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Old 07-15-2007, 07:49 PM   #1
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Dispose Ya Limbs Then Consolidate, Leave Your Insides Out Like Exposing The Fake..
I'm A Diabolical Snake...Yous A Small Kid, I ROB BIG...Like Dyrdek Taking Black's Cake..!!
The Lyrics Are Fit, For Diabolical Assassin Effected By God, Sharply Tuned By Mucus Spit..
The Wisdom I Spit, Will Leave Ya Shaken & Shit..Destiny Was Sent, Ima Vet Who Refuses To Be Dent..
Your Pale In The Shade, Got It Made?? Nah, Giving Money To Your Clock Cause Your Time Is Paid..
Lyrics Sharp Like A Blade! Im The Inconvient Truth Spitting In The Booth..As The Al Gore Of Our Decade..
Your Stuck In Misery Deliberatly, Thinking What Status Complexes He??, Aint No Replicabilities..
Nigga My Complexibility, Which Delievers Thee, Complicatedly, It's Like I Got Fissionabilities.!!
I've Been Elite & Not On Purpose, It's Been Fit For Me To Murder This, I'm Focused..
On Fire Cause I've Been Spitting In The Devils Furnace, Make You Learn This Like Wordsmith..!!
Get Major Laid & Major Paid...I Consecrate Major Weight, Gotta Cool Off Let Me Sit In The Shade..
I Can't Fade... Comprehend I Make You Grime..Like You Giving Oral Sex To A Razor-Blade..!!!!
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Old 07-15-2007, 07:53 PM   #2
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dude..this is fuckin wack
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Old 07-15-2007, 07:54 PM   #3
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.......smh.......yeah........
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Old 07-15-2007, 08:00 PM   #4
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.......smh.......yeah........
im glad yu agree.......now stop
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Old 07-15-2007, 08:01 PM   #5
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if im wack then why keep coming into my thread.......

fuckouttahere son.....
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to let yu kno that yu are.....cuz obviously yu got a habit of thinkin every rhyme yu write is dope....
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^lol u used 2 be exactly the same
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lol that was different....my shit was ill
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Old 07-15-2007, 08:11 PM   #9
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.....Jesus son, go get laid or somethin......your fuckin pathetic....
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Old 07-15-2007, 08:28 PM   #10
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Damn Who He??, Leave U Spreaded Like A Canopy, Empty Except For A Laughable Avalibility..
My Ability That Complexes Me..I "Charge You Up", Then "Drop It", Like A Weak-Ass Battery [Get It???]
^the wordplay was blah, why would u "charge" some1 up then "drop" them...n in the first line it seems like ur just throwing stuff together

First of all....if you actually could comprehend something....im talking about Charging you up...in legal & electric form son....dropping it means dropping the power in the battery & the charges...& then weak-ass-battery should explain, i just didnt think you was a fucking retard..

I Can't Lie, Half This Board Is Straight Ass..So It's Time & I Can't Let Ya Lyrics Fly..
Bustin 'Till Ya Body Fries.. A Stormtrooper Born Super.. Young George Lucas Who Can't Die..
^i dont get where George Lucas comes into play

Once again, I would think you werent a fucking idiot.....George Lucas was the director of Star Wars....Stormtroopers.....thats how George Lucas comes into play, dumbass

Displace All Of You, Lyrics Historical & Formed True, Words That Unpridictably Determine The Death Of Who?..
Get You Woozie Like You Smoked A Bowl Of Meth Or Two, Mythical..I Grant Down The Fortune..
^i dont like the simile u used...n u grant down the fortune?? ummm ok

Fortune is a force that determines events....im granting down this to you lesser MC's......smh....

Who You Facing?, Your Paitently Waitin' For This Mastermine To Strike With Great Anticipation..
Push U Back Like Constipation, Imma SICKO With A Sick Flow...The Michael Moore Of Generation..!!
^in line 1 im guessing u meant masterminD...n once again im not feeling the "Constipation" simile, it was worded horribly n it doesnt make sense...also, there is already a Michael Moore "of (THIS) Generation" so that completely ruins the line

Master MIND...i htink every1 knows what i mean...dumbass....to throw down these lines you basically didnt use anything......push you back like constipation wasnt meant for a fucking huge ass simile you fucking ass wipe....

How You Fuckin' Wit Me When I Ain't Even Drop Yet?? Lyrical, Diabolical, Horological, Mobb-Set..
Style That Defines This Prospect!?!? EFFECT - Selfowned Reaper That Abolishes Energetic Objects..!!
^once again, it seems like shit is just being throw together...n "EFFECT" defines you??

How am I throwing things together....."How You Fuckin' Wit Me When I Ain't Even Drop Yet"......then im saying ima Lyrical Diabolical Horological Mobb-Set.....makes since 2 me...fucking idiot....???

& NOOOO EFFECT DOESNT DEFINE ME.......if you actually look at it...im saying my style defines this prospect (me...im a prospect because im not in a crew).......then im STATING....IM "EFFFECT".... then I define myself......


overall: i wasnt feeling this one bit(no hate, just the truth)...there was too much self hype, n too much shit just throw in there...ALOT of stuff that made no sense(but i knew wat u meant), so work on ur wording...n u need to work on ur overall knowledge, cuz alot of the stuff u said made u seem hella stupid

overall: your a fucking dumb ass nigga...that doesnt no how to read & doesnt know anything.......OVERALL your threatened by me so you gotta try to bash me down.....when really, your shit...(which i just read)....isnt superior to mine...
rooofl and thats comin from a nigga who spend their time writin wack shit....and THINKS someone is threatened by their wackness
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