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Old 10-25-2007, 10:15 PM   #1
 
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Heart Beat(Girl Power)

My heart speaks in the language of heart beats
My hear speeds when glad, when sad my heart bleeds
My needs my brain to listen
To carefully translate the rhythms into the mind and paint the vision
My heart can see further than the eye
My carries burden when I cry, so I had to word 'em in a rhyme
My has heared of the time when pain was all it knew
It's like, a burglary, my heart has been broken into
My heart carries the scars, my heart is cautious
My heart suffer the trauma that ex has caused it
My heart take longer to love, longer to forgive
But my heart beats stronger than drums, as long as live
Experience has taught my heart defense mechanism
My brain is hard headed, and hence it never listen
My heart can strike much harder than that
Infact, you can get killed in a heart attack


Heart beat part2

My heart speaks in the language of heart beats
My feeds the rest of me via my arteries
My could be hard to see, when I got beef and love is hard to reach
My heart hardens, kinda like heart disease
And it gets hard to breath
That's why I follow my mind, cuz in my heart could lead...
Things could get hard for me
My heart is incapable of a irrational decisions
Jus ask it to consider the fact is a mission
My heart could live jus like that full of a sudden
Without consulting my brain, my heart is stubbon
My heart has got a mind of it's own
I put my mind into rhymes and flows, my heart doesn't mind it though
My goes where my heart chooses, I tried to put my heart into rock music
But heart refused it
My heart even said pop was useless, It was a problem used in
Till my heart met HipHop music

Heart beat part3

The heart of Adverb is a heart of a soldier
If there was no more beat in my heart it would be over
Haters are findin' deep in the heart they know they feelin me
My mind is in the industry, my heart is still in Kimberly
<<Kimberly is where I used to live in SA>>
You can put my heart into rhymin with a heart of a lion
You can connect the lyin detecter in my heart if Im lyin
My is of course is a settle
I feel forced to get heartless when there's no remorse in a battle
I feel like my mind is mute and my heart is talkative
Or my mind is blind and heart is a walkin stick
Right now is the other way around, it's unfortunate
My heart can conceive an idea before my mind has thought it
Perhaps we should think with the heart, then we should love with the brain
So we can take the headache tablet, of heartache and pain
Or better, we should take the heart and bring it up
To the brain, combine the two, Im thinking love

My First Drop Be GeNtLe I Am a girl fellas
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Old 10-25-2007, 10:24 PM   #2
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lmaoooo @ girl power was this some type of poem
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Old 10-25-2007, 10:27 PM   #3
 
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no baby just rhymin i thought it had some good rhymes why u dont like it
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Old 10-25-2007, 10:30 PM   #4
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no baby just rhymin i thought it had some good rhymes why u dont like it
i never said i didn't like its ight as a poem but if u tryin to make it a rap u should work on ya punches word play and multies
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hey no offense but r u kiddin me multies punches word play its all their sweety read it carefully
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since this is more of a poem...wouldnt really know if its good or not ma

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hey no offense but r u kiddin me multies punches word play its all their sweety read it carefully
i said u should work on it i never said they weren't there but w/e


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dis is sum emotional ish rite here... 2 me its aight
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Old 10-26-2007, 01:47 AM   #9
 
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No Sparks No Myspace Im Straight Hood Lol N Guys Its Not A Poem Its A Rhyme Jeez U Guys R Hard 2 Pleze
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