Affirmative Action Ft. Yung Mizfit

N. Streetz · 12-02-2007, 07:41 PM

Neighborhood Streetz Aka Born

Times Changed A New Niggas In Charge, Delivering Mad Bars
Dream Of Living a Luxurious Life With Fast Cars
Tempted To Accumulate The Finest Crops, So Give me Props
You Paper Chasing While Surrendering To The Cop
Got My Own Team Of Surveillance The Neighborhood Watch
The Government System Tryna Make Sure Im Caught
Born Strictly Loco..A Mafioso Kid Originated In The Late 80s
Somewhat Hasty But This Environment Made Me Crazy
I Watched Scarface Umpteen Times, Witness The Significant
Glorified Crimes In My Mind It Seemed Magnificent
Grew Up Sportin Fly Shit Jordans, Rocawear & Armani Shades
Sharp Tongue Maybe Cause Underneath I Kept A Blade

L.Y.R.I.Cs Are Back
Silence I Hear A Knock At The Door Could It Be My Nigga.........

Yung Mizfit

on da rise to da top wit no knowledge but street dreamz/
we felt suffocated in our skin...like "we need cream"/
knew there were betta wayz...wanted our dreamz sufficed/
comtemplatin at one point...then havin em at gun point.......for ice/
neva leave without the cheese/
lactose intolerate so i shit on police/
horrified of the barz tho no battle would phase me/
in a field of beef...tho no bulletz would graze me/
only i could save me...god neva stepped in/
chronically made my bed so i neva slept in/
dreamt of mannerismz of nicky barnez...a don/
i had thoughtz of tellin wit every committed felon-y/
teacherz would neva teach me...librarianz couldn't read me/
tho im on da corner of these streetz..no time 2 take it easy/
henchmen still starvin...n im tired of eatin/
so i'll pass it on 2 u...till all ya wishes come true/
but dis game iz a bitch...ulterior motivez n trickery/
just be prepared for ya wake...u know it was meant 2 be/

Tha Truth · 12-02-2007, 08:04 PM

i like this good collabo ya'll both were on point with the punches and multies overall 8.8/10

yo born hit me if u ever wanna collabo

Komplex · 12-02-2007, 08:07 PM

Times Changed A New Niggas In Charge, Delivering Mad Bars
Dream Of Living a Luxurious Life With Fast Cars

Born Strictly Loco..A Mafioso Kid Originated In The Late 80s
Somewhat Hasty But This Environment Made Me Crazy
I Watched Scarface Umpteen Times, Witness The Significant
Glorified Crimes In My Mind It Seemed Magnificent

I liked your verse. exhibiting the mafia mentality, good shit. I also liked how your verse flowed out and how the structure looked. hopefully you'll stick to this style.

on da rise to da top wit no knowledge but street dreamz/
we felt suffocated in our skin...like "we need cream"/

teacherz would neva teach me...librarianz couldn't read me/
tho im on da corner of these streetz..no time 2 take it easy/
henchmen still starvin...n im tired of eatin/
so i'll pass it on 2 u...till all ya wishes come true/

but dis game iz a bitch...ulterior motivez n trickery/
just be prepared for ya wake...u know it was meant 2 be/

I liked the metaphors....you always bring sharp imagery and detail to the table. overall solid verse.

both of yall stay up.

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-02-2007, 08:08 PM

I Agree With Plex's Breakdown.....8.10

Baller · 12-02-2007, 08:29 PM

borns verse was ok....has multies at times and didnt at times..vocab was ok...kinda simple...yung mizfits was weak...real simple lyrics..forced rhymes..wasnt feeling it...overall 5/10...

Yung MiZfit · 12-02-2007, 08:32 PM

^^^whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa......i'd murk u in 3 languagez.....stay in ya lane youngin...or itz sure 2 be road rage

N. Streetz · 12-02-2007, 08:33 PM

^_^(.............)

