Bout To Murder This Shit!

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 07-13-2007, 08:17 AM

body mixed with carats,my day job is to split ya cabbage
the cold don't stop the hustle microphone under the winter jacket
spit hospital needles to damage and rip your fabrics
all you get is a R.I.P. and then me flip your ashes
the flow is deadly,thats why i only spit in caskets
diarreah problem with queers,i always shit on faggots
so leave my cage open and leave the haze smoken
wolverine temper so say the wrong thang and leave my rage broken
prepare for war,cause i prepare with a vest and red daggers
and flow retarded i'm the master with the special ed swagger
he no longer relevant so be gone,cause you dead casper
mysterious killer,i'm the one that all the feds after
niggas is tupac,still release shit but they a dead rapper
so i just fuck with singers,for they flow and vocals
make them get on there knees,but haha no proposals
don't spit for the mainstream,i get dough for locals
so whatever you guys been doing i've been maken it worse
you lames is beserk,i'm here now and claming ya turf
raise hell until jesus and satan slapbox for the fate of the earth
in these lyrics i'm staten the curse,staten the curse
i love to eat people for dinner,and rappers is my favorite desert
so i'll get at anyone until they flesh lay in a hearse
hardcore i put the water out with the flame in the verse
so stop talken once i get the lyrical ak and ya murked

ya dig

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 07-13-2007, 11:01 PM

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PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-13-2007, 11:10 PM

Crack Homie.....Pure Crack.........

ya boy Mike · 07-13-2007, 11:14 PM

this shit was nice nigga .....

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 07-13-2007, 11:20 PM

aight propz bruh

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 07-14-2007, 10:38 AM

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Rebel INS {CF} · 07-14-2007, 11:19 AM

here is an example of an actual above par text MC,the rest of u should be taking notes

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 07-14-2007, 08:48 PM

ummmmmmmmm

thank you.

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 07-15-2007, 10:47 AM

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Komplex · 07-15-2007, 05:08 PM

and flow retarded i'm the master with the special ed swagger

lol. funny and clever.

raise hell until jesus and satan slapbox for the fate of the earth

haha.

yo......I liked this. U had some clever lines that kept my attention throughout.

overall..........8 out of 10.

check out Dreams and leave feed fam.

B Dope · 07-15-2007, 05:17 PM

wo...u stepped ya game up a bit brotha....good flow..nice and short lines...that is great for audios....couple witty lines...solid multies...props...

...The Effect... · 07-15-2007, 05:27 PM

This was pretty decent.....pretty well written. Had good flow & good multies....sometimes the flow went off so you could've added a multie to keep it consistent.

But pretty good...will you check out my free, "No need 4 an introduction".....

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 07-15-2007, 09:28 PM

aight thanks for the feed everybody

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 07-16-2007, 06:55 PM

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07-13-2007, 08:17 AM	#1
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Bout To Murder This Shit! Bout To Murder This Shit! body mixed with carats,my day job is to split ya cabbage the cold don't stop the hustle microphone under the winter jacket spit hospital needles to damage and rip your fabrics all you get is a R.I.P. and then me flip your ashes the flow is deadly,thats why i only spit in caskets diarreah problem with queers,i always shit on faggots so leave my cage open and leave the haze smoken wolverine temper so say the wrong thang and leave my rage broken prepare for war,cause i prepare with a vest and red daggers and flow retarded i'm the master with the special ed swagger he no longer relevant so be gone,cause you dead casper mysterious killer,i'm the one that all the feds after niggas is tupac,still release shit but they a dead rapper so i just fuck with singers,for they flow and vocals make them get on there knees,but haha no proposals don't spit for the mainstream,i get dough for locals so whatever you guys been doing i've been maken it worse you lames is beserk,i'm here now and claming ya turf raise hell until jesus and satan slapbox for the fate of the earth in these lyrics i'm staten the curse,staten the curse i love to eat people for dinner,and rappers is my favorite desert so i'll get at anyone until they flesh lay in a hearse hardcore i put the water out with the flame in the verse so stop talken once i get the lyrical ak and ya murked ya dig __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

07-13-2007, 11:01 PM	#2
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	.................. __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

07-13-2007, 11:10 PM	#3
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Crack Homie.....Pure Crack......... __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

07-13-2007, 11:14 PM	#4
ya boy Mike Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: QUEENS Posts: 4,848 Repped: 678 Repped 142 Times in 66 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 15 Posts	this shit was nice nigga ..... __________________ You'll think im spellin' Iverson when the beef all done, cuz I'll leave you on the IV in the ER, SON-40 Cal

07-13-2007, 11:20 PM	#5
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	aight propz bruh __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

07-14-2007, 10:38 AM	#6
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	.......... __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

07-14-2007, 11:19 AM	#7
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 645 Times in 302 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	here is an example of an actual above par text MC,the rest of u should be taking notes __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

07-14-2007, 08:48 PM	#8
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ummmmmmmmm thank you. __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

07-15-2007, 10:47 AM	#9
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	........... __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

07-15-2007, 05:08 PM	#10
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	and flow retarded i'm the master with the special ed swagger lol. funny and clever. raise hell until jesus and satan slapbox for the fate of the earth haha. yo......I liked this. U had some clever lines that kept my attention throughout. overall..........8 out of 10. check out Dreams and leave feed fam. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

07-15-2007, 05:17 PM	#11
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	wo...u stepped ya game up a bit brotha....good flow..nice and short lines...that is great for audios....couple witty lines...solid multies...props...

07-15-2007, 05:27 PM	#12
...The Effect... Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 100 Repped: 4 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	This was pretty decent.....pretty well written. Had good flow & good multies....sometimes the flow went off so you could've added a multie to keep it consistent. But pretty good...will you check out my free, "No need 4 an introduction"..... __________________ !!..I'm From The West Mutha Fucka..!!

07-15-2007, 09:28 PM	#13
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	aight thanks for the feed everybody __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

07-16-2007, 06:55 PM	#14
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	............... __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

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