Three Times The Addiction. Crack 3

YoungJ · 12-01-2007, 05:54 PM

I'm Straight Chillen, Takin In Vikes Cause The Pains Drillen
Hate Feelin', Fam You Can Doubt Me But I Stay Killin
Cocaine Rage, Obtain Notice From My Trained Ways
Paint Flames Like Harley Davidson Bikes With My A Game
Constant Maintained Ability, Ya Feelin' Me
Frank Lucas Laced Me, Cant Break Me, That's Stability
Haters Trigger Me, It Sickens Me, They Gimmicks Weak
Look, Visually I'm The Sickest MC With Imagery
Three Year Status Lift, That's MC Consistancy
Opponents Get Hit Stiff, That's MC Delivery
Short Fuse, Got My Barber To Temp Me, Ya Kiddin Me
Lifes A Mystery, Dealin' With Mood Swings I'm Bitter Sweet
Hiatus Is My Way To Just Qualify And Learn More
So My Lyrics Crash And Kill Like Earnhart On Turn Four
A Day Older.. A Day Smarter.. A Day Stronger
A Day Closer To Endin' My Life Which Is A Day Shorter
I'm Feelin' Classic But Lackin Right Material
If I Die Tomorrow, My Funeral's A Wasted Burial
I Used To Thank Family That Helped Me And Taught Me
Now I'm Sendin' Threats And Killin' Bro's Who Fought Me
Unfortunatley I Surpassed My Goal
Better Yet, I'm Glad Actually, A Mastered Soul
Lyrically A Masterpiece With The Mastered Flow
Lookin' Down At Professionals.. I'm Half As Old
Dudes Thinkin' I'm One (1) Dimensional
But To (2) Me That's Three (3) Times Dumber For (4) Themselves
Cause I'm Five (5) Star.. Exceptional
What More Can I Say? Crack Movements Like The Trap Movement
I'm Kickin' Knowledge So Imagine Any Lesser.. Dont Act Stupid
Me In Fifth Gear Is Top Speed, The Facts Proven
Step To Me, Your Killed... Tell Me How Stacks Doin'
More Attention With The Title But I'm Dope Every Shit I'm On
Glock, Click, I'm Calm.. Point It Up, Blast For The Clique I'm On

HH4ll. · 12-01-2007, 06:02 PM

Paint flameslike harley davidson with my a game..

haa sick flow...
gud shit..

Komplex · 12-01-2007, 06:08 PM

excellent multies, internal rhymes and flow.....sick content. you really laced this drop with alot of jewels. not alot of skippable lines. 10/10. stay up.

Hiatus Is My Way To Just Qualify And Learn More
So My Lyrics Crash And Kill Like Earnhart On Turn Four

Haters Trigger Me, It Sickens Me, They Gimmicks Weak
Look, Visually I'm The Sickest MC With Imagery
Three Year Status Lift, That's MC Consistancy
Opponents Get Hit Stiff, That's MC Delivery

A Day Older.. A Day Smarter.. A Day Stronger
A Day Closer To Endin' My Life Which Is A Day Shorter
I'm Feelin' Classic But Lackin Right Material
If I Die Tomorrow, My Funeral's A Wasted Burial
I Used To Thank Family That Helped Me And Taught Me
Now I'm Sendin' Threats And Killin' Bro's Who Fought Me

Tha Truth · 12-01-2007, 08:46 PM

Hiatus Is My Way To Just Qualify And Learn More
So My Lyrics Crash And Kill Like Earnhart On Turn Four

fav part

this was good u should keep this goin cause this was crack everything was on point ya punches and multies etc overall i'll rate this a perfect 10/10

N. Streetz · 12-02-2007, 02:15 AM

No Need To Feed
The Title Speaks For Itself
We Do This Shit...Your Making The Old Me Come Back
I Fucks With You For This

YoungJ · 12-03-2007, 03:59 PM

Good looks on the feed.. appreciate it

youngking187 · 12-03-2007, 04:09 PM

nice drop..
excellent vocab..
10/10

YoungJ · 12-03-2007, 06:14 PM

Uppinnnn..

