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07-14-2007, 11:37 PM
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No Need For A Fuckin' Introduction!! [CHECK IT/LEAVE FEED/GIVE OPINIONS!!]
Shoot Or Get Shot Nigga..........Niggaz Ain't Shit..!! Yo..Yo!
Damn Who He??, Leave U Spreaded Like A Canopy, Empty Except For A Laughable Avalibility.. My Ability That Complexes Me..I "Charge You Up", Then "Drop It", Like A Weak-Ass Battery [Get It???] I Can't Lie, Half This Board Is Straight Ass..So It's Time & I Can't Let Ya Lyrics Fly.. Bustin 'Till Ya Body Fries.. A Stormtrooper Born Super.. Young George Lucas Who Can't Die.. Displace All Of You, Lyrics Historical & Formed True, Words That Unpridictably Determine The Death Of Who?.. Get You Woozie Like You Smoked A Bowl Of Meth Or Two, Mythical..I Grant Down The Fortune.. Who You Facing?, Your Paitently Waitin' For This Mastermine To Strike With Great Anticipation.. Push U Back Like Constipation, Imma SICKO With A Sick Flow...The Michael Moore Of Generation..!! How You Fuckin' Wit Me When I Ain't Even Drop Yet?? Lyrical, Diabolical, Horological, Mobb-Set.. Style That Defines This Prospect!?!? EFFECT - Selfowned Reaper That Abolishes Energetic Objects..!! & Thats What It Is Nigga..!!
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07-14-2007, 11:48 PM
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07-14-2007, 11:50 PM
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07-14-2007, 11:52 PM
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yo dawg u talk about my lyrics and say it was hott but 4 real man u gott fix the way u write your lyrics dawg a lil diffrent it look like paragraph man just helpin u out homie
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07-14-2007, 11:54 PM
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how the hell you say its in a paragraph???
See thats the difference with some of you wack niggaz on this board...u dont kno nothing. If you actually "READ" the lines....it has great flow....i have multies like a mutha fucka.... The flow is sick son.......4real.
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07-15-2007, 12:00 AM
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Not bad, coulda used an introducion tho
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07-15-2007, 12:03 AM
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hahaha, aite good looking.
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07-15-2007, 12:24 AM
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It Was Alright....Leave Feed On "Dreams" for me.....8/10
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07-15-2007, 12:27 AM
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Aite i got you.....good looking on the feed.
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07-15-2007, 01:12 AM
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i thought it was really good actually.
i liked the flow, and the punches. some good multies too.
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07-15-2007, 04:34 AM
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Good looking killa cam....thanks for some real feed & actually looking at it....
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07-15-2007, 03:17 PM
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Upppppppinnnnnngggg
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07-15-2007, 05:33 PM
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Upping this shit..!!
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07-15-2007, 05:46 PM
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this was very solid...ight punches...lots of internal rhymes...not multies though...good flow but i doubt this would work for an audio...lines be way to long ya dig..
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07-15-2007, 05:51 PM
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If you read it...the lines are long, but the flow is very consistent. The multies keep the flow consistent throughout the free...
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07-15-2007, 06:22 PM
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Damn Who He??, Leave U Spreaded Like A Canopy, Empty Except For A Laughable Avalibility..
My Ability That Complexes Me..I "Charge You Up", Then "Drop It", Like A Weak-Ass Battery [Get It???] ^the wordplay was blah, why would u "charge" some1 up then "drop" them...n in the first line it seems like ur just throwing stuff together I Can't Lie, Half This Board Is Straight Ass..So It's Time & I Can't Let Ya Lyrics Fly.. Bustin 'Till Ya Body Fries.. A Stormtrooper Born Super.. Young George Lucas Who Can't Die.. ^i dont get where George Lucas comes into play Displace All Of You, Lyrics Historical & Formed True, Words That Unpridictably Determine The Death Of Who?.. Get You Woozie Like You Smoked A Bowl Of Meth Or Two, Mythical..I Grant Down The Fortune.. ^i dont like the simile u used...n u grant down the fortune?? ummm ok Who You Facing?, Your Paitently Waitin' For This Mastermine To Strike With Great Anticipation.. Push U Back Like Constipation, Imma SICKO With A Sick Flow...The Michael Moore Of Generation..!! ^in line 1 im guessing u meant masterminD...n once again im not feeling the "Constipation" simile, it was worded horribly n it doesnt make sense...also, there is already a Michael Moore "of (THIS) Generation" so that completely ruins the line How You Fuckin' Wit Me When I Ain't Even Drop Yet?? Lyrical, Diabolical, Horological, Mobb-Set.. Style That Defines This Prospect!?!? EFFECT - Selfowned Reaper That Abolishes Energetic Objects..!! ^once again, it seems like shit is just being throw together...n "EFFECT" defines you?? overall: i wasnt feeling this one bit(no hate, just the truth)...there was too much self hype, n too much shit just throw in there...ALOT of stuff that made no sense(but i knew wat u meant), so work on ur wording...n u need to work on ur overall knowledge, cuz alot of the stuff u said made u seem hella stupid
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07-15-2007, 06:54 PM
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Ya a bunch of females that can grow dicks
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07-15-2007, 07:08 PM
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Damn Who He??, Leave U Spreaded Like A Canopy, Empty Except For A Laughable Avalibility..
