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My heart speaks in the language of heart beats
My hear speeds when glad, when sad my heart bleeds My needs my brain to listen To carefully translate the rhythms into the mind and paint the vision My heart can see further than the eye My carries burden when I cry, so I had to word 'em in a rhyme My has heared of the time when pain was all it knew It's like, a burglary, my heart has been broken into My heart carries the scars, my heart is cautious My heart suffer the trauma that ex has caused it My heart take longer to love, longer to forgive But my heart beats stronger than drums, as long as live Experience has taught my heart defense mechanism My brain is hard headed, and hence it never listen My heart can strike much harder than that Infact, you can get killed in a heart attack Heart beat part2 My heart speaks in the language of heart beats My feeds the rest of me via my arteries My could be hard to see, when I got beef and love is hard to reach My heart hardens, kinda like heart disease And it gets hard to breath That's why I follow my mind, cuz in my heart could lead... Things could get hard for me My heart is incapable of a irrational decisions Jus ask it to consider the fact is a mission My heart could live jus like that full of a sudden Without consulting my brain, my heart is stubbon My heart has got a mind of it's own I put my mind into rhymes and flows, my heart doesn't mind it though My goes where my heart chooses, I tried to put my heart into rock music But heart refused it My heart even said pop was useless, It was a problem used in Till my heart met HipHop music Heart beat part3 The heart of Adverb is a heart of a soldier If there was no more beat in my heart it would be over Haters are findin' deep in the heart they know they feelin me My mind is in the industry, my heart is still in Kimberly <<Kimberly is where I used to live in SA>> You can put my heart into rhymin with a heart of a lion You can connect the lyin detecter in my heart if Im lyin My is of course is a settle I feel forced to get heartless when there's no remorse in a battle I feel like my mind is mute and my heart is talkative Or my mind is blind and heart is a walkin stick Right now is the other way around, it's unfortunate My heart can conceive an idea before my mind has thought it Perhaps we should think with the heart, then we should love with the brain So we can take the headache tablet, of heartache and pain Or better, we should take the heart and bring it up To the brain, combine the two, Im thinking love My First Drop Be GeNtLe I Am a girl fellas |
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Join Date: Aug 2006
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lmaoooo @ girl power was this some type of poem
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no baby just rhymin i thought it had some good rhymes why u dont like it
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i never said i didn't like its ight as a poem but if u tryin to make it a rap u should work on ya punches word play and multies
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hey no offense but r u kiddin me multies punches word play its all their sweety read it carefully
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since this is more of a poem...wouldnt really know if its good or not ma
btw u got a myspace?
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lmaoo @ sparks
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dis is sum emotional ish rite here... 2 me its aight
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Join Date: Oct 2007
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No Sparks No Myspace Im Straight Hood Lol N Guys Its Not A Poem Its A Rhyme Jeez U Guys R Hard 2 Pleze
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