DXavier23 · 12-03-2007, 07:52 PM

great shit man - proppd

*~Tambo~* · 12-03-2007, 08:15 PM

Constant Maintained Ability, Ya Feelin' Me
Frank Lucas Laced Me, Cant Break Me, That's Stability

This bar stood out in my mind...good flow multies and vocab but I felt like that was the highlight of the verse...I kinda wanted to see more heavy punches but still anice piece...stay on it

YoungJ · 12-03-2007, 11:11 PM

Good Lookz...

YoungJ · 12-04-2007, 03:23 PM

Uppinnnnnnnnnn

Reddi Ree · 12-05-2007, 01:50 PM

Dis shit real hot...feelin da punchez n shit....keep dat hot shit comin..UGz niggaz

Solja25ivn · 12-05-2007, 04:29 PM

Quote:

Hiatus Is My Way To Just Qualify And Learn More
So My Lyrics Crash And Kill Like Earnhart On Turn Four

Original Fiya!!! Nice to see nigga is active...~ONE~

BLACK!

YoungJ · 12-06-2007, 05:20 PM

Good Looks..

YoungJ · 12-09-2007, 12:16 AM

Uppinnnn..

Reptillian · 12-20-2007, 01:18 PM

Ok, you wanted feed let me break this all the way down because it deserves nothing less

number one, I will say this, you have surpassed most. I watch them take their best attempts and they don't ever get passed the norm.

now with that said

your rhyme scheme here was golden we both know this could be put onto audio no problem and most folk that would hear it would love it but, they wouldn't know why.

your into another level here. you are trying to put your feelings out in a cumbersome way that appeals to the hip hop industry which i respect.

but there were a few spots where your story could have been a little more in your face.... if you feel me

let me quote some bars

I'm Feelin' Classic But Lackin Right Material
If I Die Tomorrow, My Funeral's A Wasted Burial

Just because you are past the normal skill level let me tell you this about this line. You lowered yourself and after that you took a cop out..... you lack the material no you don't or i wouldn't be giving you this kind of break down...... Then you say that you would be a waist this give the onlookers the wrong impression... this is a masterful drop so don't ever come across weak. Real talk.

Better Yet, I'm Glad Actually, A Mastered Soul
Lyrically A Masterpiece With The Mastered Flow

The way you tied this bar in was pure art... but to end it with something as played as i have a masterful flow... come on prov. who don't know that. Shock the crowd more

other than that this piece is pure and total fire. its very small bits that I can offer to impress the crowd more.. but, you already know this... 100% real feed here pimpin you can still get better no doubts there.. but if this was on a cd you would be sitting pretty.

I am not saying all this to get your respect either Cuz... I am indifferent on the situation.
I am just trying to offer the best insight that i can offer

Respectfully
Reptillian

YoungJ · 12-20-2007, 02:15 PM

I do respect you fam..

I'm Feelin' Classic But Lackin Right Material
If I Die Tomorrow, My Funeral's A Wasted Burial

what I actually tried to get across was lackin' studio...
and wasted burial by saying "i cant die.. my shit is a must hear"
but i should've took a little bit more time on that to make it clearer

Good lookz though.. appreciate that shit and im working on gettin' audio together with studio equipment n shit

Reptillian · 12-20-2007, 11:45 PM

^^^^

Let me know when you make it happen. I would love ta hear it.

RapsEnemy · 12-23-2007, 04:37 PM

hey tupac wer your verse at for our battle u loserr

YoungJ · 12-24-2007, 04:09 PM

You a bum^

YoungJ · 12-31-2007, 05:33 PM

upppinnn...

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 02-01-2008, 12:40 AM

Crack...Juss Like The Title...Famo

FU!!

