-The Story Continues- Part 2

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-03-2007, 01:05 AM

He Sat Up And Said...

"No Point In Sleepin, So Forget Dreamin"
He Pulled An Unloaded "22", It Was Time To Get "Even",
Before He Tucked It, He Saw His Reflection In The Beautiful Chrome,
Then Fixed His Tie And Strolled Out The Funeral Home,
Looking Similar To A...Hmm... A Delusional Clone,
Except His Mind-State Was Like A Cold-Hearted Assassin...
He Caught A Glance From A Necklace Around Homies Neck,
Then "Spotted" His Target Like A "Dalmatian" Then Started Reactin,
He Grabbed The Bullets Brought For The Weapon,
Like "Preparing A Sophomore Album", He "Thought For A Second"...
That's The Same Indecision That Got Him In This Position,
Mind Faded...His Hate Dislodged The Bullets That Exists Within Him,
He Read The Bullet And Saw It Was Intended For Another,
Then He Realized His Life Was Ended For His Brother...
He Raised The Weapon And Stood In A Hustlers Stance..
And Said "You Got Your Shots, You Won't Get Another Chance"
Click* Click*

What Will Happen Next?

ScruffyScruf · 12-03-2007, 01:09 AM

hey man im tryin 2 squah the beef good shit dawd

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-03-2007, 01:18 AM

...Uppppppppppppppppppz

Da Real Deal · 12-03-2007, 01:47 AM

damn thats some good shit Pistol. *Bang Bang*

youngking187 · 12-03-2007, 01:53 AM

this shit was hot pistol..
excellent vocab...
cant wait for pt.3
is it gonna be a part 3?

my fav line

He Grabbed The Bullets Brought For The Weapon,
Like "Preparing A Sophomore Album", He "Thought For A Second"...

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-03-2007, 01:55 AM

Yes There Will be A third....

...Thanks For Feed....Keep it Cominnnnn!!!

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-03-2007, 04:49 PM

Uppppiinn Moreee Feeedddddddd

YoungJ · 12-03-2007, 05:22 PM

Shit was Dope.. I respect you
I Didnt know how this would turn out, I had to go back to pt. 1 to remember shit a lil bit.

He Grabbed The Bullets Brought For The Weapon,
Like "Preparing A Sophomore Album", He "Thought For A Second"...

Good shit. 8/10

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-03-2007, 11:18 PM

Repped^^^^^...Uppppinnnn

Youngcity415 · 12-03-2007, 11:48 PM

yooo my nigga pistol murdered this shit

*~Tambo~* · 12-04-2007, 12:13 AM

shit was hot...it seems like most everyone said what I was gonna say so I'ma say some shit them niggas aint say...FUCK YOU...

j/p...but seriously

Famoz · 12-04-2007, 12:51 AM

damn.........murked...lol@ scruffy, good shit pistol keep that fire coming looking forward to prt 3 my dude

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-04-2007, 01:34 AM

No Doubt...Much Love....Uppppin

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-04-2007, 07:51 PM

UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPINNNNNNNNNN

N. Streetz · 12-04-2007, 08:07 PM

Good Shit Pistol

This Story Is Cool
The Wordplay Is Good
Vocab Is Sharp
Everything About Its Dope

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-05-2007, 12:25 AM

No Doubt Niggga^^^^^^^^^^^.....Upppinnn

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-05-2007, 04:35 PM

UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!

:sm h:

Solja25ivn · 12-05-2007, 04:39 PM

Quote:

Like "Preparing A Sophomore Album", He "Thought For A Second"...

Nigga why is you playin with niggas...YOU KNOW THAT SHIT WAS FIYA!!!!!

Hands down...nah fuck that hands up...Pistol Banger Stand up!

You know tha long awaited colab is in the pot simmerin'...so get ready nigga...~ONE~

BLACK!

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-05-2007, 04:44 PM

Been Waitin For That Collab Nigga...UPPPPIIINNN

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-06-2007, 01:07 AM

Can I Get Sum Fuckin Feeed?

Tha Truth · 12-06-2007, 04:18 PM

Then "Spotted" His Target Like A "Dalmatian" Then Started Reactin,
He Grabbed The Bullets Brought For The Weapon,
Like "Preparing A Sophomore Album", He "Thought For A Second"...
That's The Same Indecision That Got Him In This Position,
favorite part

this was good evrything was on point waitin for pt 3 now 9.5/10

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-06-2007, 04:30 PM

No DOubt Niggga ^^^^...Uppp Uppp And Away

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-06-2007, 10:22 PM

Upppppppinnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-08-2007, 12:59 AM

UPPP Muthhaaafuckkk INNNNNNNN!!!!!

