Walk With God Ft. Komplex

Lyrical Messiah · 07-11-2007, 01:58 AM

Lyrical Messiah

Igniting Righteous Rhymes, Courageous Gestures to Enlighten Minds
Spending My Precious Nights, Praying To My Lord until Lightning Shines
My Quest For Glory, Is Overshadowed By Spiritual Insignificance
Justified Poetry through Inscriptions So I’m Acknowledged in My Deliverance
My Body Is The Temple Formatted, Throwing Stones Is A Sign Of Ignorance
Side By Side With My Father, Walking Over Water In Lines Of Innocence
I Grew Accustomed To Dark Clouds but Still Derailed By Silhouettes
Memorable Nightmares Are the Tempting Reasons My Soul Feels Regrets
God Gave His Son for a Cause, I Accepted Him Since He Died On That Cross
Now I'm Waiting on My Savior Because He Who Has Forsaken Jesus Is Lost
He Guided Me Through Danger Seen and Un for Seen, Travels And Mercy
Defined My Life Then Turned Grapes to Wine If I Shall Ever Get Thirsty
Had A Share Of Dances With The Devil, Went Through The Trials Of A Rebel
Reminiscing Over Sad Occasions, Eyes Glazing While Tryna Get Settled

Take A Walk With God Komplex

Those who live life recklessly have unhealthy vision
It’s like driving blindfolded, the future fate is collision
The written prophecies of prophets have predicted these times
The mostly blind, lead the people with the greater state-of-minds
Blacks made-to-grind, on that illegal tip....
Only way possible, it’s logical, in order to collect the grip
Amass substantial wealth, the government won’t give financial help
Grab God’s hand for help, in this world where it’s every man for self
Narcissistic individuals, critical of those who put life in perspective
Priorities first, all bullshit cursed, dispersed in effective collectives
True wisdom remains silent, observant to the World’s ways...
Position yourself to easily conquer the peril of these days
With each gaze, try and visualize the essence of beauty
Truly stay wise in ya ways, patience and persistence pays
Thank the Lord for living, it’s a blessing each time U blink
Don’t fall to negative fates, Heaven’s gates are closer than U think

YoungJ · 07-11-2007, 02:11 AM

Quote:

Lyrical Messiah
I Grew Accustomed To Dark Clouds but Still Derailed By Silhouettes
Memorable Nightmares Are the Tempting Reasons My Soul Feels Regrets
He Guided Me Through Danger Seen and Un for Seen, Travels And Mercy
Defined My Life Then Turned Grapes to Wine If I Shall Ever Get Thirsty

Take A Walk With God Komplex
Amass substantial wealth, the government won’t give financial help
Grab God’s hand for help, in this world where it’s every man for self
Narcissistic individuals, critical of those who put life in perspective
Priorities first, all bullshit cursed, dispersed in effective collectives

9/10 Collabo

Those were my favorite lines from yall but both verses were hot all around
came up with a nice topic and just spit that real shit
Messiah came hard with vocab too, shit was nice
Both got deep

-K.P- · 07-11-2007, 09:08 AM

aight..
messiahs shit was cool. the vocab was nice, mixed with the multies. but to me thats the only way its complex...
you need some wordplay or a punch or two in there to hold the reader/listeners attention. the flow was varied, too much vocab in a few lines caused a stretched feel. thats never good. i see you trying imagery but it was a novice attempt at that, practise though.
overall the verse was decent, but not entertaining enough, it didnt get your mind thinking, or have anything that made you go "woah" or "oo" you get me?
komplex, although yor verse had punches, it still lacked creatice ones, taking the "wow" factor away. to be honest, that takes the whole meaning of a punchline away. the flow was ok, the lines were short enough, but were on occasion worded badly. i thought the multies (when used) were cool, but there was always one forced one in there, "man for self" bieng one, simply because the phrase is every an for "him"self. nonetheless, that bar was the best of the lot. your concept was clearer than messiahs. but still, there was nothing hard hitting in there atall. half decent verse. even though boring, i was probably feeling messiahs more. this was like a 5-6/10 overall. and komplex, new diss coming soon.