My Ability That Complexes Me..I "Charge You Up", Then "Drop It", Like A Weak-Ass Battery [Get It???] ^the wordplay was blah, why would u "charge" some1 up then "drop" them...n in the first line it seems like ur just throwing stuff together First of all....if you actually could comprehend something....im talking about Charging you up...in legal & electric form son....dropping it means dropping the power in the battery & the charges...& then weak-ass-battery should explain, i just didnt think you was a fucking retard.. I Can't Lie, Half This Board Is Straight Ass..So It's Time & I Can't Let Ya Lyrics Fly.. Bustin 'Till Ya Body Fries.. A Stormtrooper Born Super.. Young George Lucas Who Can't Die.. ^i dont get where George Lucas comes into play Once again, I would think you werent a fucking idiot.....George Lucas was the director of Star Wars....Stormtroopers.....thats how George Lucas comes into play, dumbass Displace All Of You, Lyrics Historical & Formed True, Words That Unpridictably Determine The Death Of Who?.. Get You Woozie Like You Smoked A Bowl Of Meth Or Two, Mythical..I Grant Down The Fortune.. ^i dont like the simile u used...n u grant down the fortune?? ummm ok Fortune is a force that determines events....im granting down this to you lesser MC's......smh.... Who You Facing?, Your Paitently Waitin' For This Mastermine To Strike With Great Anticipation.. Push U Back Like Constipation, Imma SICKO With A Sick Flow...The Michael Moore Of Generation..!! ^in line 1 im guessing u meant masterminD...n once again im not feeling the "Constipation" simile, it was worded horribly n it doesnt make sense...also, there is already a Michael Moore "of (THIS) Generation" so that completely ruins the line Master MIND...i htink every1 knows what i mean...dumbass....to throw down these lines you basically didnt use anything......push you back like constipation wasnt meant for a fucking huge ass simile you fucking ass wipe.... How You Fuckin' Wit Me When I Ain't Even Drop Yet?? Lyrical, Diabolical, Horological, Mobb-Set.. Style That Defines This Prospect!?!? EFFECT - Selfowned Reaper That Abolishes Energetic Objects..!! ^once again, it seems like shit is just being throw together...n "EFFECT" defines you?? How am I throwing things together....."How You Fuckin' Wit Me When I Ain't Even Drop Yet"......then im saying ima Lyrical Diabolical Horological Mobb-Set.....makes since 2 me...fucking idiot....??? & NOOOO EFFECT DOESNT DEFINE ME.......if you actually look at it...im saying my style defines this prospect (me...im a prospect because im not in a crew).......then im STATING....IM "EFFFECT".... then I define myself...... overall: i wasnt feeling this one bit(no hate, just the truth)...there was too much self hype, n too much shit just throw in there...ALOT of stuff that made no sense(but i knew wat u meant), so work on ur wording...n u need to work on ur overall knowledge, cuz alot of the stuff u said made u seem hella stupid overall: your a fucking dumb ass nigga...that doesnt no how to read & doesnt know anything.......OVERALL your threatened by me so you gotta try to bash me down.....when really, your shit...(which i just read)....isnt superior to mine...
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07-15-2007, 07:15 PM
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menace>>>this board ....he knows what he's talkin about....check up on his shit....take some critism also...people have been generous enough to leave feed that didnt have to...tryin to help u out a bit..then u get offended
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07-15-2007, 07:19 PM
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No I dont get offended when people try to help out.....
But menace ain't helping out, & if you saying he knows more than the whole board then why dont he comprehend this... I aint even mad tho......its w/e......
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07-15-2007, 07:40 PM
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Son.......set it up & ill murk you.
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07-15-2007, 07:42 PM
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i would say i can do a piece like this in my sleep, but then i'd be implying that im wack, n i dnt wanna do that...n i got bigger battles(waiting 4 SMG 2 set up my battle on this site n a $$$ tourny on another)...but when those r done, ill glady rip u a new vagina
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07-15-2007, 07:45 PM
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So your saying..........
You could write what I right, in your sleep.....but you wont battle me cause you have bigger battles.......like waiting for some nigga.... Then nigga, if you could murk me so bad, then why dont you set it up & murk me by 2nite.......should take so long to write "10 lines".......ya dig????
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