Lord Please

YoungJ · 12-06-2007, 06:03 PM

..Lord Please Have Sympathy..
..And God Bless All The Gifted That Been Friends With Me..
Uh.. Yeah..
..Lord Please Have Sympathy..
..But You 'Bout To Greet Every Of My Enemies..
Uh.. Yeah..

..It's So Pure, Delivery Is Killin Me..
..I'm So Sure, That My Enemies Is Feelin' Me..
..With Gods Gift That He's Givin' Me..
..Hip Hop Is Dead.. Naw, Son It Lives In Me..
Uh..

Phenominal, I Been Doin' It Well Like LL.. Just Call Prov Cool J
I Evolve, You Been Stayin In Ya Class Like Elementary School Days
Hated Cause I Hit Hard With King Attitude, "Who's The Next Pawn Player"
Better Check My Mates Before I Wind Up As The Next Shawn Taylor
Back To The Subject At Hand.. I'm The Future, You Owe Me A Favor
Ready To Fade, My Styles Straight And The Flow Is Razor
There's No One Greater.. Maybe It's Just Myself Talkin' Abnoxious
But I Been Hearin' Yall And I Aint Heard A Portion Of Hotness
I Can Sit Here And Jot Shit With Logic Shining Like Jewel Perfection
So Much Knowledge Of The Game, I Enforce The Rules, I'm Reffin'
Dudes Be Battlin Me, Im Laughin, From There Perspective It's Easy
Then They Walkin Out Confused, I'm Like The Objectives To Beat Me
Spell T.A.L.E.N.T., I'm Well Balanced.. Can't Find A True Challenge
Lord Please Tell These Rappers It's Just Stupid To Challenge.......

Reddi Ree · 12-06-2007, 06:12 PM

Good shit ma niggaz...feelin da message involved....fav bar waz

Can Sit Here And Jot Shit With Logic Shining Like Jewel Perfection
So Much Knowledge Of The Game, I Enforce The Rules, I'm Reffin'

Tha Truth · 12-06-2007, 06:45 PM

There's No One Greater.. Maybe It's Just Myself Talkin' Abnoxious
But I Been Hearin' Yall And I Aint Heard A Portion Of Hotness
I Can Sit Here And Jot Shit With Logic Shining Like Jewel Perfection
So Much Knowledge Of The Game, I Enforce The Rules, I'm Reffin'
fav part^^

good shit my nigga everything was on point 9.5/10

Gianni_soldier101 · 12-06-2007, 07:43 PM

damn dat was crack.. mad propz on dat.... 10/10.... give feedback on my new drop

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-06-2007, 10:25 PM

You Write This Over The Coolest?.....But This Was Crack My Nig....8.10

YoungJ · 12-08-2007, 02:26 AM

Naw But It Inspired Me

YoungJ · 12-08-2007, 06:25 PM

Uppinnnnnnnnnn

.GaME.® · 12-08-2007, 06:28 PM

Doope Homie..
.

YoungJ · 12-10-2007, 07:43 PM

Good Lookzz

*~Tambo~* · 12-10-2007, 08:03 PM

see this is the type of shit I like to hear from you...

Phenominal, I Been Doin' It Well Like LL.. Just Call Prov Cool J
I Evolve, You Been Stayin In Ya Class Like Elementary School Days

^^murked it

I Can Sit Here And Jot Shit With Logic Shining Like Jewel Perfection
So Much Knowledge Of The Game, I Enforce The Rules, I'm Reffin'

^^burried it

now back to the lab with you...theres more to cook

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 12-10-2007, 09:17 PM

Hated Cause I Hit Hard With King Attitude, "Who's The Next Pawn Player"
Better Check My Mates Before I Wind Up As The Next Shawn Taylor

^^ i don't know if you meant to do that wordplay,but the wordplay was good

nice drop homie

YoungJ · 12-11-2007, 05:00 PM

^ yea i did that.. no doubt, good lookz

YoungJ · 12-12-2007, 07:00 PM

Uppinn....

