12/10/07 - 3 Sides To A Story...

U Not Like Me · 12-10-2007, 06:17 PM

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Baller · 12-10-2007, 06:26 PM

this was a good read actually...cuz i like da concept..same one budden used...this coulda been way dope but ya rhymes just be simple....you need some multies...like PLEAD my CASE N SEE my FACE...FUCK THAT n BUCK BACK..rhyme some more words together like that...if this had some multies or some internal rhymes coulda been nice...but shit was basic...

U Not Like Me · 12-10-2007, 06:32 PM

Ya much props for the feed..I didn't really add multies cause i wanted to focus more on the story rather than the rhymes..but yeah i understand and agree..multies would make this much much better...

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-11-2007, 12:32 AM

What Baller Said....I agree With....7.5/10

12-10-2007, 06:17 PM	#1
U Not Like Me You Should Already Know Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Springfield, Massachusetts Posts: 293 Repped: 63 Repped 9 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	12/10/07 - 3 Sides To A Story... 12/10/07 - 3 Sides To A Story... ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

12-10-2007, 06:26 PM	#2
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,096 Repped: 111 Repped 252 Times in 148 Posts Neg Reps: 95 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	this was a good read actually...cuz i like da concept..same one budden used...this coulda been way dope but ya rhymes just be simple....you need some multies...like PLEAD my CASE N SEE my FACE...FUCK THAT n BUCK BACK..rhyme some more words together like that...if this had some multies or some internal rhymes coulda been nice...but shit was basic... __________________

12-11-2007, 12:32 AM	#4
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	What Baller Said....I agree With....7.5/10 __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

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12-10-2007, 06:32 PM	#3
U Not Like Me You Should Already Know Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Springfield, Massachusetts Posts: 293 Repped: 63 Repped 9 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ya much props for the feed..I didn't really add multies cause i wanted to focus more on the story rather than the rhymes..but yeah i understand and agree..multies would make this much much better...