DX - Wake Up (Stop Sleeping) -(Make Sure You Read This]

DXavier23 · 09-14-2007, 10:01 PM

Chorus:
I rhyme so incredibly, spit lines you can cherish
My lyrics have longevity, they will never perish
Rap about succeeding, rather than a nigga bleeding
Before I proceed 'n, wake up and stop sleeping

Verse 1:
Wake Up, Good morning, now open ya ears and listen
To a musician on a mission, with lyrical ammunition
Cynical disposition, about the world we live in
Put in a position, in which I can share my vision
Crooked politicians are like snitches, or you can say informants
Rap's becoming more embarrassing than Britney's VMA performance
We need more Talib and Common, less dances and snapping
For finances, these amateurs take their chances at rapping
We need to stop this from happening, its not about business
I shouldnt turn on the radio, and say what the fuck is this?
Run this rap shit from a distance, i'm like the unknown mayor
As I rise, your career's fading faster than the ozone layer
The top is my goal, so greatness is where my status nears
Must meet my expectations which extend out this stratosphere
Patiently waiting for me to blow, dont know what the delay is
Its like I'm in a war I can't win, like General Petraeus
Hell is what every day is, when you live in the projects
Where they sell dope on the corner and look at women as objects
I'm the hottest, stay away from rap cliches, and keep original
Thanks to 50 Cent, kids think its cool to be a criminal
They need to go to school, focus on careers, not on their nikes
We need niggas in suits, and not in oversized white tees
As I flow so nicely, I demand your recognition
Your worst nightmare on the mic, disband my competition

Chorus:
I rhyme so incredibly, spit lines you can cherish
My lyrics have longevity, they will never perish
Rap about succeeding, rather than a nigga bleeding
Before I proceed 'n, wake up and stop sleeping

Verse 2:
Im out for presidents to represent me, but not ours
Attacks Iraq with no evidence with connection to the towers
I ask you that at the election, that we put back in power
Someone that will protect us from terrorism, like Jack Bauer
Lyrical when i'm political, for me its not difficult
We need to get health care before another missile built
Too many niggas on welfare, cause they drop-outs
Thought they'd ball like Telfair, use that as their cop-out
Drug addictions leading to too many convictions, in this country
You need to stop smoking weed, thats how I speak 'bluntly'
I'm hungry on the mic, you can hear it when I spit it
Niggas know Im tight, they just dont wanna admit it
So they sleep on me, don't give respect where respect due
My subjects are different, and I come correct too
Hip Hop's dead, I suspect you as guilty of the crime
I aint lyin, you sound straight silly when you rhyme
Its time we start the revolution and go back to the basics
I'll provide the blueprint you other rappers just trace it
Victory I can taste it, my talent, not goin to be wasted
Niggas know I'm the one, like I chose the red pill in the Matrix
Hip hop I can save it, with one hot verse at a time
I'm so dirty, I don't even have to curse when I rhyme
Ahead of my time, like Leonardo Da Vinci
So many punchlines, you start to flinch B
Will fight for every inch, prepared to go the distance
I'm a force in this game, be aware of my existence

Chorus:
I rhyme so incredibly, spit lines you can cherish
My lyrics have longevity, they will never perish
Rap about succeeding, rather than a nigga bleeding
Before I proceed 'n, wake up and stop sleeping

Outro:
In this game of life, I wasn't dealt an ace
But I'm a champion, all I need is a belt around my waist
Excel right out the gates, keep climbin up the ladder
But these new rappers think that rhyming doesn't matter
Do I dumb down my lyrics to deepen my pockets
Or do I stand tall amongst my competition, like Yao Ming on the Rockets
You be doin nothing, while gettin signed is my plans
You rockin multiple watches, there's too much time on your hands
I rhyme for my fans, every rap is immersed in knowledge B
Commit crimes if you can, call that reverse psychology
There are variety of rappers, in need of extensive training
While I continue to rise, like the price of an expensive painting
Ready for your attack, my defense is waiting
Your entitled to your opinion, I don't take offense to hating
Gives me incentive, to prove your wrong and mistaken
Hoping that with this song, you are finally awakened

[Good Morning. This is your wake up call. My name is DX and I'm Out. ]