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-08-2007, 03:55 PM

This Is Quite Ridiculous Now

12-03-2007, 01:05 AM	#1
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	-The Story Continues- Part 2 -The Story Continues- Part 2 He Sat Up And Said... "No Point In Sleepin, So Forget Dreamin" He Pulled An Unloaded "22", It Was Time To Get "Even", Before He Tucked It, He Saw His Reflection In The Beautiful Chrome, Then Fixed His Tie And Strolled Out The Funeral Home, Looking Similar To A...Hmm... A Delusional Clone, Except His Mind-State Was Like A Cold-Hearted Assassin... He Caught A Glance From A Necklace Around Homies Neck, Then "Spotted" His Target Like A "Dalmatian" Then Started Reactin, He Grabbed The Bullets Brought For The Weapon, Like "Preparing A Sophomore Album", He "Thought For A Second"... That's The Same Indecision That Got Him In This Position, Mind Faded...His Hate Dislodged The Bullets That Exists Within Him, He Read The Bullet And Saw It Was Intended For Another, Then He Realized His Life Was Ended For His Brother... He Raised The Weapon And Stood In A Hustlers Stance.. And Said "You Got Your Shots, You Won't Get Another Chance" Click* Click* What Will Happen Next? __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-03-2007, 01:18 AM	#3
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	...Uppppppppppppppppppz __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-03-2007, 01:47 AM	#4
Da Real Deal Most Likely To Succeed Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Chicago Illinois/Jackson,MS Posts: 4,987 Repped: 892 Repped 2,800 Times in 612 Posts Neg Reps: 178 Neg Repped at 150 Times in 102 Posts	damn thats some good shit Pistol. Bang Bang __________________

12-03-2007, 01:53 AM	#5
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	this shit was hot pistol.. excellent vocab... cant wait for pt.3 is it gonna be a part 3? my fav line He Grabbed The Bullets Brought For The Weapon, Like "Preparing A Sophomore Album", He "Thought For A Second"... __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

12-03-2007, 01:55 AM	#6
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Yes There Will be A third.......Thanks For Feed....Keep it Cominnnnn!!! __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-03-2007, 01:09 AM	#2
ScruffyScruf Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: ny baby Posts: 18 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	hey man im tryin 2 squah the beef good shit dawd

12-03-2007, 04:49 PM	#7
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Uppppiinn Moreee Feeedddddddd __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-03-2007, 05:22 PM	#8
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Shit was Dope.. I respect you I Didnt know how this would turn out, I had to go back to pt. 1 to remember shit a lil bit. He Grabbed The Bullets Brought For The Weapon, Like "Preparing A Sophomore Album", He "Thought For A Second"... Good shit. 8/10

12-03-2007, 11:18 PM	#9
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Repped^^^^^...Uppppinnnn __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-03-2007, 11:48 PM	#10
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yooo my nigga pistol murdered this shit

12-04-2007, 12:13 AM	#11
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	shit was hot...it seems like most everyone said what I was gonna say so I'ma say some shit them niggas aint say...FUCK YOU... j/p...but seriously

12-04-2007, 12:51 AM	#12
Famoz Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 1,548 Repped: 126 Repped 391 Times in 210 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	damn.........murked...lol@ scruffy, good shit pistol keep that fire coming looking forward to prt 3 my dude

12-04-2007, 01:34 AM	#13
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	No Doubt...Much Love....Uppppin __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-04-2007, 07:51 PM	#14
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPINNNNNNNNNN __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-04-2007, 08:07 PM	#15
N. Streetz I Was Born Elite Join Date: May 2007 Location: In The Place Of Daydreams Posts: 704 Repped: 104 Repped 82 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Good Shit Pistol This Story Is Cool The Wordplay Is Good Vocab Is Sharp Everything About Its Dope

12-05-2007, 12:25 AM	#16
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	No Doubt Niggga^^^^^^^^^^^.....Upppinnn __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-05-2007, 04:35 PM	#17
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!:sm h: __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-05-2007, 04:44 PM	#19
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Been Waitin For That Collab Nigga...UPPPPIIINNN __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-06-2007, 01:07 AM	#20
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Can I Get Sum Fuckin Feeed? __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-06-2007, 04:18 PM	#21
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	Then "Spotted" His Target Like A "Dalmatian" Then Started Reactin, He Grabbed The Bullets Brought For The Weapon, Like "Preparing A Sophomore Album", He "Thought For A Second"... That's The Same Indecision That Got Him In This Position, favorite part this was good evrything was on point waitin for pt 3 now 9.5/10 __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

12-06-2007, 04:30 PM	#22
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	No DOubt Niggga ^^^^...Uppp Uppp And Away __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-06-2007, 10:22 PM	#23
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Upppppppinnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-08-2007, 12:59 AM	#24
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	UPPP Muthhaaafuckkk INNNNNNNN!!!!! __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-08-2007, 03:55 PM	#25
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	This Is Quite Ridiculous Now __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

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