12-02-2007, 07:41 PM	#1
N. Streetz I Was Born Elite Join Date: May 2007 Location: In The Place Of Daydreams Posts: 704 Repped: 104 Repped 82 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Affirmative Action Ft. Yung Mizfit Affirmative Action Ft. Yung Mizfit Neighborhood Streetz Aka Born Times Changed A New Niggas In Charge, Delivering Mad Bars Dream Of Living a Luxurious Life With Fast Cars Tempted To Accumulate The Finest Crops, So Give me Props You Paper Chasing While Surrendering To The Cop Got My Own Team Of Surveillance The Neighborhood Watch The Government System Tryna Make Sure Im Caught Born Strictly Loco..A Mafioso Kid Originated In The Late 80s Somewhat Hasty But This Environment Made Me Crazy I Watched Scarface Umpteen Times, Witness The Significant Glorified Crimes In My Mind It Seemed Magnificent Grew Up Sportin Fly Shit Jordans, Rocawear & Armani Shades Sharp Tongue Maybe Cause Underneath I Kept A Blade L.Y.R.I.Cs Are Back Silence I Hear A Knock At The Door Could It Be My Nigga......... Yung Mizfit on da rise to da top wit no knowledge but street dreamz/ we felt suffocated in our skin...like "we need cream"/ knew there were betta wayz...wanted our dreamz sufficed/ comtemplatin at one point...then havin em at gun point.......for ice/ neva leave without the cheese/ lactose intolerate so i shit on police/ horrified of the barz tho no battle would phase me/ in a field of beef...tho no bulletz would graze me/ only i could save me...god neva stepped in/ chronically made my bed so i neva slept in/ dreamt of mannerismz of nicky barnez...a don/ i had thoughtz of tellin wit every committed felon-y/ teacherz would neva teach me...librarianz couldn't read me/ tho im on da corner of these streetz..no time 2 take it easy/ henchmen still starvin...n im tired of eatin/ so i'll pass it on 2 u...till all ya wishes come true/ but dis game iz a bitch...ulterior motivez n trickery/ just be prepared for ya wake...u know it was meant 2 be/

12-02-2007, 08:04 PM	#2
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	i like this good collabo ya'll both were on point with the punches and multies overall 8.8/10 yo born hit me if u ever wanna collabo __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

12-02-2007, 08:07 PM	#3
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Times Changed A New Niggas In Charge, Delivering Mad Bars Dream Of Living a Luxurious Life With Fast Cars Born Strictly Loco..A Mafioso Kid Originated In The Late 80s Somewhat Hasty But This Environment Made Me Crazy I Watched Scarface Umpteen Times, Witness The Significant Glorified Crimes In My Mind It Seemed Magnificent I liked your verse. exhibiting the mafia mentality, good shit. I also liked how your verse flowed out and how the structure looked. hopefully you'll stick to this style. on da rise to da top wit no knowledge but street dreamz/ we felt suffocated in our skin...like "we need cream"/ teacherz would neva teach me...librarianz couldn't read me/ tho im on da corner of these streetz..no time 2 take it easy/ henchmen still starvin...n im tired of eatin/ so i'll pass it on 2 u...till all ya wishes come true/ but dis game iz a bitch...ulterior motivez n trickery/ just be prepared for ya wake...u know it was meant 2 be/ I liked the metaphors....you always bring sharp imagery and detail to the table. overall solid verse. both of yall stay up. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

12-02-2007, 08:08 PM	#4
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	I Agree With Plex's Breakdown.....8.10 __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-02-2007, 08:29 PM	#5
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,088 Repped: 110 Repped 243 Times in 145 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	borns verse was ok....has multies at times and didnt at times..vocab was ok...kinda simple...yung mizfits was weak...real simple lyrics..forced rhymes..wasnt feeling it...overall 5/10... __________________

12-02-2007, 08:32 PM	#6
Yung MiZfit Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 273 Repped: 0 Repped 9 Times in 6 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^^whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa......i'd murk u in 3 languagez.....stay in ya lane youngin...or itz sure 2 be road rage

12-02-2007, 08:33 PM	#7
N. Streetz I Was Born Elite Join Date: May 2007 Location: In The Place Of Daydreams Posts: 704 Repped: 104 Repped 82 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^_^(.............)

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