HIPHOP4LYFE · 02-01-2008, 02:57 AM

keep doin ya thangg ya heard props

1981funk · 02-01-2008, 05:22 AM

I think ill just

STEP in here and

Take a big gaint SHIT

12-01-2007, 05:54 PM	#1
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Three Times The Addiction. Crack 3 Three Times The Addiction. Crack 3 I'm Straight Chillen, Takin In Vikes Cause The Pains Drillen Hate Feelin', Fam You Can Doubt Me But I Stay Killin Cocaine Rage, Obtain Notice From My Trained Ways Paint Flames Like Harley Davidson Bikes With My A Game Constant Maintained Ability, Ya Feelin' Me Frank Lucas Laced Me, Cant Break Me, That's Stability Haters Trigger Me, It Sickens Me, They Gimmicks Weak Look, Visually I'm The Sickest MC With Imagery Three Year Status Lift, That's MC Consistancy Opponents Get Hit Stiff, That's MC Delivery Short Fuse, Got My Barber To Temp Me, Ya Kiddin Me Lifes A Mystery, Dealin' With Mood Swings I'm Bitter Sweet Hiatus Is My Way To Just Qualify And Learn More So My Lyrics Crash And Kill Like Earnhart On Turn Four A Day Older.. A Day Smarter.. A Day Stronger A Day Closer To Endin' My Life Which Is A Day Shorter I'm Feelin' Classic But Lackin Right Material If I Die Tomorrow, My Funeral's A Wasted Burial I Used To Thank Family That Helped Me And Taught Me Now I'm Sendin' Threats And Killin' Bro's Who Fought Me Unfortunatley I Surpassed My Goal Better Yet, I'm Glad Actually, A Mastered Soul Lyrically A Masterpiece With The Mastered Flow Lookin' Down At Professionals.. I'm Half As Old Dudes Thinkin' I'm One (1) Dimensional But To (2) Me That's Three (3) Times Dumber For (4) Themselves Cause I'm Five (5) Star.. Exceptional What More Can I Say? Crack Movements Like The Trap Movement I'm Kickin' Knowledge So Imagine Any Lesser.. Dont Act Stupid Me In Fifth Gear Is Top Speed, The Facts Proven Step To Me, Your Killed... Tell Me How Stacks Doin' More Attention With The Title But I'm Dope Every Shit I'm On Glock, Click, I'm Calm.. Point It Up, Blast For The Clique I'm On

12-01-2007, 06:08 PM	#3
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	excellent multies, internal rhymes and flow.....sick content. you really laced this drop with alot of jewels. not alot of skippable lines. 10/10. stay up. Hiatus Is My Way To Just Qualify And Learn More So My Lyrics Crash And Kill Like Earnhart On Turn Four Haters Trigger Me, It Sickens Me, They Gimmicks Weak Look, Visually I'm The Sickest MC With Imagery Three Year Status Lift, That's MC Consistancy Opponents Get Hit Stiff, That's MC Delivery A Day Older.. A Day Smarter.. A Day Stronger A Day Closer To Endin' My Life Which Is A Day Shorter I'm Feelin' Classic But Lackin Right Material If I Die Tomorrow, My Funeral's A Wasted Burial I Used To Thank Family That Helped Me And Taught Me Now I'm Sendin' Threats And Killin' Bro's Who Fought Me __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

12-01-2007, 08:46 PM	#4
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	Hiatus Is My Way To Just Qualify And Learn More So My Lyrics Crash And Kill Like Earnhart On Turn Four fav part this was good u should keep this goin cause this was crack everything was on point ya punches and multies etc overall i'll rate this a perfect 10/10 __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

12-03-2007, 04:09 PM	#7
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	nice drop.. excellent vocab.. 10/10 __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

12-03-2007, 07:52 PM	#9
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	great shit man - proppd __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

12-01-2007, 06:02 PM	#2
HH4ll. Banned Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Laughin OUT L0UD Posts: 9 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Paint flameslike harley davidson with my a game.. haa sick flow... gud shit..