king size · 12-12-2007, 07:54 PM

props
nigka

pUnChLiNeZ89 · 12-12-2007, 07:55 PM

drop was cracc...keep it flowin cuhz

YoungJ · 12-13-2007, 04:48 PM

Thnx For Feed

Reptillian · 12-13-2007, 05:24 PM

Very Nice, This was a well written verse. The inner rhyme scheme was hot and ya had your own style to it. Your mulits were almost hidden they flowed so well too a forgotten talent that is. Complex vocab where it should be, All around man this was just a nice drop. I would rate it abouts 9/10 you could have used a little more metas is my only thing rite...

Respect
Reptillian

YoungJ · 12-14-2007, 04:47 PM

Ight, G'Lookz

Komplex · 12-14-2007, 05:55 PM

Better Check My Mates Before I Wind Up As The Next Shawn Taylor

There's No One Greater.. Maybe It's Just Myself Talkin' Abnoxious
But I Been Hearin' Yall And I Aint Heard A Portion Of Hotness

ill shit. I was feeling the subject matter with the confidence in tact. alot of dope lines fam. stay up.

YoungJ · 12-16-2007, 01:38 AM

Appreciated

N. Streetz · 12-16-2007, 01:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Komplex

Better Check My Mates Before I Wind Up As The Next Shawn Taylor

There's No One Greater.. Maybe It's Just Myself Talkin' Abnoxious
But I Been Hearin' Yall And I Aint Heard A Portion Of Hotness

ill shit. I was feeling the subject matter with the confidence in tact. alot of dope lines fam. stay up.

I Read This Shit Before Just Never Fed It But I Co-Sign With This Nigga

12-06-2007, 06:03 PM	#1
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Lord Please Lord Please ..Lord Please Have Sympathy.. ..And God Bless All The Gifted That Been Friends With Me.. Uh.. Yeah.. ..Lord Please Have Sympathy.. ..But You 'Bout To Greet Every Of My Enemies.. Uh.. Yeah.. ..It's So Pure, Delivery Is Killin Me.. ..I'm So Sure, That My Enemies Is Feelin' Me.. ..With Gods Gift That He's Givin' Me.. ..Hip Hop Is Dead.. Naw, Son It Lives In Me.. Uh.. Phenominal, I Been Doin' It Well Like LL.. Just Call Prov Cool J I Evolve, You Been Stayin In Ya Class Like Elementary School Days Hated Cause I Hit Hard With King Attitude, "Who's The Next Pawn Player" Better Check My Mates Before I Wind Up As The Next Shawn Taylor Back To The Subject At Hand.. I'm The Future, You Owe Me A Favor Ready To Fade, My Styles Straight And The Flow Is Razor There's No One Greater.. Maybe It's Just Myself Talkin' Abnoxious But I Been Hearin' Yall And I Aint Heard A Portion Of Hotness I Can Sit Here And Jot Shit With Logic Shining Like Jewel Perfection So Much Knowledge Of The Game, I Enforce The Rules, I'm Reffin' Dudes Be Battlin Me, Im Laughin, From There Perspective It's Easy Then They Walkin Out Confused, I'm Like The Objectives To Beat Me Spell T.A.L.E.N.T., I'm Well Balanced.. Can't Find A True Challenge Lord Please Tell These Rappers It's Just Stupid To Challenge.......

