Gianni_soldier101

Click Clack, Get Back, I Spit Drugs That Wet Crack/
Front Around Here And Get Ur Chest Broke, Neck Snap/
Automatic Rhymin, Yee That Tech Rap/
Every1 Else Think They Ill, Forget Dat/
Lyrical Skill is What Defines Me/
Im Ahead Of My Time, Most Manz Behind Me/
CHillin In Da Hallways, Skoolz A Stoned Haze/
Workin Wid More Rockz Than Tha Stone Age/
Punches So Crazy, I Make All Them Hata's Scream/
Eyes Low, Chron Got My Eyes Mo Red Den A Laser Beam/
Flowin So Rapid, Sum Call Me Niagra/
Extendin Da Game, But Dun Call Me Viagra/
Dun Trust Alot, Cuz Many People Snitchin/
I Bring Heat 2 Houses But I Aint An Electrician/
Bitches Makin Threats, But Wut U Gon Do 2 Me Fool/
I'll Wet Ur Whole Block And I Aint Tha Community Pool/

I kno it aint dat good... but leave dat feedback styll

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The Rap Game Sure Changed, From These Days To Those Days, The Hood Is Bisexual, Cuz The Streets Is Goin Both Wayz

Gianni_soldier101

Bump......

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The Rap Game Sure Changed, From These Days To Those Days, The Hood Is Bisexual, Cuz The Streets Is Goin Both Wayz

Komplex

CHillin In Da Hallways, Skoolz A Stoned Haze/
Workin Wid More Rockz Than Tha Stone Age/
Punches So Crazy, I Make All Them Hata's Scream/
Eyes Low, Chron Got My Eyes Mo Red Den A Laser Beam/

punches were decent and the flow was pretty good. try enhancing your vocabulary and using more complex multies to up the substance of your lyrics. stay up fam.

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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner
If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture
If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures
If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

*~Tambo~*

I was feelin it...punches was there and ya flow is almost perfect...keep em comin ma niggs

Gianni_soldier101

Iigh i feel u ima work on dat..... propz fo da fedback

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The Rap Game Sure Changed, From These Days To Those Days, The Hood Is Bisexual, Cuz The Streets Is Goin Both Wayz

Gianni_soldier101

Iigh propz on da feedback fam

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The Rap Game Sure Changed, From These Days To Those Days, The Hood Is Bisexual, Cuz The Streets Is Goin Both Wayz

Gianni_soldier101

Bump.......

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The Rap Game Sure Changed, From These Days To Those Days, The Hood Is Bisexual, Cuz The Streets Is Goin Both Wayz

PBMaSteRMiNdiN

Basically What They Said^^^^^^

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I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son."

R.I.P. Big L & Vito

Gianni_soldier101

Iigh propz on da feedback.... bump

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The Rap Game Sure Changed, From These Days To Those Days, The Hood Is Bisexual, Cuz The Streets Is Goin Both Wayz

Tha Truth

this was good everything in this was str8 8.5/10

leave me some feed

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