+++Mind of an Outlaw++ ft. Tambo

Komplex · 12-02-2007, 01:25 PM

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N. Streetz · 12-02-2007, 02:18 PM

This Collab Is Cool

I Didnt Understand This Part On Tambos Verse

Higher than Benjamin Franklin...wit a kite and a key//
I be dealing then bankin...get a kite and a key//

I Liked The Flow And Multies and this bar

Tight as a cease...whenever I’m reppin mine//
Get on extra grind so my paper stack Tetris high//
Yes the guy...be sitting up in cloud nine//
Use it as my down time...I be higher than the whole towns crime//

Komplex Shit Was Decent

He Held Down His End Of the Collab

Triggas I pull quick, for recreation, very simple
Destructive vision, no matter what religion I'll shoot ya "temple"

This Collab Is About A 7.5-8/10

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-02-2007, 05:48 PM

Yo...I've Been Waitin For You Two To Collab Since All Three Of us Did back in The Day....But Im Slighlty Disappointed Because It Seemed Like You Werent On The Same page....But OTher Than That...This Was Sick....8.8.10

Higher than Benjamin Franklin...wit a kite and a key//
I be dealing then bankin...get a kite and a key//

Tambo Came With The Sick Multies And Crazy Crazy punches...

I been strayed from conventional styles of weak rhymers
Such bleek reminders, most of yall are leaking vaginas

Made Me Giggle...

No perverted predator but I hunt U kids for sport
Torture, my temper rises when foes flip and retort
I'll torch ya, for expressin plans to snitch in the court
No witnesses left to survive, or to testify...
When it comes to causing death & crime, the best is I
No patience for hatin, I strke once you test my pride
Step up and be the next to die...

Couldnt Tell U How Crazy this Flowed....

Yung MiZfit · 12-02-2007, 06:08 PM

Higher than Benjamin Franklin...wit a kite and a key//
I be dealing then bankin...get a kite and a key//
Illiterate how we raised to have spite for the D’s//
Smokey the Bear...Tambo’s a light in the trees//
Get it? Yeah...I be lighting them trees//
Never liked boats my family had spite for the seas//
Tight as a cease...whenever I’m reppin mine//
Get on extra grind so my paper stack Tetris high//
Yes the guy...be sitting up in cloud nine//
Use it as my down time...I be higher than the whole towns crime//
And don’t you ever clown mine...CG till the death//
Even though its cold enough to have me seein my breath//
Me in a quest I’m leading the test...get lost//
Someone check the pipe I smoke like an ex-haust//
Watch my competitors try but most of them soft//
They layin off pet doctors get a vet tossed//
^^^
this was decent...lines were pretty simple....Illiterate how we raised to have spite for the D’s//<<<it makes no sense in almost every way i look at it...i think i know what u mean tho...u should have worded it better....Someone check the pipe I smoke like an ex-haust//...pretty simple/played...this could have been better....6/10

+++Komplex+++
---------------

My style's a miracle, verbal malicious renegade
Super lyrical, retaining more "16s" than the 10th grade
I been strayed from conventional styles of weak rhymers
Such bleek reminders, most of yall are leaking vaginas
with deep holes and flowing blood due to sweeping floods
of bullets, sent from me as a warning to stop the bullshit
Triggas I pull quick, for recreation, very simple
Destructive vision, no matter what religion I'll shoot ya "temple"
My thorough movements are nimble, far ahead of competitors
No perverted predator but I hunt U kids for sport
Torture, my temper rises when foes flip and retort
I'll torch ya, for expressin plans to snitch in the court
No witnesses left to survive, or to testify...
When it comes to causing death & crime, the best is I
No patience for hatin, I strke once you test my pride
Step up and be the next to die...
^^^^

i liked this better than tambo's verse.....good wordplay/metaz......some ok multiez...."super lyrical"<<<thats the only thing i would change...dat shit just soundz retarded and "gimmicky".....lol....i'd give this an 8/10

overall- 7/10....coulda been better....this wasnt a very good drop as a cohesive piece....

Komplex · 12-02-2007, 08:08 PM

no doubt. good looks of the feed yall.

*~Tambo~* · 12-03-2007, 12:30 PM

Higher than Benjamin Franklin...wit a kite and a key//
I be dealing then bankin...get a kite and a key//

If you got a connect in jail they sometimes'll send you a coded letter, called a kite, which you would give to whoever is runnin the business for him and they'll start servin you how the other dude did...so I get a kite and a key

Illiterate how we raised to have spite for the D’s//
Smokey the Bear...Tambo’s a light in the trees//

alot of people call the DEA the D's...at least in the hood anyway lol...and the whole time I thought all you people was thugs...lol...guess not

steady bump

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 12-03-2007, 04:51 PM

I Got You Though^^^^

YoungJ · 12-03-2007, 05:19 PM

This Was Straight.

