Dreams Ft. +++Komplex+++

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-14-2007, 03:39 AM

~Pistol~
...Before I Sleep....I Pray To Tha Lord....My Soul To Keep...
...But Ima Raise Hell, Until My Casket Hole To Deep....
...Die Sooner Or Later, Heaven Is Close With Good Behavior..
...God Is My Dreams, Jesus Even Called Me Savior....
...Life Is So Unreal, Vision Turns Black As Night....
...Isn't That Nice?....Look What God Had To Sacrifice...
...I Wouldn't Take Back The Drugs I Did Sell...
...I Hope Hip Hop Get Well, Cuz I'm Still Reminiscing On Big L...
...Why Can't Our ~Generation~ Afford The ~Medication~...
...Mind Is High, ~Levitation~, Im The Best, ~Revelation~...
...I Don't Rely On Anyone, I Don't Care For Sentiments...
...I Rely On Lyrics In My Mind, Its My Lyrical Intelligence....
...Wouldn't Turn My Back...,...As Bad As To Betray Seems....
...I Coulnd't Let My Raps Simply Turn To Day Dreams...
...Im Evident In The Game, Ima Dead The Presidents...
....I'm God In Tha Flesh, I'm The Truth, The Evidence...
...Rooks Aint Relevant, Get In Line Cuz The Haters'll Cut Ya...
...Follow In The Veterans Footprints, Help Us Build The Structure....

+++Komplex+++
My life’s destined for glory, I’ll pass every single test set b4 me
Reach the pinnacle of satisfaction, b4 death ends my story
Dreams fulfilled, financial success will make my cream build
Me in a King’s position, while opposition suffers, God’s foreseen will
Strong & logical, I’ll remain so for as long as possible
Colossal hurdles to other men, for me? Not even an obstacle
Past pain made me viciously eager for fast gain
But one day, I’ll say, I stepped to the plate when my task came
My vast reign, will extend until the hour of my demise
Throughout life watch my power rise, a phenomenon cowards despise
I tower above these guys, who throw rocks at the throne
U not in my zone, don’t make me send a shot to ya dome
Murderous for reasons, territories that I’m purposely seizin
My life getting in position, flowing in perfect cohesion
I’ll go far with the divine dominant one on my team
A humble teen, I have long path to run with my dream

Komplex Wouldn't Let Me Yell "Dreams".....

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-14-2007, 12:26 PM

Upppin......FEEED!

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-14-2007, 03:42 PM

Up Up Up And Away..........

TheHoodKid · 07-14-2007, 06:28 PM

shit was hott komplex was fire yo good shit

...The Effect... · 07-15-2007, 12:26 AM

shit was good.....both did ya thing....

7.5/10

Komplex · 07-15-2007, 02:55 AM

good looks Hood Kid, Effect.

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-15-2007, 03:29 AM

Uppin Some More Feed...\

Youngcity415 · 07-15-2007, 11:57 AM

this wus pretty good 8/10

ant. . . · 07-15-2007, 05:15 PM

i liked this
pb did his thing i liek the beginnin ho wit was a prayer the changed it
to ima raise hell til somethin
and komplex his shit was good
i liked the topic of this one would def like to see
another collab from ya both
stay up 8-9/10

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-16-2007, 12:01 AM

Thanks My Nigga....Uppin

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 07-16-2007, 09:37 AM

Both ya'll came hard,but as usual it's kind of hard to shit on Komplex when your doing a collab with him.Nigga like the "Canibus" of the forum.lol

Both of ya'll has a nice flow,good multies

D-Hac · 07-16-2007, 05:05 PM

..I Wouldn't Take Back The Drugs I Did Sell...
...I Hope Hip Hop Get Well, Cuz I'm Still Reminiscing On Big L...
...Why Can't Our ~Generation~ Afford The ~Medication~...
...Mind Is High, ~Levitation~, Im The Best, ~Revelation~...

