Quck freestyle

Youngcity415 · 07-12-2007, 11:03 PM

This freestyle wus supposed to be used for a collab but it never happend so im dropping my verse

Look I feel that im underrated prolly even hated//
Drug this flow and leave you HH niggas sedated//
With twin glocks I’ll leave you and death conjugated//
Spit in ya casket and then leave ya grave desecrated//
Sleeping on me is just pure disrespect come at me incorrect//
I’ll line ya team up like suspects and leave dem all wrecked//
Im taking all food im only leaving meat for my nigga banger//
Talk bout how ya a vet on da site but unknown like a stranger//
Why talk about money when your stack be like a Keblir elf’s//
Go Against me why kid you better off squeezing on yourself//
Stop the faking you hardcore rappers aint even that hard//
Shit most of yall crossover quicker than an And one star//
I’m the big dog in rap you still running with them pups//
I Got white like mayo mustard niggas need to ketchup//
I spit sick shit that Jesus wouldn’t even want to quote//
Muthafucka I spit sick like I had vomit in my throat//
Triple threat better believe we the best and don’t forget//
My money got your girl open like pores when ya sweat//

Youngcity415 · 07-13-2007, 01:24 AM

uppinnn 4 feeddd

Youngcity415 · 07-14-2007, 10:39 AM

feeedddd????????????????

Rebel INS {CF} · 07-14-2007, 11:14 AM

.....

ben krazy · 07-14-2007, 01:05 PM

my flows cold/
like winter in alaska/
yo flow country/
like niggas in nebraska/
stop tryin to jack my style/
you a fraud/
only thing im jackin from you /
is yo brawd/
dude verse is fire/
i can admit it/
there are those who dont cut it/
but this nigguh dun did it/.

Youngcity415 · 07-15-2007, 02:26 AM

^^^ ok and rebel INs y u always got sumthin to say

Rebel INS {CF} · 07-15-2007, 08:09 AM

cus i leave feed on some frees ... ur the one always askin for feed and are always like BUMMMP .... BUMMMMMMMP then when u actually get some unbiased feed u complain

Youngcity415 · 07-15-2007, 11:23 AM

No i dont wen ever i get feed i thank the person and i up it im always bumpin cuz niggas on this board dont ever leave feed on good shit not sayin i got the best shit but i noe it dont suck wen demonik broke down the feeed on both of me and bangers collab i thanked him for the honest feed i didnt complain about anything

Rebel INS {CF} · 07-15-2007, 06:01 PM

ur one of the only text 'MCs' ive seen that have got progessivly worse as they went on, u should really think about just stoppin this altogether cus ur really wastin ur time, go write a novel or some shit insted

B Dope · 07-15-2007, 06:38 PM

ight...this was basic shit....wheres the wordplay, punches or multies?...u used a few bigger words but ne one can pic up a dictionairy and do that....its rhymin in multies and havin them make sense and feel like they belong....it was very generic too....real feed

....DeMoNiK.... · 07-15-2007, 07:00 PM

multies,punchlines,complexity,consistent,flow,word play etc.

Incoporate these things in to your drops. I will leave feed later

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-16-2007, 12:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rebel INS {CF}

ur one of the only text 'MCs' ive seen that have got progessivly worse as they went on, u should really think about just stoppin this altogether cus ur really wastin ur time, go write a novel or some shit insted

Sorry City.....HAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAHAHA....LMAO.....

But Naw, It Was Good.....7/10

Youngcity415 · 07-16-2007, 04:02 PM

^^ thanx 4 the feeddd

07-12-2007, 11:03 PM	#1
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Quck freestyle Quck freestyle This freestyle wus supposed to be used for a collab but it never happend so im dropping my verse Look I feel that im underrated prolly even hated// Drug this flow and leave you HH niggas sedated// With twin glocks I’ll leave you and death conjugated// Spit in ya casket and then leave ya grave desecrated// Sleeping on me is just pure disrespect come at me incorrect// I’ll line ya team up like suspects and leave dem all wrecked// Im taking all food im only leaving meat for my nigga banger// Talk bout how ya a vet on da site but unknown like a stranger// Why talk about money when your stack be like a Keblir elf’s// Go Against me why kid you better off squeezing on yourself// Stop the faking you hardcore rappers aint even that hard// Shit most of yall crossover quicker than an And one star// I’m the big dog in rap you still running with them pups// I Got white like mayo mustard niggas need to ketchup// I spit sick shit that Jesus wouldn’t even want to quote// Muthafucka I spit sick like I had vomit in my throat// Triple threat better believe we the best and don’t forget// My money got your girl open like pores when ya sweat//

07-14-2007, 11:14 AM	#4
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 645 Times in 302 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	..... __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

07-15-2007, 08:09 AM	#7
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 645 Times in 302 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	cus i leave feed on some frees ... ur the one always askin for feed and are always like BUMMMP .... BUMMMMMMMP then when u actually get some unbiased feed u complain __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

07-15-2007, 06:01 PM	#9
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 645 Times in 302 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	ur one of the only text 'MCs' ive seen that have got progessivly worse as they went on, u should really think about just stoppin this altogether cus ur really wastin ur time, go write a novel or some shit insted __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

07-15-2007, 07:00 PM	#11
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	multies,punchlines,complexity,consistent,flow,word play etc. Incoporate these things in to your drops. I will leave feed later __________________ RASD

07-13-2007, 01:24 AM	#2
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppinnn 4 feeddd

07-14-2007, 10:39 AM	#3
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	feeedddd????????????????

07-14-2007, 01:05 PM	#5
ben krazy Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: baton rogue ,la(225 jigg city) Posts: 741 Repped: 499 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	my flows cold/ like winter in alaska/ yo flow country/ like niggas in nebraska/ stop tryin to jack my style/ you a fraud/ only thing im jackin from you / is yo brawd/ dude verse is fire/ i can admit it/ there are those who dont cut it/ but this nigguh dun did it/.

07-15-2007, 02:26 AM	#6
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^^ ok and rebel INs y u always got sumthin to say

07-15-2007, 11:23 AM	#8
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	No i dont wen ever i get feed i thank the person and i up it im always bumpin cuz niggas on this board dont ever leave feed on good shit not sayin i got the best shit but i noe it dont suck wen demonik broke down the feeed on both of me and bangers collab i thanked him for the honest feed i didnt complain about anything

07-15-2007, 06:38 PM	#10
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ight...this was basic shit....wheres the wordplay, punches or multies?...u used a few bigger words but ne one can pic up a dictionairy and do that....its rhymin in multies and havin them make sense and feel like they belong....it was very generic too....real feed

07-16-2007, 04:02 PM	#13
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^ thanx 4 the feeddd

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