....DeMoNiK.... · 07-11-2007, 12:26 PM

I was the first to see the diss.I'll leave feed later

-K.P- · 07-11-2007, 12:44 PM

apart from TOP lol^ but there's much more to come stilllll

Komplex · 07-11-2007, 05:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by -K.P-

aight..
messiahs shit was cool. the vocab was nice, mixed with the multies. but to me thats the only way its complex...
you need some wordplay or a punch or two in there to hold the reader/listeners attention. the flow was varied, too much vocab in a few lines caused a stretched feel. thats never good. i see you trying imagery but it was a novice attempt at that, practise though.
overall the verse was decent, but not entertaining enough, it didnt get your mind thinking, or have anything that made you go "woah" or "oo" you get me?
komplex, although yor verse had punches, it still lacked creatice ones, taking the "wow" factor away. to be honest, that takes the whole meaning of a punchline away. the flow was ok, the lines were short enough, but were on occasion worded badly. i thought the multies (when used) were cool, but there was always one forced one in there, "man for self" bieng one, simply because the phrase is every an for "him"self. nonetheless, that bar was the best of the lot. your concept was clearer than messiahs. but still, there was nothing hard hitting in there atall. half decent verse. even though boring, i was probably feeling messiahs more. this was like a 5-6/10 overall. and komplex, new diss coming soon.

wasn't meant to be a punchline/shock value verse. it was one of those real talk verses about life. and lmao at a couple of other statements u made.

Lyrical Messiah · 07-12-2007, 01:27 AM

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ant. . . · 07-12-2007, 01:31 AM

good shit both i enjoyed the read
both did good i liked messiahs the most but
komplex was teh on point too
so ima have to say pretty damn good job
both 9/10
stay up

Kill Yourself · 07-12-2007, 03:00 AM

this was ight...

8/10

....DeMoNiK.... · 07-13-2007, 01:18 AM

I LIKE THIS THREAD . .REALLY GOOD

BUWHAHAHAHAHAHA ITS MINE NOW STAY THE FUCK OUT

BUT REALLY ALL JOKES ASIDE

LethalIsILL · 07-13-2007, 01:22 AM

nice verse komplex good flow as usual keep it up
other dude...

Komplex · 07-13-2007, 05:04 AM

lmao. yall dudez crazy.

good lookz on the feed tho.

Lyrical Messiah · 07-13-2007, 11:13 AM

yall niggas is retarded

-K.P- · 07-13-2007, 11:19 AM

chchchchcheck my shit^

LethalIsILL · 07-13-2007, 11:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lyrical Messiah

yall niggas is retarded

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-K.P- · 07-13-2007, 12:01 PM

yo^check my shit

-SS-12345 · 07-13-2007, 10:17 PM

Damn this was deep ............
Yall had some nice vocab in this
Messiah came real hard wit that
it was a real good concept
Overall yall did awesome lol keep
it up and bring the heat

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-13-2007, 11:44 PM

This Was Different Collab.....Two People Who I Never Thought Would Collab Did....And It Came Out Great.....Plex Verse Was Like Horrible...That Nigga Sucks....Naw Jp.////...It Was Hot....And Same For LM.....Uppin

Lyrical Messiah · 07-13-2007, 11:57 PM

Dude We Collabed Twice Lol

Welcome Back Ft. Lyrical Messiah And Komplex Search It

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-14-2007, 02:10 AM

Well im high on Kush Now,,,,So leave me the fuck alone....****** LOVER

Komplex · 07-14-2007, 01:52 PM

up.................

Komplex · 07-16-2007, 09:50 AM

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Lyrical Messiah · 07-16-2007, 11:06 PM

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Lyrical Messiah · 07-21-2007, 08:04 PM

Uppin.............

Komplex · 07-22-2007, 06:58 AM

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07-11-2007, 01:58 AM	#1
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	Walk With God Ft. Komplex Walk With God Ft. Komplex Lyrical Messiah Igniting Righteous Rhymes, Courageous Gestures to Enlighten Minds Spending My Precious Nights, Praying To My Lord until Lightning Shines My Quest For Glory, Is Overshadowed By Spiritual Insignificance Justified Poetry through Inscriptions So I’m Acknowledged in My Deliverance My Body Is The Temple Formatted, Throwing Stones Is A Sign Of Ignorance Side By Side With My Father, Walking Over Water In Lines Of Innocence I Grew Accustomed To Dark Clouds but Still Derailed By Silhouettes Memorable Nightmares Are the Tempting Reasons My Soul Feels Regrets God Gave His Son for a Cause, I Accepted Him Since He Died On That Cross Now I'm Waiting on My Savior Because He Who Has Forsaken Jesus Is Lost He Guided Me Through Danger Seen and Un for Seen, Travels And Mercy Defined My Life Then Turned Grapes to Wine If I Shall Ever Get Thirsty Had A Share Of Dances With The Devil, Went Through The Trials Of A Rebel Reminiscing Over Sad Occasions, Eyes Glazing While Tryna Get Settled Take A Walk With God Komplex Those who live life recklessly have unhealthy vision It’s like driving blindfolded, the future fate is collision The written prophecies of prophets have predicted these times The mostly blind, lead the people with the greater state-of-minds Blacks made-to-grind, on that illegal tip.... Only way possible, it’s logical, in order to collect the grip Amass substantial wealth, the government won’t give financial help Grab God’s hand for help, in this world where it’s every man for self Narcissistic individuals, critical of those who put life in perspective Priorities first, all bullshit cursed, dispersed in effective collectives True wisdom remains silent, observant to the World’s ways... Position yourself to easily conquer the peril of these days With each gaze, try and visualize the essence of beauty Truly stay wise in ya ways, patience and persistence pays Thank the Lord for living, it’s a blessing each time U blink Don’t fall to negative fates, Heaven’s gates are closer than U think

