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12-04-2007, 08:34 PM
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~~DarK-Menace~~ 2 Ft J.ProV.
{ J.ProV.} Remember Doc, I'm Not A Patient Man So Check Me Cause I'm Too Sick I Saw 1 These Rappers, Cutting Ankles With My Movements Imagine Superstar Status.. It Matches My Talent.. Let The Facts Speak Aftermath Of Crack Three.. You Know I Aint Gon' Lack Heat Combined Crack, My Mind Crash.. Guess I'm A Bad Driver Flat Tires, In A Wreck Flourin' On Fuems Till I'm The Last Rider I'm A Strapped Diver Ready To Swim.. Prov The Human Isn't Deep, I'm Ahead Of My Twin Forever I Win, But Never Again Will I Ever Treasure A Sin And When Forever Ends I'll Say Fuck It, Im'a Win Forever Again Possibly Will Never Blow Cause 2% Of IQ's Reach Gifted Genius And Probably 2% Of That Is Hip Hop.. You Get The Reasoning? {Tha Truth} Its tha Dark Menace seein through the eyes of the Authenic Prov's vision undisputable gz convergin together for the anticipated legendary collision see im shinin bright upon these bars as if i was a incarcerated trap star aint no chance at gettin far when my skill smears ya talent thick as tar known for always stirin up drama so they label me as controversy soup non medical recruits but my crew stay feelin caps like surgical dentist groups written on heated lines so u can stay im spittin flammable rhymes Truth tha demeanor convicted for 2nd degree verbal assassination crimes addicted to the game fiendin for elevation that occurin frm this lyrical scheme put ya country on the beam as if i was measurin to cook up landscapin scenes listen im tryin dry up the surface from the dampness of unreasonable hate nigga im wrapped for cuts. like barbed wires placed on penitentiary gates the government tryin to charge us all from havin our own volutional freewill well shit just call me donald in capital hill... cause im tryin to duck that bill damn it the bud got u under its superior demands till u placed in certified panic almost half of these niggas is tied to the trees loungin throught it like hamick skyscraperin rhymes so u can say im tearin up the clouds usin air born activity how canmy quota ever be matched when im in between min and max capacity
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12-04-2007, 08:58 PM
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nice drop both of yal shit was on point 10/10
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12-04-2007, 08:59 PM
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Good Shit.
-Souljah Boy Tell Em
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12-04-2007, 09:00 PM
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Nice verse fam.. turned out good for some quick shit
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12-04-2007, 09:04 PM
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tru^^^^^ and props mike and the other nigga
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12-04-2007, 09:49 PM
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J provs shit was good...flow was kinda weird..lines werent near the same length and the rhyme structure was all over the place...it was still nice though...Truth ya vocab be nice like always...shorten ya lines up though...shit would flow a lot better...your content was coo though....
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12-04-2007, 11:50 PM
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props on tha feed
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12-05-2007, 03:35 PM
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uppin...............
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12-05-2007, 04:21 PM
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Leathal drop niggas...~ONE~
BLACK!
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12-05-2007, 04:37 PM
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good looks on tha feed
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12-05-2007, 04:41 PM
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No Doubt Nigga...~ONE~
BLACK!
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12-05-2007, 09:43 PM
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this shit waz good my niggs
prov i like ya flowed on dis one like always.. truth ya vocab is always on point.. nice drop... 9/10
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12-06-2007, 04:19 PM
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props on tha feed my nigga^^^
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12-08-2007, 02:13 PM
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Imagine Superstar Status.. It Matches My Talent.. Let The Facts Speak
Aftermath Of Crack Three.. You Know I Aint Gon' Lack Heat Forever I Win, But Never Again Will I Ever Treasure A Sin And When Forever Ends I'll Say Fuck It, Im'a Win Forever Again Possibly Will Never Blow Cause 2% Of IQ's Reach Gifted Genius And Probably 2% Of That Is Hip Hop.. You Get The Reasoning? you smashed that verse fam. excellent shit. keep it comin. written on heat inspired lines so u can stay im spittin flammable rhymes Truth tha demeanor convicted for 2nd degree verbal assassination crimes listen im tryin dry up the surface from the dampness of unreasonable hate nigga im wrapped for cuts. like barbed wires placed on penitentiary gates I dig your substance and your vocabulary. your flow needs major improvement though fam. try shortening your lines and using more multies. you can still say alot and use good vocabulary in a tight and structured format. good drop yall.
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12-08-2007, 02:28 PM
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Dat Wuz Sum Good Shit G...
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12-08-2007, 02:39 PM
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Good Looks On That
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12-08-2007, 02:44 PM
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props on tha feed plex and deebo
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bump.......................
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that first verse is garbage
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Aint Gon Get My Cockiness On Over The Internet But If You Talkin Garbage Then You Dont Know What Real Hip Hop Is. You Fuckin Nobody
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