is admirable, but twisting Shyt

Just to ones benefit, is Tyrannical we are not animals, fight back with all your soul
Government as it’s told, fucking means mind control Revolt and become whole

Back to work I go, beating my chest and screaming the message uncomfortable-n-restless
unless we use are minds as weapons, we can be nothing but ineffective-n-wreckless

Make some connections, break these repressions “people” you should become aggressive
Our rights have been disrespected, become obsessive, The “Patriot Act” is deceptive

The rest of this message should be written by you………

I am new here and this is a piece i did towards the first part of this month
I thought I would check out how yall are feeling my style

YoungJ · 12-13-2007, 04:47 PM

I wasnt expectin some shit like this to be honest. It was pretty dope.. different style and obviously focusin on knowledge and gettin a message across. Well Done. You Should stick around here.......

Reptillian · 12-13-2007, 05:15 PM

Aye thanks for the feedback I will soon have many more drops to add to my collection..

Respect
Reptillian

*~Tambo~* · 12-13-2007, 05:30 PM

Shit was nuts...not really my favorite style but it is somethin new...unique...keep it up

and return the favor please

Reptillian · 12-17-2007, 12:40 PM

uppin hit both yall wit some feed as well.

Respect
Reptillian

Reptillian · 12-19-2007, 05:37 AM

Hopefully I can get a little more feedback the favor will be returned

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 12-19-2007, 07:13 AM

tight work homie

Reptillian · 12-19-2007, 08:55 AM

thanks again for the feed

ReFleXiOn · 12-20-2007, 05:39 AM

wow, i'm damn near speechless, this was AMAZING, u really reached out and touched the tip of my brain, made it all tingly and shit, ur message is almost surrenity, so honest and conditioned, u snagged my attention right after the boxing ring part, made me realize u ain't just some noob fuckin' around, u know ya shit, very very nice read, def look forward to seeing more from u man...stay up and do u

Reptillian · 12-20-2007, 11:42 PM

Thanks Reflexion

This will be the last time i bump this thread

youngking187 · 12-21-2007, 12:53 AM

this waz a good piece of work..
your vocab waz ill...
keep that good shit comin my nigg....

Witty Qwan · 12-21-2007, 02:04 AM

this was good i think(gotta get a dictionary to know tha hell u talkin about lol)

nice use of vocab, u gotta a different type of style

stay up fam

Reptillian · 01-10-2008, 07:09 AM

............................................... heh one more time

12-13-2007, 04:08 PM	#1
Reptillian Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Clearwater Posts: 59 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	12/13/07 - Back To Work 12/13/07 - Back To Work A soft wind blows up pages, my pen rages, tangling English language like Mazes Ink stirring imaginations, lyrics creating visualizations, my favorite occupation Contemplation; on looking mediocrity, a student of Socrates, transcending Philosophy Projection, an offering, turning paper to a boxing ring; Mohammad is a Mockery Elapse of a second takes a century, words written as Ancient History, Titled a Mystery Fingers and hands blistering, Misery repeated again wisdom in the end Whispering Christening new hope, physiological soap wise men spoke, I quote “Go beyond a vote” Conquer the slope; don’t cope, this should denote, the second you chose to Revolt Make the tyrants elope, expose weakness, go for the throat storm the fucking Beaches Tear these oppressors to pieces, time for impeachments whoever this message reaches Please believe this, speeches are insignificant we have our chance and we are missing it Leaders aren’t Omnipotent, flawed and admitting it is admirable, but twisting Shyt Just to ones benefit, is Tyrannical we are not animals, fight back with all your soul Government as it’s told, fucking means mind control Revolt and become whole Back to work I go, beating my chest and screaming the message uncomfortable-n-restless unless we use are minds as weapons, we can be nothing but ineffective-n-wreckless Make some connections, break these repressions “people” you should become aggressive Our rights have been disrespected, become obsessive, The “Patriot Act” is deceptive The rest of this message should be written by you……… I am new here and this is a piece i did towards the first part of this month I thought I would check out how yall are feeling my style

12-19-2007, 07:13 AM	#7
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	tight work homie __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

12-20-2007, 05:39 AM	#9
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	wow, i'm damn near speechless, this was AMAZING, u really reached out and touched the tip of my brain, made it all tingly and shit, ur message is almost surrenity, so honest and conditioned, u snagged my attention right after the boxing ring part, made me realize u ain't just some noob fuckin' around, u know ya shit, very very nice read, def look forward to seeing more from u man...stay up and do u __________________ Knowledge is Bliss...Poetic Pimpin' Biatch!!! Battle Record: 10-1

12-21-2007, 12:53 AM	#11
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	this waz a good piece of work.. your vocab waz ill... keep that good shit comin my nigg.... __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

12-21-2007, 02:04 AM	#12
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,052 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	this was good i think(gotta get a dictionary to know tha hell u talkin about lol) nice use of vocab, u gotta a different type of style stay up fam __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

12-13-2007, 04:47 PM	#2
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	*I wasnt expectin some shit like this to be honest. It was pretty dope.. different style and obviously focusin on knowledge and gettin a message across. Well Done. You Should stick around here.......*

12-13-2007, 05:15 PM	#3
Reptillian Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Clearwater Posts: 59 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Aye thanks for the feedback I will soon have many more drops to add to my collection.. Respect Reptillian

12-13-2007, 05:30 PM	#4
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Shit was nuts...not really my favorite style but it is somethin new...unique...keep it up and return the favor please

12-17-2007, 12:40 PM	#5
Reptillian Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Clearwater Posts: 59 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin hit both yall wit some feed as well. Respect Reptillian

12-19-2007, 05:37 AM	#6
Reptillian Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Clearwater Posts: 59 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hopefully I can get a little more feedback the favor will be returned

12-19-2007, 08:55 AM	#8
Reptillian Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Clearwater Posts: 59 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks again for the feed

12-20-2007, 11:42 PM	#10
Reptillian Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Clearwater Posts: 59 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks Reflexion This will be the last time i bump this thread

01-10-2008, 07:09 AM	#13
Reptillian Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Clearwater Posts: 59 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	............................................... heh one more time

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