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Old 09-20-2007, 12:11 AM   #1
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mind trapped.where reality's line-at.of crime..nickel & dimez.*scribbles line & rewind back...

mind trapped where reality line at.mind recordings.so important.*shortens it*..lets try that.

mind trapped where reality shruggles...bad-is-she-was couldn't tell her momma "i LOVE-YOu....
HEAD down on the stairs..wishing for betta..../with her momma yelling out "you need to get it together..//
she feels on her sweater...that her dead friend bought her..../ poisions memories of the tragedy just make shit harder.../
put her head down..burried from emotional stress..hoping the best...lOoks at the tatt'' WROTE-IN-HER.FLESH../
FOLD THE letter up put THE NOTE-IN-HER..DRESS...Remembering the words make sure *NoOne Forgets*...
a smile so big a smile so pretty... --hold onn--



i need to make sure Gworld feel me...



a SMILE SO BIG-A SMILE A _SMILE- SO PRETTY..of a lost girl surviving in a cold ass city...//
with no cash really...she need to STEP IT UP...i need sharpen my pencil its MESSING-UP.../

she need to step it upp... did i SPELL IT RIGHT ??
she need to step it up..hmmm *whats next to write ?*...//

she struggling..going threw a HARD TIME "god"...Could u please bless this girl with a PART TIME JOB...//

She says in her head but not with her mouth....cuz hard times barried faith it was hard-to-come-out...///

but the faith still there she just cant express it...but the cross shows its there as it swings from her neckless../
affected..by society..crushed by the challenges...writez in the diary cant bare how the pounding is...
and the AGGERVATION..all the APPLICATIONS...she signing no replying...tho she had the patience..//
it wared thin it never really mattered-to-dudes...went to the board of education ended back up in schooll../
1st of da month she got a back pack..in..some shoes......tho classes get tiring after its cooll.../
now CONGRADULATIONS...ya girl at her graduations...colleges approached her said theyll be gladly waiting../
'after evaluating...we impress to'.....cuz aint nobody else going just you.../
she achieved something..now she a college student...no sign of what her fake friends probably doing..//



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Old 09-20-2007, 12:36 AM   #2
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it was good but try 2 do ya own thang instead of stickin to the script

n try to shorten da lynez cuz if u really spit that it wouldnt fit 2 a beat
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Old 09-20-2007, 12:37 AM   #3
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k thanks ill keep dat in mind
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Old 09-20-2007, 01:27 AM   #4
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Old 09-20-2007, 02:17 PM   #5
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U R a legendary story teller...a great lyricist.. one of da best...Really enjoyed reading it.......keep up wit da hot shit...no i aint no blood
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Old 09-20-2007, 07:28 PM   #6
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u still wack as hell

n u still hav no tits at all
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Old 09-21-2007, 11:24 AM   #7
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Old 09-21-2007, 02:42 PM   #8
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good shit
this what this board need
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Old 09-21-2007, 09:08 PM   #9
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thanks to u all for leaving feed appreciates it alot cheers mate
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Old 09-21-2007, 09:41 PM   #10
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YOU GOT OFF LIL MAMA

ER'BODY LEAVE FEED ON MA SHIT
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liked it...it wuz some real shit

leave feed on me n youngking87 drop

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Old 09-22-2007, 12:42 PM   #12
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