12-02-2007, 02:15 AM	#5
N. Streetz I Was Born Elite Join Date: May 2007 Location: In The Place Of Daydreams Posts: 704 Repped: 104 Repped 82 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	No Need To Feed The Title Speaks For Itself We Do This Shit...Your Making The Old Me Come Back I Fucks With You For This

12-03-2007, 03:59 PM	#6
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	*Good looks on the feed.. appreciate it*

12-03-2007, 06:14 PM	#8
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	*Uppinnnn..*

12-03-2007, 08:15 PM	#10
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Constant Maintained Ability, Ya Feelin' Me Frank Lucas Laced Me, Cant Break Me, That's Stability This bar stood out in my mind...good flow multies and vocab but I felt like that was the highlight of the verse...I kinda wanted to see more heavy punches but still anice piece...stay on it

12-03-2007, 11:11 PM	#11
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Good Lookz...

12-04-2007, 03:23 PM	#12
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Uppinnnnnnnnnn

12-05-2007, 01:50 PM	#13
Reddi Ree Everybody'z Favorite Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: C-M-D, Nu Jerzey Posts: 1,000 Repped: 230 Repped 29 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 4 Posts	Dis shit real hot...feelin da punchez n shit....keep dat hot shit comin..UGz niggaz __________________ myspace.com/reeyaboy

12-06-2007, 05:20 PM	#15
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	*Good Looks..*

12-09-2007, 12:16 AM	#16
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	*Uppinnnn..*

02-01-2008, 12:40 AM	#23
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Crack...Juss Like The Title...Famo FU!! __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

12-20-2007, 01:18 PM	#17
Reptillian Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Clearwater Posts: 59 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ok, you wanted feed let me break this all the way down because it deserves nothing less number one, I will say this, you have surpassed most. I watch them take their best attempts and they don't ever get passed the norm. now with that said your rhyme scheme here was golden we both know this could be put onto audio no problem and most folk that would hear it would love it but, they wouldn't know why. your into another level here. you are trying to put your feelings out in a cumbersome way that appeals to the hip hop industry which i respect. but there were a few spots where your story could have been a little more in your face.... if you feel me let me quote some bars I'm Feelin' Classic But Lackin Right Material If I Die Tomorrow, My Funeral's A Wasted Burial Just because you are past the normal skill level let me tell you this about this line. You lowered yourself and after that you took a cop out..... you lack the material no you don't or i wouldn't be giving you this kind of break down...... Then you say that you would be a waist this give the onlookers the wrong impression... this is a masterful drop so don't ever come across weak. Real talk. Better Yet, I'm Glad Actually, A Mastered Soul Lyrically A Masterpiece With The Mastered Flow The way you tied this bar in was pure art... but to end it with something as played as i have a masterful flow... come on prov. who don't know that. Shock the crowd more other than that this piece is pure and total fire. its very small bits that I can offer to impress the crowd more.. but, you already know this... 100% real feed here pimpin you can still get better no doubts there.. but if this was on a cd you would be sitting pretty. I am not saying all this to get your respect either Cuz... I am indifferent on the situation. I am just trying to offer the best insight that i can offer Respectfully Reptillian

12-20-2007, 02:15 PM	#18
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	I do respect you fam.. I'm Feelin' Classic But Lackin Right Material If I Die Tomorrow, My Funeral's A Wasted Burial what I actually tried to get across was lackin' studio... and wasted burial by saying "i cant die.. my shit is a must hear" but i should've took a little bit more time on that to make it clearer Good lookz though.. appreciate that shit and im working on gettin' audio together with studio equipment n shit

12-20-2007, 11:45 PM	#19
Reptillian Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Clearwater Posts: 59 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^^^ Let me know when you make it happen. I would love ta hear it.

12-23-2007, 04:37 PM	#20
RapsEnemy Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Queens Ny Posts: 100 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	hey tupac wer your verse at for our battle u loserr

12-24-2007, 04:09 PM	#21
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	You a bum^

12-31-2007, 05:33 PM	#22
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	upppinnn...

02-01-2008, 02:57 AM	#24
HIPHOP4LYFE Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 660 Repped: 317 Repped 4 Times in 3 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	keep doin ya thangg ya heard props

02-01-2008, 05:22 AM	#25
1981funk Banned Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: RhythmRailroadd Posts: 110 Repped: 9 Repped 14 Times in 6 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I think ill just STEP in here and Take a big gaint SHIT

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