HOT HOT HOT (Hot Rhymes)

watup87 · 09-25-2007, 10:42 PM

Yo, i make cake leave dudes breathless
no amateur at war weapons specialist
W.U.P come to the game we the best
i got boys cookin it up they 5 star chefs
youd think im jewelery cause ya boys a charm
beef its on pop shit with this gun in my palm
stunt and its on kid im sayin it once
before i take a dudes head off fuck playin a dunce
i keep this mic in my left hand the gun in my right
put the barrel to the temple tell dudes im spittin for life
best learn to walk cause just talk makes a DEAD MAN
guns they pull it to put bullets in HEAD BANDS
they call me amen cause with god im blessed
got that DIVINE FLOW with LINES YO im the best
flow penetrate ya chest, like bullets penetrate ya flesh
Stunt in front of the best, i anticipate ya death

watup87 · 09-25-2007, 10:44 PM

just wanna b cool no beef here so give me some pointers wat i can do 2 improve

J~Souljah · 09-25-2007, 11:09 PM

dis shit was good....need to work on...well...multies maybe?....a more complex rhyme scheme...then u'll be str8

YoungP06 · 09-26-2007, 11:15 AM

i like it.

watup87 · 09-26-2007, 01:14 PM

thanks dawgs n thanks 4 the help

09-25-2007, 10:42 PM	#1
watup87 Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: woodisde Posts: 52 Repped: 0 Repped 12 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	HOT HOT HOT (Hot Rhymes) HOT HOT HOT (Hot Rhymes) Yo, i make cake leave dudes breathless no amateur at war weapons specialist W.U.P come to the game we the best i got boys cookin it up they 5 star chefs youd think im jewelery cause ya boys a charm beef its on pop shit with this gun in my palm stunt and its on kid im sayin it once before i take a dudes head off fuck playin a dunce i keep this mic in my left hand the gun in my right put the barrel to the temple tell dudes im spittin for life best learn to walk cause just talk makes a DEAD MAN guns they pull it to put bullets in HEAD BANDS they call me amen cause with god im blessed got that DIVINE FLOW with LINES YO im the best flow penetrate ya chest, like bullets penetrate ya flesh Stunt in front of the best, i anticipate ya death

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09-25-2007, 10:44 PM	#2
watup87 Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: woodisde Posts: 52 Repped: 0 Repped 12 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	just wanna b cool no beef here so give me some pointers wat i can do 2 improve

09-25-2007, 11:09 PM	#3
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	dis shit was good....need to work on...well...multies maybe?....a more complex rhyme scheme...then u'll be str8

09-26-2007, 11:15 AM	#4
YoungP06 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Maryland Posts: 164 Repped: 11 Repped 14 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i like it.

09-26-2007, 01:14 PM	#5
watup87 Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: woodisde Posts: 52 Repped: 0 Repped 12 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks dawgs n thanks 4 the help