salt to the wound

YoungP06 · 09-26-2007, 11:18 AM

My rhymes are vintage and unique, I’m simply an elite
Rappers fear me, competition winsing when I speak
MY tapes are what people choosing to bump, you’ll lose if you front
At your concerts performing, you get more booze than a drunk (boo's)
I’m ahead of the rest, king I’mm become the soonest
Everybody buying my tapes, I’m moving tons of units
Everybody feeling the swag, my tunes are played to the masses
And you could call me a bomb, cause I’m radio active
My tracks are ill like I make them with a fever
I got rappers scared if me, I leave them shaking like a seizure
Fans aint buying your grooves, and you can't write
The only time you laced something tight was when tying your shoes
Making ridiculous noise, I’m driven and commited with poise
Respect by all, I’m the one every rap critic enjoys
Over Mc’s I got the rhyming edge
Now fans following my every move like it’s simon says
Your tracks aint up to par with mine, you better alter your tune
When facing rappers I give em pain, I put salt to the wound
Lyrically I’ve grown tougher, now I’m a bone crusher
The microphone clutcher, facing me is known suffer

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 09-26-2007, 04:49 PM

Actually Alright, Work On multies...Flow...Ya Know....6.10

Komplex · 09-26-2007, 06:15 PM

this freestyle was ill, I don't know what PB's talkin bout. flow was great...your multies were on point. definitely felt the substance and content of the verse.

My rhymes are vintage and unique, I’m simply an elite
Rappers fear me, competition winsing when I speak

Making ridiculous noise, I’m driven and commited with poise
Respect by all, I’m the one every rap critic enjoys

Your tracks aint up to par with mine, you better alter your tune
When facing rappers I give em pain, I put salt to the wound
Lyrically I’ve grown tougher, now I’m a bone crusher
The microphone clutcher, facing me is known suffer

8.9/10.

YoungP06 · 09-26-2007, 07:27 PM

good look both of ya'll

Tha Truth · 09-26-2007, 07:39 PM

this was ight keep droppin

Joey Namath · 09-28-2007, 06:22 PM

U Sukk Total Dikk

YoungP06 · 09-29-2007, 12:39 PM

What the fuck you mean

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jeffreeyyyy

U Sukk Total Dikk

09-26-2007, 11:18 AM	#1
YoungP06 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Maryland Posts: 164 Repped: 11 Repped 14 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	salt to the wound salt to the wound My rhymes are vintage and unique, I’m simply an elite Rappers fear me, competition winsing when I speak MY tapes are what people choosing to bump, you’ll lose if you front At your concerts performing, you get more booze than a drunk (boo's) I’m ahead of the rest, king I’mm become the soonest Everybody buying my tapes, I’m moving tons of units Everybody feeling the swag, my tunes are played to the masses And you could call me a bomb, cause I’m radio active My tracks are ill like I make them with a fever I got rappers scared if me, I leave them shaking like a seizure Fans aint buying your grooves, and you can't write The only time you laced something tight was when tying your shoes Making ridiculous noise, I’m driven and commited with poise Respect by all, I’m the one every rap critic enjoys Over Mc’s I got the rhyming edge Now fans following my every move like it’s simon says Your tracks aint up to par with mine, you better alter your tune When facing rappers I give em pain, I put salt to the wound Lyrically I’ve grown tougher, now I’m a bone crusher The microphone clutcher, facing me is known suffer

09-26-2007, 04:49 PM	#2
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Actually Alright, Work On multies...Flow...Ya Know....6.10 __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

09-26-2007, 06:15 PM	#3
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	this freestyle was ill, I don't know what PB's talkin bout. flow was great...your multies were on point. definitely felt the substance and content of the verse. My rhymes are vintage and unique, I’m simply an elite Rappers fear me, competition winsing when I speak Making ridiculous noise, I’m driven and commited with poise Respect by all, I’m the one every rap critic enjoys Your tracks aint up to par with mine, you better alter your tune When facing rappers I give em pain, I put salt to the wound Lyrically I’ve grown tougher, now I’m a bone crusher The microphone clutcher, facing me is known suffer 8.9/10. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

09-26-2007, 07:39 PM	#5
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	this was ight keep droppin __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

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09-26-2007, 07:27 PM	#4
YoungP06 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Maryland Posts: 164 Repped: 11 Repped 14 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	good look both of ya'll

09-28-2007, 06:22 PM	#6
Joey Namath Banned Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Sandwich bag Posts: 276 Repped: 148 Repped 8 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	U Sukk Total Dikk