12-06-2007, 06:12 PM	#2
Reddi Ree Everybody'z Favorite Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: C-M-D, Nu Jerzey Posts: 1,000 Repped: 230 Repped 29 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 4 Posts	Good shit ma niggaz...feelin da message involved....fav bar waz Can Sit Here And Jot Shit With Logic Shining Like Jewel Perfection So Much Knowledge Of The Game, I Enforce The Rules, I'm Reffin' __________________ myspace.com/reeyaboy

12-06-2007, 06:45 PM	#3
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	There's No One Greater.. Maybe It's Just Myself Talkin' Abnoxious But I Been Hearin' Yall And I Aint Heard A Portion Of Hotness I Can Sit Here And Jot Shit With Logic Shining Like Jewel Perfection So Much Knowledge Of The Game, I Enforce The Rules, I'm Reffin' fav part^^ good shit my nigga everything was on point 9.5/10 __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

12-06-2007, 07:43 PM	#4
Gianni_soldier101 Kon-T Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 292 Repped: 15 Repped 52 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	damn dat was crack.. mad propz on dat.... 10/10.... give feedback on my new drop __________________ The Rap Game Sure Changed, From These Days To Those Days, The Hood Is Bisexual, Cuz The Streets Is Goin Both Wayz

12-06-2007, 10:25 PM	#5
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,907 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	You Write This Over The Coolest?.....But This Was Crack My Nig....8.10 __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-08-2007, 02:26 AM	#6
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Naw But It Inspired Me

12-08-2007, 06:25 PM	#7
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Uppinnnnnnnnnn

12-08-2007, 06:28 PM	#8
.GaME.® I-. a-M. A- . G.a-W-d. Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: CaLi. da I.E. Posts: 240 Repped: 49 Repped 7 Times in 6 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Doope Homie.. . __________________ AcE, iM FrEsH. "far as rappers im thinking they frauds,call em all rubix cubes ,cuz i really used to think they was hard "

12-10-2007, 07:43 PM	#9
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	*Good Lookzz*

12-10-2007, 08:03 PM	#10
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	see this is the type of shit I like to hear from you... Phenominal, I Been Doin' It Well Like LL.. Just Call Prov Cool J I Evolve, You Been Stayin In Ya Class Like Elementary School Days ^^murked it I Can Sit Here And Jot Shit With Logic Shining Like Jewel Perfection So Much Knowledge Of The Game, I Enforce The Rules, I'm Reffin' ^^burried it now back to the lab with you...theres more to cook

12-10-2007, 09:17 PM	#11
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hated Cause I Hit Hard With King Attitude, "Who's The Next Pawn Player" Better Check My Mates Before I Wind Up As The Next Shawn Taylor ^^ i don't know if you meant to do that wordplay,but the wordplay was good nice drop homie __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

12-11-2007, 05:00 PM	#12
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	*^ yea i did that.. no doubt, good lookz*

12-12-2007, 07:00 PM	#13
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	*Uppinn....*

12-12-2007, 07:54 PM	#14
king size Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: da chi Posts: 58 Repped: 4 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	props nigka

12-12-2007, 07:55 PM	#15
pUnChLiNeZ89 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: da BRICKZ..JERz Posts: 820 Repped: 24 Repped 38 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	drop was cracc...keep it flowin cuhz

12-13-2007, 04:48 PM	#16
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	*Thnx For Feed*

12-13-2007, 05:24 PM	#17
Reptillian Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Clearwater Posts: 59 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Very Nice, This was a well written verse. The inner rhyme scheme was hot and ya had your own style to it. Your mulits were almost hidden they flowed so well too a forgotten talent that is. Complex vocab where it should be, All around man this was just a nice drop. I would rate it abouts 9/10 you could have used a little more metas is my only thing rite... Respect Reptillian

12-14-2007, 04:47 PM	#18
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	*Ight, G'Lookz*

12-14-2007, 05:55 PM	#19
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Better Check My Mates Before I Wind Up As The Next Shawn Taylor There's No One Greater.. Maybe It's Just Myself Talkin' Abnoxious But I Been Hearin' Yall And I Aint Heard A Portion Of Hotness ill shit. I was feeling the subject matter with the confidence in tact. alot of dope lines fam. stay up. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

12-16-2007, 01:38 AM	#20
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	*Appreciated*

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