DXavier23 · 09-14-2007, 10:18 PM

wat yawl think

SaF HeaT · 09-14-2007, 10:22 PM

its tight check mine out real quick ya digg

DXavier23 · 09-15-2007, 01:53 AM

thxx yo - gimme feed on this

DXavier23 · 09-15-2007, 11:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RipZz

its tight check mine out real quick ya digg

ur shit was cool

DXavier23 · 09-16-2007, 03:47 PM

some dude copped my title and concept -smh

youngking187 · 09-16-2007, 04:45 PM

good shit
flow was on point
and vocab was like dat

DXavier23 · 09-16-2007, 05:52 PM

appreciate it homie

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 09-16-2007, 07:41 PM

One Of The Best Drops On Here.you Always Bring Heat

I Don't Post Freestyles Anymore.the Forum Dead Mayne

DXavier23 · 09-17-2007, 12:13 AM

appreciate it man

Tha Truth · 09-17-2007, 02:46 PM

damn this shit was ill my nigga

ps check ya pm

Solja25ivn · 09-17-2007, 03:19 PM

good thread...8.9

you must have this on audio huh?

Stay hungry...

BLACK!

DXavier23 · 09-19-2007, 06:45 AM

appreciate the feed yawl

MiSsSs CaSsSidy · 09-19-2007, 11:28 PM

vocab was amaazing dude we need to collab sometime 6.5.

u probably my science teacher

some of the lines had me like huh then near the end of it im liek oh i know what u saying its a tricky rhyme style u got with basic and voca then both together also very dangerous one

pleaseeeeeee leave a feed on my drop

DXavier23 · 09-20-2007, 07:31 PM

ha appreciate it yawl

DXavier23 · 10-11-2007, 07:31 PM

WAke Up and Stop Sleeping yawl

DXavier23 · 10-13-2007, 01:47 AM

In the eye of the storm, sorrounded by torrential stupidy
But I was born to make a difference, my potential's infinity

DXavier23 · 10-15-2007, 02:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MiSsSs CaSsSidy

vocab was amaazing dude we need to collab sometime 6.5.

u probably my science teacher

some of the lines had me like huh then near the end of it im liek oh i know what u saying its a tricky rhyme style u got with basic and voca then both together also very dangerous one

pleaseeeeeee leave a feed on my drop

^lol - aiite homie ---

DXavier23 · 10-20-2007, 06:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Solja25ivn

good thread...8.9

you must have this on audio huh?

Stay hungry...

BLACK!

