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10-28-2007, 02:16 AM
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HELL'S INTERN
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1st freestyle
now don't hate cuz this is my first one, just leave your thoughts and some advice to improve
now all of a sudden, hope sparks up like a spliff/ most yall niggaz fell off, like failed jumps off a cliff/ you catchin my drift, surprised that im comin wit piff/ and im tryin to capitalize my lyrics like im pressin the shift/ my rhymes ain't a myth, nigga my rhymes are plain reality/ im bishop from juice, yall niggaz miss congeniality/ and i kno that i am not the best one out/ but above average lookin at the rap game now/ and i kno your saying that your hammer is my death to be/ but im a vantriliquest i let my gun speak for me/
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10-28-2007, 02:32 AM
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Well YungHope,....I Believe There's Hope For You...For Sum First Shit...This Was Hot My Nigga...8.10
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10-28-2007, 02:34 AM
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HELL'S INTERN
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no doubt my dude thanx for the feed
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10-28-2007, 02:38 AM
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myspace.com/ObeythePen
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rep me....
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10-28-2007, 02:39 AM
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HELL'S INTERN
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already did
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10-28-2007, 03:13 AM
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this was good 8.5/10
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10-28-2007, 04:45 AM
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HELL'S INTERN
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repped ^^^^^^^
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10-28-2007, 08:48 AM
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Hot shit ma nig for some1's 1st time.....8/10
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10-28-2007, 12:14 PM
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Young J
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this was ight.. keep droppin. 7/10
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