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10-01-2007, 03:48 PM
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Im Back (new And Improved Flow)
They Say Im Knockin At Da Devils Door....but Im Patiently Waitin To Make A Face To Face Arragement Wit Satin
My Rhymez Undifeint You Lyin If Aint Da Greatest I Was Told Ma Flow Wuz Movin Slow,so I Took It And Changed It Prrof Read,rearranged It Went Ova Ma Basics And Gave Ma Rhyme Book A Face Lift And Wutup 87 Wuz Dissin Me But Dat Shit He Said Wuz Missin Me Coz See, My Flo Hit Ya Soul Slow Grab A Bone And And Rip Through Tissue And Cut You Wheneva You Make A Mova Like A Toungue An A Chipped Tooth At First My Rhymez Wuz Gettin Tired,flow Wuz Gettin Borin, Bars Wuz Gettin Shortened But I Rebounded Like Martin Lawerence And Jiz Fa Bein Da Best...i Got To Many Enemies Dat Wonna Shoot And Get In To Me Grab Dey Gunz An Finish Me, But Dey Jiz Replinish Me Coz Very Quckily Dey Bitch A Slob Me An If I Aint First Im Last....da Black Ricky Bobby Keep Toast Between My Seat Incase A Nigga Try Ta Try Me But I Might Get In Da Mood So I Keep Ma Bad Bitch Beside Me ........takeova Iz Back Muh-fucka.....aint No More Insane Folkz....takeova Jiz Entered Da Buildin......i Switched Back To My Old Flow...but Ima Lil Rusty At It Right Now Gimme A Few More Dayz Den Im Hittin Harda Den Pornstarz.....^6dn^ |
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10-01-2007, 05:29 PM
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Uppin Fa Feed
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10-01-2007, 05:31 PM
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..:General Truth:...
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u stretched to many lines lines and work on ya rhyme scheme 7/10 give me some feed
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10-01-2007, 11:12 PM
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still sucks
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10-01-2007, 11:18 PM
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10-01-2007, 11:28 PM
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Vulture
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basic rhyme scheme and stretched lines
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10-02-2007, 12:12 AM
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HeaT IIRipZzII
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propz ya digg check mah track out in audio section
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