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Old 10-23-2007, 09:53 PM   #1
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DX - Ultimate Victory (Freestyle)

PLAY INSTRUMENTAL: ULTIMATE VICTORY


Respect come from admiration and fear
In the drivers seat, with no hesitation to steer
Chasing victory, and no one on my tail
Just watching from afar, waiting for me to fail
God bless me with the courage to go after my dreams
My friends encourage me, cause Im a rapper which green
Comes second, I reckon that Im thee savior
Go ask who the hottest, they'll say D-Xavier
Want to express our plights, in a realistic manner
Not about 9 millimeters like David Banner
Fuck beef, I call it artistic banter
Fuck Don Imus with his racist slander
To Hip Hops problems, I'm the basic answer
The chemotherapy to its cancer
Government fucked up, still no health care
Six million people still on welfare
I ask you what is wrong with our society
The government's power comes from our anxiety
The media is bias, leadin us to buy this
Feedin us the lies, but it doesnt lead to riots
We are witnessing the passing of our priorities
Los Angeles Police harassing the minorities
This is a tragedy, its sad to see whats happening
We got the youth participating in drug trafficing
American dreamin, tryna make it out of the ghetto
Life is a highway, always got my foot on the pedal
Never settle cause thats when you are weakest
Rhymes so special, deem all of you speechless
Amaze you with my lyrics, you hear it, and acknowledge it
Incorporating hip hop with the problems in politics
A legend, is how you should start depictin me
Now let my raise a glass and start celebrating my victory.
Thank you.
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Old 10-24-2007, 07:38 PM   #2
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wat yawl think
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Old 10-24-2007, 11:52 PM   #3
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this was good my nigga punches was good flow was str8 good drop 9.5/10
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Old 10-25-2007, 12:13 AM   #4
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Old 10-25-2007, 05:14 PM   #5
 
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yeah this was good. ima go ahead and say 9/10, cuz a few of the lines feel like they too long to me.

i like ur style son i like the message nd agree. stay up
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Old 10-26-2007, 10:13 PM   #6
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Old 10-28-2007, 03:08 PM   #7
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this was good my nigga punches was good flow was str8 good drop 9.5/10
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