Some new shit

DXavier23 · 10-02-2007, 08:45 PM

Shit is sub-par for my standards and ill hit u with some real shit soon.

Heres some gangsta shit:

Ask man, wat happened to the last man who had a problem with me
Tried to attack-man, brought out his bat- man, like he was from Gotham City
But I had a gat, damn, I was strapped, he was abouta to go-out with pain
Cause I took my shotgun, and went to blow out his brain
But then the police came, I shot this man and ran to my basement
They heard the shot, so now they askin for a statement
I ran away, they chasin, Im racin, see their lights on, tryna follow me
Ditched the whip and ran, like Saigon after prodigy
In the clear, at the pear, take my boat, rev on the engine, son
Yet snitches continually stay in motion like a fucking pendulum
They found my location, police dispatch the information
Yet they have no circumstantial evidence, so they close the case n'
STill looking for the snitch, Im pissed cause I almost went to prison
It was the nigga I shot in the beginning, now I made sure he wasnt livin

Heres some other shit:

Soaked in omnipotence, hope is a joke in its ignorance isnt it?
explosions is imminent, cold flows just froze foes with bitterness (ghost)
I'm the sickest-switch my flows, you hear my emotion in the booth
Devotion to the truth, with less promotion than The Roots
Trading rhymes, hating times, degrading lines
Rappers saying the dating dimes, persuading crimes
To the youth, sending the wrong message, about the world we live in
Selling coke, shooting, and casually fucking women
Swimming in a sewer, that which we call our music
Stop the half-assin, u got the talent then u got the power to use it
Devour the music-game, yawl better not confuse the name
You a pussy, but pretend to be big, so you and Tom Cruise the same
Step down, New York City, I put my rep down, class is in session
Givin you classics, you can amass in ur collection
If u wanta sign-me, good, get me out this grimy-hood
Rapping is more than music, its my livelihood

DXavier23 · 10-03-2007, 08:42 PM

posted some shit now

DXavier23 · 10-04-2007, 10:07 PM

feed ---------------------

YoungP06 · 10-04-2007, 10:41 PM

i like this son.. good drop

DXavier23 · 10-06-2007, 12:37 PM

thxxx man ----------

DXavier23 · 10-07-2007, 02:50 AM

feed yooooooooo

Fatal-explic · 10-09-2007, 08:15 PM

hype......

DXavier23 · 10-10-2007, 05:44 PM

???????????

YoungJ · 10-10-2007, 06:19 PM

the second verse was hot.. i wasn't feelin the first one as much because its bout guns too much. shit gets borin. but the second one had nice vocab, multies and flow. you definatley got potential to drop some real shit. good stuff tho

DXavier23 · 10-11-2007, 06:51 PM

thx mannn--------

Tha Truth · 10-11-2007, 07:31 PM

both verses were good 9/10

10-02-2007, 08:45 PM	#1
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	Some new shit Some new shit Shit is sub-par for my standards and ill hit u with some real shit soon. Heres some gangsta shit: Ask man, wat happened to the last man who had a problem with me Tried to attack-man, brought out his bat- man, like he was from Gotham City But I had a gat, damn, I was strapped, he was abouta to go-out with pain Cause I took my shotgun, and went to blow out his brain But then the police came, I shot this man and ran to my basement They heard the shot, so now they askin for a statement I ran away, they chasin, Im racin, see their lights on, tryna follow me Ditched the whip and ran, like Saigon after prodigy In the clear, at the pear, take my boat, rev on the engine, son Yet snitches continually stay in motion like a fucking pendulum They found my location, police dispatch the information Yet they have no circumstantial evidence, so they close the case n' STill looking for the snitch, Im pissed cause I almost went to prison It was the nigga I shot in the beginning, now I made sure he wasnt livin Heres some other shit: Soaked in omnipotence, hope is a joke in its ignorance isnt it? explosions is imminent, cold flows just froze foes with bitterness (ghost) I'm the sickest-switch my flows, you hear my emotion in the booth Devotion to the truth, with less promotion than The Roots Trading rhymes, hating times, degrading lines Rappers saying the dating dimes, persuading crimes To the youth, sending the wrong message, about the world we live in Selling coke, shooting, and casually fucking women Swimming in a sewer, that which we call our music Stop the half-assin, u got the talent then u got the power to use it Devour the music-game, yawl better not confuse the name You a pussy, but pretend to be big, so you and Tom Cruise the same Step down, New York City, I put my rep down, class is in session Givin you classics, you can amass in ur collection If u wanta sign-me, good, get me out this grimy-hood Rapping is more than music, its my livelihood __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

10-03-2007, 08:42 PM	#2
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	posted some shit now __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

10-04-2007, 10:07 PM	#3
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	feed --------------------- __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

10-06-2007, 12:37 PM	#5
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	thxxx man ---------- __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

10-07-2007, 02:50 AM	#6
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	feed yooooooooo __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

10-04-2007, 10:41 PM	#4
YoungP06 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Maryland Posts: 164 Repped: 11 Repped 14 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i like this son.. good drop

10-09-2007, 08:15 PM	#7
Fatal-explic 514 DGMTL* Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Montreal Posts: 1,371 Repped: 1,180 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	hype...... __________________ myspace.com/krownkingz

10-10-2007, 05:44 PM	#8
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	??????????? __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

10-10-2007, 06:19 PM	#9
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	the second verse was hot.. i wasn't feelin the first one as much because its bout guns too much. shit gets borin. but the second one had nice vocab, multies and flow. you definatley got potential to drop some real shit. good stuff tho

10-11-2007, 06:51 PM	#10
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	thx mannn-------- __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

10-11-2007, 07:31 PM	#11
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	both verses were good 9/10 __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

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