^ Fav lines from Pistol Banger

My life’s destined for glory, I’ll pass every single test set b4 me
Reach the pinnacle of satisfaction, b4 death ends my story
Dreams fulfilled, financial success will make my cream build
Me in a King’s position, while opposition suffers, God’s foreseen will
Strong & logical, I’ll remain so for as long as possible
Colossal hurdles to other men, for me? Not even an obstacle

and

Murderous for reasons, territories that I’m purposely seizin
My life getting in position, flowing in perfect cohesion

^lines that stood out to me from Komplex

I felt Komplex's verse had flow (i know flow isnt too important in text), and multies out the ass. It was nice.

I liked Pistol Banger's a lot, too. It just went together nice and looked like it had some real talk and thought into it. Which is pretty much the whole idea of hip hop.. So yeah.

Stay up both.

scool · 07-16-2007, 05:17 PM

All The Frees Sound The Same..Its Like Southern Hip Hop

D-Hac · 07-16-2007, 05:21 PM

Ay Bay Bay
Ay Bay Bay

Yung MiZfit · 07-16-2007, 10:16 PM

Ok Pistol....Ya Vocab Seemed Force....Substance Wasnt Really There....Some Parts Were Redundant....Wasnt Really Feeling it...Komp...Ya Piece Flowed Nicely....Good Multies....Concept Was Nice....Vocab Was Also Good

Decent Collab.....Kind Of A MisMatch Though

killa_cam · 07-16-2007, 11:02 PM

good shit

fav lines:

pistol banger..

...I Wouldn't Take Back The Drugs I Did Sell...
...I Hope Hip Hop Get Well, Cuz I'm Still Reminiscing On Big L...

...Wouldn't Turn My Back...,...As Bad As To Betray Seems....
...I Coulnd't Let My Raps Simply Turn To Day Dreams...

Komplex....

My life’s destined for glory, I’ll pass every single test set b4 me
Reach the pinnacle of satisfaction, b4 death ends my story

U not in my zone, don’t make me send a shot to ya dome
Murderous for reasons, territories that I’m purposely seizin
My life getting in position, flowing in perfect cohesion
I’ll go far with the divine dominant one on my team
A humble teen, I have long path to run with my dream

this was good, both had some good lines, komplex had some good vocab as usual...lol.....i liked the way you ended it too.

keep it up my dudes.

Komplex · 07-17-2007, 05:47 AM

aite. good lookin out my nigga Cam, J-Souljah, D-Hac n everybody else.

Drunk-N-Munky, I really appreciate the complement homie. good lookin out.

HoodstarSwish · 07-17-2007, 12:34 PM

Everytime i see pistol banger on a freestyle or whatever i gotta see what he spit and you havent not spit fire yet!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Both of yall were fire!

Komplex · 07-17-2007, 10:28 PM

aite Hoodstar.

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-19-2007, 11:45 PM

Upppin Upppppinn

B Dope · 07-20-2007, 12:17 AM

pistol..u had a very solid verse...good to see some concept frees ya dig..u did force a couple multies...ight flow....komplex had some good vocab and tight multies...good flow...again nice to see some diff concepts...both of yall go leave feed in my spit fo rank

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-21-2007, 05:27 PM

Aight Thanks Fam.....upppin

Ladiii MarvolouS · 07-22-2007, 06:08 AM

...Why Can't Our ~Generation~ Afford The ~Medication~...
...Mind Is High, ~Levitation~, Im The Best, ~Revelation~...

^^favorite line from pistol 6/5

Murderous for reasons, territories that I’m purposely seizin
My life getting in position, flowing in perfect cohesion

thhe flow was incredible in that bar fav from komplex ^^

i love how pistol rap

Komplex · 07-22-2007, 06:47 AM

good lookz Ladiii Marvolous.