Komplex had the better verse but Tambo still came right.

Triggas I pull quick, for recreation, very simple
Destructive vision, no matter what religion I'll shoot ya "temple"

That was the standout bar of the whole collab.
Comin from yall I would've expected better... but it's still a solid 7.5

*~Tambo~* · 12-03-2007, 08:31 PM

I know you seen my Pistol...and good looks on the feed J Prov...but feel like alot of pople dont understnd the shit I say...not even a little...alot lol so I'ma start breakin it down when I think its a toss up from now on...an other linesniggas might not have caught are...

Get it? Yeah...I be lighting them trees//
Never liked boats my family had spite for the seas//

the word family gets associated wit bloods and seas could've been C's

Yung MiZfit · 12-03-2007, 10:09 PM

^^^yea but wutz impressive about not likin boatz?......even with da metaphorz....naturally bloodz dont like cripz so wutz da point of da bar?

*~Tambo~* · 12-04-2007, 12:04 AM

the bar is about how I grew up. My actual family...not metaphorically or nothin...was bloods and the bar is just tryna tell you that I grew up wit that mind state because of it...it aint to impress you lol

Yung MiZfit · 12-04-2007, 04:20 PM

ok kid.......

Komplex · 12-04-2007, 09:49 PM

up......................

Solja25ivn · 12-05-2007, 04:45 PM

I see the old heads makin' it hot...lol! Niggas keep it poppin'...~ONE~

BLACK!

Komplex · 12-06-2007, 02:16 PM

good lookin out fam.

Gianni_soldier101 · 12-06-2007, 07:57 PM

dis was pretty dope... 8/10.... leave feedback on my new drop

*~Tambo~* · 12-06-2007, 08:27 PM

good looks on the feed famo

Tha Truth · 12-06-2007, 08:45 PM

this shit was tite both of ya'll came did good on this 9/10
leave me some feed

Komplex · 12-08-2007, 02:14 PM

no doubt. i got you Truth.

Komplex · 12-08-2007, 09:57 PM

up........

Komplex · 12-19-2007, 11:34 PM

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12-02-2007, 01:25 PM	#1
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	+++Mind of an Outlaw++ ft. Tambo +++Mind of an Outlaw++ ft. Tambo ................................ __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

12-02-2007, 05:48 PM	#3
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Yo...I've Been Waitin For You Two To Collab Since All Three Of us Did back in The Day....But Im Slighlty Disappointed Because It Seemed Like You Werent On The Same page....But OTher Than That...This Was Sick....8.8.10 Higher than Benjamin Franklin...wit a kite and a key// I be dealing then bankin...get a kite and a key// Tambo Came With The Sick Multies And Crazy Crazy punches... I been strayed from conventional styles of weak rhymers Such bleek reminders, most of yall are leaking vaginas Made Me Giggle... No perverted predator but I hunt U kids for sport Torture, my temper rises when foes flip and retort I'll torch ya, for expressin plans to snitch in the court No witnesses left to survive, or to testify... When it comes to causing death & crime, the best is I No patience for hatin, I strke once you test my pride Step up and be the next to die... Couldnt Tell U How Crazy this Flowed.... __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-02-2007, 08:08 PM	#5
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	no doubt. good looks of the feed yall. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

12-03-2007, 04:51 PM	#7
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	I Got You Though^^^^ __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-04-2007, 09:49 PM	#13
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	up...................... __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

12-02-2007, 02:18 PM	#2
N. Streetz I Was Born Elite Join Date: May 2007 Location: In The Place Of Daydreams Posts: 704 Repped: 104 Repped 82 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	This Collab Is Cool I Didnt Understand This Part On Tambos Verse Higher than Benjamin Franklin...wit a kite and a key// I be dealing then bankin...get a kite and a key// I Liked The Flow And Multies and this bar Tight as a cease...whenever I’m reppin mine// Get on extra grind so my paper stack Tetris high// Yes the guy...be sitting up in cloud nine// Use it as my down time...I be higher than the whole towns crime// Komplex Shit Was Decent He Held Down His End Of the Collab Triggas I pull quick, for recreation, very simple Destructive vision, no matter what religion I'll shoot ya "temple" This Collab Is About A 7.5-8/10

