12/10/07 - More Than Music

*~Tambo~* · 12-10-2007, 08:19 PM

I’d like to take this opportunity to speak my mind//
And bow my head for every one of my G’s confined//
All these label made gangstas too weak to rhyme//
Yall suck more than all these video freaks combined//
Them dudes hit the streets and grind...most likely not//
I been doin it since, “She likes me, she likes me not”//
I write a lot...but I stay wit a gat//
And you can call me the repo man how I’m takin it back//
Spend dough then I'm makin it back//
Grew up watchin Tom and Jerry its my nature to be chasin a rat//
Flagrant wit packs gettin guap so...how could I be wrong//
Went from an O to a P like the ABC song//
And I just keep on...sellin it right//
A bunch of high school bullies...yall never was nice//
Ready to fight...but I’m tryna get a hold of my nerves//
Black Beard minus the hook and peg leg...holdin a bird//

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-11-2007, 12:31 AM

Got Damn.......9.10

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 12-11-2007, 07:21 AM

countless amount of hot shit in this drop homie.

especially the "pirate" line at the end

*~Tambo~* · 12-11-2007, 04:17 PM

thnks for the feed yall keep it comin

pUnChLiNeZ89 · 12-11-2007, 07:25 PM

Grew up watchin Tom and Jerry its my nature to be chasin a rat//

All these label made gangstas too weak to rhyme//
Yall suck more than all these video freaks combined//

nice jawn...keep it craccn

Shogun · 12-11-2007, 08:42 PM

It really could be "more".

*~Tambo~* · 12-12-2007, 11:17 AM

good looks on the feed yall bumpn

DXavier23 · 12-12-2007, 12:33 PM

All these label made gangstas too weak to rhyme//
Yall suck more than all these video freaks combined

I write a lot...but I stay wit a gat//
And you can call me the repo man how I’m takin it back//

Flow was ill in this one. Good shit Tambo

*~Tambo~* · 12-12-2007, 03:58 PM

bumpin my music...my music!

*~Tambo~* · 12-13-2007, 05:05 AM

up up n away

YoungJ · 12-13-2007, 10:36 AM

Your Flow Always Ill..

Them dudes hit the streets and grind...most likely not//
I been doin it since, “She likes me, she likes me not”//

You Had Alotta Lines I Coulda Put As The Highlight One... But Yeah... Dope Shit

Komplex · 12-13-2007, 02:18 PM

Like Prov said..you always bring a dope flow to the table.

I’d like to take this opportunity to speak my mind//
And bow my head for every one of my G’s confined//

Them dudes hit the streets and grind...most likely not//
I been doin it since, “She likes me, she likes me not”//

nice shit family. stay up.

*~Tambo~* · 12-13-2007, 04:00 PM

thanks for the props Prov & Plex...

*~Tambo~* · 12-14-2007, 12:04 AM

came to take this shit and I did...handle my bizz...

Reptillian · 12-14-2007, 12:37 AM

Multi use was key here it made this verse come together quite well. I like the witty word play and the suggestives in this the she likes me she likes me not line was fire. I would have liked to have seen a little more use of extended vocab but eh, thats just me. I will defently be reading more of your posts to see what you do on a longer verse. Iight then im out pimpin.

Respect
Reptillian

*~Tambo~* · 12-14-2007, 03:45 PM

good lookin on that feed...its good to hear someone tell me what I can do to improve rather than just sayin..."it could be more"

lol...uppin

*~Tambo~* · 12-16-2007, 02:22 AM

another bump you say?!

ReFleXiOn · 12-16-2007, 07:32 AM

"Grew up watchin Tom and Jerry its my nature to be chasin a rat//"
^haha fuckin' ridiculously awesome

"Went from an O to a P like the ABC song//"
^dope

"Black Beard minus the hook and peg leg...holdin a bird//"
^nice way to end it haha

other than the lines I quoted, no offense, but everything else was just so-so, made the verse work and flow correct but nothing spectacular...those 3 were fuckin' raw though...stay up

