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Old 07-11-2007, 07:16 PM   #1
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Broken Home....

A TOPICAL PIECE...

drivin ta work i notice i forgot my cell n wallet turn back, pull up my drive, but now im stallin/
cause im askin my self who owns a all orange civic with rims and a kit up on it/
then enter the door callin "hunny im home cause i forgot my money and phone"/
then i here voices and moans as im walkin up the steps and there coming from my room/
so i open the door expecting but still miss believing......
but with no surprise i spy demise daym my wife is up in our bed cheatin!!!!!/
my heart races im bout ta catch a case an,i aint leavin till these 2 r dead n bleedin/
i throw my phone against the wall it smashes, with my mind filled with rage and madness/
i start ta stomp his head into tha mattress, im so 'heated' i could bring this 'house ta ashes'/
after his face is bashed an bruised an he couldnt speak if he wanted too i ask this dude/
was it worth the action cus you know your ass is thru and at this point im laughing too/
cus i snapped into....a madman....now see what ur actions do i said as turned around/
my wife was shaking and crying out loud "please dont hurt me now"...
i grabbed an yelled "i hope it was worth dis clown" an when her arms an legs were bound/
i soaked her down with gasoline till her hair shirt and skirt was drowned/
and walked right out of her life.............as i burnt it down!!!!/
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