immortaltech · 07-25-2007, 06:02 PM

that shit was dope hommie keep it up

07-14-2007, 03:39 AM	#1
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Dreams Ft. +++Komplex+++ Dreams Ft. +++Komplex+++ ~Pistol~ ...Before I Sleep....I Pray To Tha Lord....My Soul To Keep... ...But Ima Raise Hell, Until My Casket Hole To Deep.... ...Die Sooner Or Later, Heaven Is Close With Good Behavior.. ...God Is My Dreams, Jesus Even Called Me Savior.... ...Life Is So Unreal, Vision Turns Black As Night.... ...Isn't That Nice?....Look What God Had To Sacrifice... ...I Wouldn't Take Back The Drugs I Did Sell... ...I Hope Hip Hop Get Well, Cuz I'm Still Reminiscing On Big L... ...Why Can't Our ~Generation~ Afford The ~Medication~... ...Mind Is High, ~Levitation~, Im The Best, ~Revelation~... ...I Don't Rely On Anyone, I Don't Care For Sentiments... ...I Rely On Lyrics In My Mind, Its My Lyrical Intelligence.... ...Wouldn't Turn My Back...,...As Bad As To Betray Seems.... ...I Coulnd't Let My Raps Simply Turn To Day Dreams... ...Im Evident In The Game, Ima Dead The Presidents... ....I'm God In Tha Flesh, I'm The Truth, The Evidence... ...Rooks Aint Relevant, Get In Line Cuz The Haters'll Cut Ya... ...Follow In The Veterans Footprints, Help Us Build The Structure.... +++Komplex+++ My life’s destined for glory, I’ll pass every single test set b4 me Reach the pinnacle of satisfaction, b4 death ends my story Dreams fulfilled, financial success will make my cream build Me in a King’s position, while opposition suffers, God’s foreseen will Strong & logical, I’ll remain so for as long as possible Colossal hurdles to other men, for me? Not even an obstacle Past pain made me viciously eager for fast gain But one day, I’ll say, I stepped to the plate when my task came My vast reign, will extend until the hour of my demise Throughout life watch my power rise, a phenomenon cowards despise I tower above these guys, who throw rocks at the throne U not in my zone, don’t make me send a shot to ya dome Murderous for reasons, territories that I’m purposely seizin My life getting in position, flowing in perfect cohesion I’ll go far with the divine dominant one on my team A humble teen, I have long path to run with my dream Komplex Wouldn't Let Me Yell "Dreams"..... __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

07-14-2007, 12:26 PM	#2
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Upppin......FEEED! __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

07-14-2007, 03:42 PM	#3
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Up Up Up And Away.......... __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

07-14-2007, 06:28 PM	#4
TheHoodKid RAP tIL dEATH Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 250 Repped: 12 Repped 20 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	shit was hott komplex was fire yo good shit __________________ Crew Cut Men

07-15-2007, 12:26 AM	#5
...The Effect... Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 100 Repped: 4 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	shit was good.....both did ya thing.... 7.5/10 __________________ !!..I'm From The West Mutha Fucka..!!

07-15-2007, 02:55 AM	#6
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	good looks Hood Kid, Effect. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

07-15-2007, 03:29 AM	#7
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Uppin Some More Feed...\ __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

07-15-2007, 11:57 AM	#8
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this wus pretty good 8/10

07-15-2007, 05:15 PM	#9
ant. . . Veteran Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: California Posts: 1,750 Repped: 3 Repped 64 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i liked this pb did his thing i liek the beginnin ho wit was a prayer the changed it to ima raise hell til somethin and komplex his shit was good i liked the topic of this one would def like to see another collab from ya both stay up 8-9/10 __________________

07-16-2007, 12:01 AM	#10
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Thanks My Nigga....Uppin __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

07-16-2007, 09:37 AM	#11
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Both ya'll came hard,but as usual it's kind of hard to shit on Komplex when your doing a collab with him.Nigga like the "Canibus" of the forum.lol Both of ya'll has a nice flow,good multies __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

07-16-2007, 05:05 PM	#12
D-Hac Banned Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Ohio Posts: 1,642 Repped: 54 Repped 17 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	..I Wouldn't Take Back The Drugs I Did Sell... ...I Hope Hip Hop Get Well, Cuz I'm Still Reminiscing On Big L... ...Why Can't Our ~Generation~ Afford The ~Medication~... ...Mind Is High, ~Levitation~, Im The Best, ~Revelation~... ^ Fav lines from Pistol Banger My life’s destined for glory, I’ll pass every single test set b4 me Reach the pinnacle of satisfaction, b4 death ends my story Dreams fulfilled, financial success will make my cream build Me in a King’s position, while opposition suffers, God’s foreseen will Strong & logical, I’ll remain so for as long as possible Colossal hurdles to other men, for me? Not even an obstacle and Murderous for reasons, territories that I’m purposely seizin My life getting in position, flowing in perfect cohesion ^lines that stood out to me from Komplex I felt Komplex's verse had flow (i know flow isnt too important in text), and multies out the ass. It was nice. I liked Pistol Banger's a lot, too. It just went together nice and looked like it had some real talk and thought into it. Which is pretty much the whole idea of hip hop.. So yeah. Stay up both.

