12/13/07 - ALL OF ME(Good Read)

RapsEnemy · 12-13-2007, 11:55 AM

The Names Derek,i'm 22 years old and living life to the fullest..
well maybe not quite to the fullest..considering it might be some bullshit
i dont like to talk much..a reserved man that most found as washed up..
And Since that day i've grasped a solo mind to immure the theory's thought of
at the time i am single..never looked at love as a spree to live
funny thing is all that went downhill when my first girlfriend called me needle dick
besides that..not to get side tracked..but I envy gazing at the stars through the night
sitting back relaxing..gargling wine while reaching into my carton of marbolo lights
my favorite color is blue..why?..for the record it explains my natural being..
loyalty,knowledge and last but not least parts of the sadness your seeing
I love the lash of a breeze when it hits my face with pure innocence
i loath mnemonics for the fact there hasnt been a delightful one i could remember since
Dreams? Well..at age 10 mine was to become an astronaut ,and patrol the galaxy
With A Goal to plant my feet on the shoal of the moon exposing bold compact decree
Keep Hope Alive! Was What Father would preach more often then never
Afterwards That Pleased Quote Had Died.. Once i saw him emplaced in a coffin forever
maybe it was all for the better to tell you the truth as this pain route expands..
but before i get off topic once more,i present to you this note of Self Assurance To Explain Who i Am

YoungJ · 12-13-2007, 12:24 PM

This is better then ya first shit but it still needs some work.. structures fucked up but stay up

12-13-2007, 11:55 AM	#1
RapsEnemy Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Queens Ny Posts: 100 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	12/13/07 - ALL OF ME(Good Read) 12/13/07 - ALL OF ME(Good Read) The Names Derek,i'm 22 years old and living life to the fullest.. well maybe not quite to the fullest..considering it might be some bullshit i dont like to talk much..a reserved man that most found as washed up.. And Since that day i've grasped a solo mind to immure the theory's thought of at the time i am single..never looked at love as a spree to live funny thing is all that went downhill when my first girlfriend called me needle dick besides that..not to get side tracked..but I envy gazing at the stars through the night sitting back relaxing..gargling wine while reaching into my carton of marbolo lights my favorite color is blue..why?..for the record it explains my natural being.. loyalty,knowledge and last but not least parts of the sadness your seeing I love the lash of a breeze when it hits my face with pure innocence i loath mnemonics for the fact there hasnt been a delightful one i could remember since Dreams? Well..at age 10 mine was to become an astronaut ,and patrol the galaxy With A Goal to plant my feet on the shoal of the moon exposing bold compact decree Keep Hope Alive! Was What Father would preach more often then never Afterwards That Pleased Quote Had Died.. Once i saw him emplaced in a coffin forever maybe it was all for the better to tell you the truth as this pain route expands.. but before i get off topic once more,i present to you this note of Self Assurance To Explain Who i Am

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12-13-2007, 12:24 PM	#2
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	*This is better then ya first shit but it still needs some work.. structures fucked up but stay up*