na, i dont got the equipment - and thx for the feed

Pistol · 10-21-2007, 09:22 AM

Nice - 8/10

09-14-2007, 10:01 PM	#1
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,784 Repped: 193 Repped 1,685 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	DX - Wake Up (Stop Sleeping) -(Make Sure You Read This] DX - Wake Up (Stop Sleeping) -(Make Sure You Read This] Chorus: I rhyme so incredibly, spit lines you can cherish My lyrics have longevity, they will never perish Rap about succeeding, rather than a nigga bleeding Before I proceed 'n, wake up and stop sleeping Verse 1: Wake Up, Good morning, now open ya ears and listen To a musician on a mission, with lyrical ammunition Cynical disposition, about the world we live in Put in a position, in which I can share my vision Crooked politicians are like snitches, or you can say informants Rap's becoming more embarrassing than Britney's VMA performance We need more Talib and Common, less dances and snapping For finances, these amateurs take their chances at rapping We need to stop this from happening, its not about business I shouldnt turn on the radio, and say what the fuck is this? Run this rap shit from a distance, i'm like the unknown mayor As I rise, your career's fading faster than the ozone layer The top is my goal, so greatness is where my status nears Must meet my expectations which extend out this stratosphere Patiently waiting for me to blow, dont know what the delay is Its like I'm in a war I can't win, like General Petraeus Hell is what every day is, when you live in the projects Where they sell dope on the corner and look at women as objects I'm the hottest, stay away from rap cliches, and keep original Thanks to 50 Cent, kids think its cool to be a criminal They need to go to school, focus on careers, not on their nikes We need niggas in suits, and not in oversized white tees As I flow so nicely, I demand your recognition Your worst nightmare on the mic, disband my competition Chorus: I rhyme so incredibly, spit lines you can cherish My lyrics have longevity, they will never perish Rap about succeeding, rather than a nigga bleeding Before I proceed 'n, wake up and stop sleeping Verse 2: Im out for presidents to represent me, but not ours Attacks Iraq with no evidence with connection to the towers I ask you that at the election, that we put back in power Someone that will protect us from terrorism, like Jack Bauer Lyrical when i'm political, for me its not difficult We need to get health care before another missile built Too many niggas on welfare, cause they drop-outs Thought they'd ball like Telfair, use that as their cop-out Drug addictions leading to too many convictions, in this country You need to stop smoking weed, thats how I speak 'bluntly' I'm hungry on the mic, you can hear it when I spit it Niggas know Im tight, they just dont wanna admit it So they sleep on me, don't give respect where respect due My subjects are different, and I come correct too Hip Hop's dead, I suspect you as guilty of the crime I aint lyin, you sound straight silly when you rhyme Its time we start the revolution and go back to the basics I'll provide the blueprint you other rappers just trace it Victory I can taste it, my talent, not goin to be wasted Niggas know I'm the one, like I chose the red pill in the Matrix Hip hop I can save it, with one hot verse at a time I'm so dirty, I don't even have to curse when I rhyme Ahead of my time, like Leonardo Da Vinci So many punchlines, you start to flinch B Will fight for every inch, prepared to go the distance I'm a force in this game, be aware of my existence Chorus: I rhyme so incredibly, spit lines you can cherish My lyrics have longevity, they will never perish Rap about succeeding, rather than a nigga bleeding Before I proceed 'n, wake up and stop sleeping Outro: In this game of life, I wasn't dealt an ace But I'm a champion, all I need is a belt around my waist Excel right out the gates, keep climbin up the ladder But these new rappers think that rhyming doesn't matter Do I dumb down my lyrics to deepen my pockets Or do I stand tall amongst my competition, like Yao Ming on the Rockets You be doin nothing, while gettin signed is my plans You rockin multiple watches, there's too much time on your hands I rhyme for my fans, every rap is immersed in knowledge B Commit crimes if you can, call that reverse psychology There are variety of rappers, in need of extensive training While I continue to rise, like the price of an expensive painting Ready for your attack, my defense is waiting Your entitled to your opinion, I don't take offense to hating Gives me incentive, to prove your wrong and mistaken Hoping that with this song, you are finally awakened [Good Morning. This is your wake up call. My name is DX and I'm Out. ] __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

09-14-2007, 10:18 PM	#2
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,784 Repped: 193 Repped 1,685 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	wat yawl think __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

09-14-2007, 10:22 PM	#3
SaF HeaT HeaT IIRipZzII Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: P-noCc(kiLLa Qu33nZ)nYc Posts: 1,526 Repped: 139 Repped 241 Times in 88 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	its tight check mine out real quick ya digg __________________ Niggas fantasize about killin me u can see it in dey eyes / if u even dream bout beatin heat, juss wake up, apologize

09-15-2007, 01:53 AM	#4
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,784 Repped: 193 Repped 1,685 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	thxx yo - gimme feed on this __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

09-16-2007, 03:47 PM	#6
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,784 Repped: 193 Repped 1,685 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	some dude copped my title and concept -smh __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

09-16-2007, 04:45 PM	#7
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,688 Repped: 361 Repped 675 Times in 169 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 16 Posts	good shit flow was on point and vocab was like dat

09-16-2007, 05:52 PM	#8
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,784 Repped: 193 Repped 1,685 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	appreciate it homie __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

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09-17-2007, 12:13 AM	#10
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,784 Repped: 193 Repped 1,685 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	appreciate it man __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

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09-19-2007, 06:45 AM	#13
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,784 Repped: 193 Repped 1,685 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	appreciate the feed yawl __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

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MiSsSs CaSsSidy Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: storrs Posts: 10 Repped: 0 Repped 3 Times in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	vocab was amaazing dude we need to collab sometime 6.5. u probably my science teacher some of the lines had me like huh then near the end of it im liek oh i know what u saying its a tricky rhyme style u got with basic and voca then both together also very dangerous one pleaseeeeeee leave a feed on my drop

09-20-2007, 07:31 PM	#15
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,784 Repped: 193 Repped 1,685 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	ha appreciate it yawl __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

10-11-2007, 07:31 PM	#16
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,784 Repped: 193 Repped 1,685 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	WAke Up and Stop Sleeping yawl __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

10-13-2007, 01:47 AM	#17
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,784 Repped: 193 Repped 1,685 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	In the eye of the storm, sorrounded by torrential stupidy But I was born to make a difference, my potential's infinity __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

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