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Kon-T
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Toronto
Posts: 292
Repped: 15
Repped 52 Times in 12 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
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Wen i write down my lines, Sumtin special happens/
The pen and paper combines, There's No skill im lackin/ The gun clappin, click clack and, im back in action/ Im a hustler, So u kno im paper stackin/ I got the punchlines, and the multie flow/ You got a fake shine, you faulty gold/ Your bread aint right, you got salty dough/ My lyrics so hard, you'll say 2 ur speakers "Don't assualt me yo"/ I sell anything wid a value, i hustle, flip/ I'll leave u wrinkled up in a bag like ruffle chips/ I'll emptie a clip easy, don't gimmie akward looks/ The only reason ima call u doughboy, Cuz u as soft as it looks/ Now i keep more grass than your lawn, b/ So if u need a gram to a pound, come to Kon-T/ On my block we got killers, and mans thaty Jux all day, The only time raider's is on ya block, is wen u watch tha football game/ I've spit enough lines, it's time to end it/ What i spit is real, no pretend shit/ KON-T Leave feedback yo, tell me wut u think
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- iLLuminati ~ Rapsody -
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Ireland
Posts: 11,453
Repped: 151
Repped 645 Times in 302 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
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*needs to pasue to write something*
lmao, people that text contradict themselves so much "My lyrics so hard, you'll say 2 ur speakers "Don't assualt me yo"/" brilliant *continues readin* right its average enuff, nothin overly bad in there but nothing too impressive either, there isnt really much of content, its not really goin anywhere, its just a mix of random lines thing is its always so so soooo dumb people that are textin writin about BLAH BLAH EYE BE FLIPPIN DUH KEYZ, EYE HUSTLE ALL DAY ... stop that, like right now, ur sittin writing text raps .... not hustlin on duh block, so cut that shit out at once 5/10 not too bad, there is potential, lots of room for improvement but when u get ur act together i bit i can see u bein alright
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Young J
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Providence RI
Posts: 3,003
Repped: 203
Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts
Neg Reps: 5
Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts
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^this cat said it perfect. You def. got potention with ya punches and shit. Just quit the gun yappin and shit. Deliver a message that means something. Stay up my dude
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Kon-T
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Toronto
Posts: 292
Repped: 15
Repped 52 Times in 12 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
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Iigh Iigh nice feed, and 2 tha man that sed its dumb wut i write bout.. it aint like im on my computer everyday writin text raps.. ive only did this 1 an anotha... i actually do get out on tha block.. i do this wen i got nuttin else 2 day nd im juss chillin... but props on da feedbak
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The Rap Game Sure Changed, From These Days To Those Days, The Hood Is Bisexual, Cuz The Streets Is Goin Both Wayz |
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I Was Born Elite
Join Date: May 2007
Location: In The Place Of Daydreams
Posts: 704
Repped: 104
Repped 82 Times in 47 Posts
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