07-16-2007, 05:17 PM	#13
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	All The Frees Sound The Same..Its Like Southern Hip Hop

07-16-2007, 05:21 PM	#14
D-Hac Banned Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Ohio Posts: 1,642 Repped: 54 Repped 17 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ay Bay Bay Ay Bay Bay

07-16-2007, 10:16 PM	#15
Yung MiZfit Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 273 Repped: 0 Repped 9 Times in 6 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ok Pistol....Ya Vocab Seemed Force....Substance Wasnt Really There....Some Parts Were Redundant....Wasnt Really Feeling it...Komp...Ya Piece Flowed Nicely....Good Multies....Concept Was Nice....Vocab Was Also Good Decent Collab.....Kind Of A MisMatch Though

07-16-2007, 11:02 PM	#16
killa_cam Veteran Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 2,890 Repped: 39 Repped 8 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	good shit fav lines: pistol banger.. ...I Wouldn't Take Back The Drugs I Did Sell... ...I Hope Hip Hop Get Well, Cuz I'm Still Reminiscing On Big L... ...Wouldn't Turn My Back...,...As Bad As To Betray Seems.... ...I Coulnd't Let My Raps Simply Turn To Day Dreams... Komplex.... My life’s destined for glory, I’ll pass every single test set b4 me Reach the pinnacle of satisfaction, b4 death ends my story U not in my zone, don’t make me send a shot to ya dome Murderous for reasons, territories that I’m purposely seizin My life getting in position, flowing in perfect cohesion I’ll go far with the divine dominant one on my team A humble teen, I have long path to run with my dream this was good, both had some good lines, komplex had some good vocab as usual...lol.....i liked the way you ended it too. keep it up my dudes. __________________ ghost Free Meta!

07-17-2007, 05:47 AM	#17
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	aite. good lookin out my nigga Cam, J-Souljah, D-Hac n everybody else. Drunk-N-Munky, I really appreciate the complement homie. good lookin out. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

07-17-2007, 12:34 PM	#18
HoodstarSwish Swish! Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Southside VA,VA Posts: 767 Repped: 242 Repped 175 Times in 18 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Everytime i see pistol banger on a freestyle or whatever i gotta see what he spit and you havent not spit fire yet!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Both of yall were fire! __________________ I Get Money, Money I Got, I-I Get It!

07-17-2007, 10:28 PM	#19
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	aite Hoodstar. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

07-19-2007, 11:45 PM	#20
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Upppin Upppppinn __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

07-20-2007, 12:17 AM	#21
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	pistol..u had a very solid verse...good to see some concept frees ya dig..u did force a couple multies...ight flow....komplex had some good vocab and tight multies...good flow...again nice to see some diff concepts...both of yall go leave feed in my spit fo rank

07-21-2007, 05:27 PM	#22
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Aight Thanks Fam.....upppin __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

07-22-2007, 06:08 AM	#23
Ladiii MarvolouS Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 15 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	...Why Can't Our ~Generation~ Afford The ~Medication~... ...Mind Is High, ~Levitation~, Im The Best, ~Revelation~... ^^favorite line from pistol 6/5 Murderous for reasons, territories that I’m purposely seizin My life getting in position, flowing in perfect cohesion thhe flow was incredible in that bar fav from komplex ^^ i love how pistol rap

07-22-2007, 06:47 AM	#24
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	good lookz Ladiii Marvolous. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

07-25-2007, 06:02 PM	#25
immortaltech Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 796 Repped: 257 Repped 14 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	that shit was dope hommie keep it up

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