*~Tambo~* · 12-17-2007, 04:43 PM

good looks on the feed ma niggs...any more

YoungJ · 12-17-2007, 06:16 PM

Somebody Gotta Give Dude His Respect

*~Tambo~* · 12-19-2007, 04:32 PM

^^I agree lol

12-10-2007, 08:19 PM	#1
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	12/10/07 - More Than Music 12/10/07 - More Than Music I’d like to take this opportunity to speak my mind// And bow my head for every one of my G’s confined// All these label made gangstas too weak to rhyme// Yall suck more than all these video freaks combined// Them dudes hit the streets and grind...most likely not// I been doin it since, “She likes me, she likes me not”// I write a lot...but I stay wit a gat// And you can call me the repo man how I’m takin it back// Spend dough then I'm makin it back// Grew up watchin Tom and Jerry its my nature to be chasin a rat// Flagrant wit packs gettin guap so...how could I be wrong// Went from an O to a P like the ABC song// And I just keep on...sellin it right// A bunch of high school bullies...yall never was nice// Ready to fight...but I’m tryna get a hold of my nerves// Black Beard minus the hook and peg leg...holdin a bird//

12-11-2007, 12:31 AM	#2
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Got Damn.......9.10 __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-11-2007, 07:21 AM	#3
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	countless amount of hot shit in this drop homie. especially the "pirate" line at the end __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

12-12-2007, 12:33 PM	#8
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	All these label made gangstas too weak to rhyme// Yall suck more than all these video freaks combined I write a lot...but I stay wit a gat// And you can call me the repo man how I’m takin it back// Flow was ill in this one. Good shit Tambo __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

12-13-2007, 02:18 PM	#12
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Like Prov said..you always bring a dope flow to the table. I’d like to take this opportunity to speak my mind// And bow my head for every one of my G’s confined// Them dudes hit the streets and grind...most likely not// I been doin it since, “She likes me, she likes me not”// nice shit family. stay up. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

12-11-2007, 04:17 PM	#4
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thnks for the feed yall keep it comin

12-11-2007, 07:25 PM	#5
pUnChLiNeZ89 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: da BRICKZ..JERz Posts: 820 Repped: 24 Repped 38 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Grew up watchin Tom and Jerry its my nature to be chasin a rat// All these label made gangstas too weak to rhyme// Yall suck more than all these video freaks combined// nice jawn...keep it craccn

12-11-2007, 08:42 PM	#6
Shogun Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 718 Repped: 0 Repped 13 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	It really could be "more".

12-12-2007, 11:17 AM	#7
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	good looks on the feed yall bumpn

12-12-2007, 03:58 PM	#9
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	bumpin my music...my music!

12-13-2007, 05:05 AM	#10
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	up up n away

12-13-2007, 10:36 AM	#11
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	*Your Flow Always Ill..* Them dudes hit the streets and grind...most likely not// I been doin it since, “She likes me, she likes me not”// *You Had Alotta Lines I Coulda Put As The Highlight One... But Yeah... Dope Shit*

12-13-2007, 04:00 PM	#13
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks for the props Prov & Plex...

12-14-2007, 12:04 AM	#14
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	came to take this shit and I did...handle my bizz...

12-14-2007, 12:37 AM	#15
Reptillian Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Clearwater Posts: 59 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Multi use was key here it made this verse come together quite well. I like the witty word play and the suggestives in this the she likes me she likes me not line was fire. I would have liked to have seen a little more use of extended vocab but eh, thats just me. I will defently be reading more of your posts to see what you do on a longer verse. Iight then im out pimpin. Respect Reptillian

12-14-2007, 03:45 PM	#16
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	good lookin on that feed...its good to hear someone tell me what I can do to improve rather than just sayin..."it could be more" lol...uppin

12-16-2007, 02:22 AM	#17
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	another bump you say?!

12-16-2007, 07:32 AM	#18
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	"Grew up watchin Tom and Jerry its my nature to be chasin a rat//" ^haha fuckin' ridiculously awesome "Went from an O to a P like the ABC song//" ^dope "Black Beard minus the hook and peg leg...holdin a bird//" ^nice way to end it haha other than the lines I quoted, no offense, but everything else was just so-so, made the verse work and flow correct but nothing spectacular...those 3 were fuckin' raw though...stay up __________________ Knowledge is Bliss...Poetic Pimpin' Biatch!!! Battle Record: 10-1

12-17-2007, 04:43 PM	#19
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	good looks on the feed ma niggs...any more

12-17-2007, 06:16 PM	#20
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Somebody Gotta Give Dude His Respect

12-19-2007, 04:32 PM	#21
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^I agree lol

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