12-02-2007, 06:08 PM	#4
Yung MiZfit Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 273 Repped: 0 Repped 9 Times in 6 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Higher than Benjamin Franklin...wit a kite and a key// I be dealing then bankin...get a kite and a key// Illiterate how we raised to have spite for the D’s// Smokey the Bear...Tambo’s a light in the trees// Get it? Yeah...I be lighting them trees// Never liked boats my family had spite for the seas// Tight as a cease...whenever I’m reppin mine// Get on extra grind so my paper stack Tetris high// Yes the guy...be sitting up in cloud nine// Use it as my down time...I be higher than the whole towns crime// And don’t you ever clown mine...CG till the death// Even though its cold enough to have me seein my breath// Me in a quest I’m leading the test...get lost// Someone check the pipe I smoke like an ex-haust// Watch my competitors try but most of them soft// They layin off pet doctors get a vet tossed// ^^^ this was decent...lines were pretty simple....Illiterate how we raised to have spite for the D’s//<<<it makes no sense in almost every way i look at it...i think i know what u mean tho...u should have worded it better....Someone check the pipe I smoke like an ex-haust//...pretty simple/played...this could have been better....6/10 +++Komplex+++ --------------- My style's a miracle, verbal malicious renegade Super lyrical, retaining more "16s" than the 10th grade I been strayed from conventional styles of weak rhymers Such bleek reminders, most of yall are leaking vaginas with deep holes and flowing blood due to sweeping floods of bullets, sent from me as a warning to stop the bullshit Triggas I pull quick, for recreation, very simple Destructive vision, no matter what religion I'll shoot ya "temple" My thorough movements are nimble, far ahead of competitors No perverted predator but I hunt U kids for sport Torture, my temper rises when foes flip and retort I'll torch ya, for expressin plans to snitch in the court No witnesses left to survive, or to testify... When it comes to causing death & crime, the best is I No patience for hatin, I strke once you test my pride Step up and be the next to die... ^^^^ i liked this better than tambo's verse.....good wordplay/metaz......some ok multiez...."super lyrical"<<<thats the only thing i would change...dat shit just soundz retarded and "gimmicky".....lol....i'd give this an 8/10 overall- 7/10....coulda been better....this wasnt a very good drop as a cohesive piece....

12-03-2007, 12:30 PM	#6
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Higher than Benjamin Franklin...wit a kite and a key// I be dealing then bankin...get a kite and a key// If you got a connect in jail they sometimes'll send you a coded letter, called a kite, which you would give to whoever is runnin the business for him and they'll start servin you how the other dude did...so I get a kite and a key Illiterate how we raised to have spite for the D’s// Smokey the Bear...Tambo’s a light in the trees// alot of people call the DEA the D's...at least in the hood anyway lol...and the whole time I thought all you people was thugs...lol...guess not steady bump

12-03-2007, 05:19 PM	#8
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	This Was Straight. Komplex had the better verse but Tambo still came right. Triggas I pull quick, for recreation, very simple Destructive vision, no matter what religion I'll shoot ya "temple" That was the standout bar of the whole collab. Comin from yall I would've expected better... but it's still a solid 7.5

12-03-2007, 08:31 PM	#9
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I know you seen my Pistol...and good looks on the feed J Prov...but feel like alot of pople dont understnd the shit I say...not even a little...alot lol so I'ma start breakin it down when I think its a toss up from now on...an other linesniggas might not have caught are... Get it? Yeah...I be lighting them trees// Never liked boats my family had spite for the seas// the word family gets associated wit bloods and seas could've been C's

12-03-2007, 10:09 PM	#10
Yung MiZfit Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 273 Repped: 0 Repped 9 Times in 6 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^^yea but wutz impressive about not likin boatz?......even with da metaphorz....naturally bloodz dont like cripz so wutz da point of da bar?

12-04-2007, 12:04 AM	#11
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	the bar is about how I grew up. My actual family...not metaphorically or nothin...was bloods and the bar is just tryna tell you that I grew up wit that mind state because of it...it aint to impress you lol

12-04-2007, 04:20 PM	#12
Yung MiZfit Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 273 Repped: 0 Repped 9 Times in 6 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ok kid.......

12-05-2007, 04:45 PM	#14
Solja25ivn Tha Return Of The King Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Buffalo NY Posts: 728 Repped: 6 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I see the old heads makin' it hot...lol! Niggas keep it poppin'...~ONE~ BLACK! __________________ Stallin, constipated dictators, cant breathe, cant move, gotta wait cause they stuck now... I am a rabid desease, Killin emcees like some fatty foods off the ass of a mad cow! -Solja Black-

12-06-2007, 02:16 PM	#15
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	good lookin out fam. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

12-06-2007, 07:57 PM	#16
Gianni_soldier101 Kon-T Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 292 Repped: 15 Repped 52 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	dis was pretty dope... 8/10.... leave feedback on my new drop __________________ The Rap Game Sure Changed, From These Days To Those Days, The Hood Is Bisexual, Cuz The Streets Is Goin Both Wayz

12-06-2007, 08:27 PM	#17
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	good looks on the feed famo

12-06-2007, 08:45 PM	#18
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	this shit was tite both of ya'll came did good on this 9/10 leave me some feed __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

12-08-2007, 02:14 PM	#19
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	no doubt. i got you Truth. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

12-08-2007, 09:57 PM	#20
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	up........ __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

12-19-2007, 11:34 PM	#21
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	......................... __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

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