07-11-2007, 12:26 PM	#4
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I was the first to see the diss.I'll leave feed later __________________ RASD

07-12-2007, 01:31 AM	#8
ant. . . Veteran Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: California Posts: 1,750 Repped: 3 Repped 64 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	good shit both i enjoyed the read both did good i liked messiahs the most but komplex was teh on point too so ima have to say pretty damn good job both 9/10 stay up __________________

07-13-2007, 01:18 AM	#10
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I LIKE THIS THREAD . .REALLY GOOD BUWHAHAHAHAHAHA ITS MINE NOW STAY THE FUCK OUT BUT REALLY ALL JOKES ASIDE __________________ RASD

07-13-2007, 01:22 AM	#11
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,964 Repped: 138 Repped 1,010 Times in 217 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 57 Posts	nice verse komplex good flow as usual keep it up other dude... __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

07-11-2007, 09:08 AM	#3
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	aight.. messiahs shit was cool. the vocab was nice, mixed with the multies. but to me thats the only way its complex... you need some wordplay or a punch or two in there to hold the reader/listeners attention. the flow was varied, too much vocab in a few lines caused a stretched feel. thats never good. i see you trying imagery but it was a novice attempt at that, practise though. overall the verse was decent, but not entertaining enough, it didnt get your mind thinking, or have anything that made you go "woah" or "oo" you get me? komplex, although yor verse had punches, it still lacked creatice ones, taking the "wow" factor away. to be honest, that takes the whole meaning of a punchline away. the flow was ok, the lines were short enough, but were on occasion worded badly. i thought the multies (when used) were cool, but there was always one forced one in there, "man for self" bieng one, simply because the phrase is every an for "him"self. nonetheless, that bar was the best of the lot. your concept was clearer than messiahs. but still, there was nothing hard hitting in there atall. half decent verse. even though boring, i was probably feeling messiahs more. this was like a 5-6/10 overall. and komplex, new diss coming soon.

07-11-2007, 12:44 PM	#5
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	apart from TOP lol^ but there's much more to come stilllll

07-12-2007, 01:27 AM	#7
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	..............................

07-12-2007, 03:00 AM	#9
Kill Yourself Banned Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 87 Repped: 2 Repped 5 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this was ight... 8/10

07-13-2007, 05:04 AM	#12
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	lmao. yall dudez crazy. good lookz on the feed tho. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

07-13-2007, 11:13 AM	#13
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	yall niggas is retarded

07-13-2007, 11:19 AM	#14
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	chchchchcheck my shit^

07-13-2007, 12:01 PM	#16
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yo^check my shit

07-13-2007, 10:17 PM	#17
-SS-12345 ~Grimy~Lyrical~Kingz~ Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 858 Repped: 34 Repped 14 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Damn this was deep ............ Yall had some nice vocab in this Messiah came real hard wit that it was a real good concept Overall yall did awesome lol keep it up and bring the heat __________________ Shud i Come Back Hmm....Ur ChoiCe

07-13-2007, 11:44 PM	#18
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	This Was Different Collab.....Two People Who I Never Thought Would Collab Did....And It Came Out Great.....Plex Verse Was Like Horrible...That Nigga Sucks....Naw Jp.////...It Was Hot....And Same For LM.....Uppin __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

07-13-2007, 11:57 PM	#19
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	Dude We Collabed Twice Lol Welcome Back Ft. Lyrical Messiah And Komplex Search It

07-14-2007, 02:10 AM	#20
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Well im high on Kush Now,,,,So leave me the fuck alone....****** LOVER __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

07-14-2007, 01:52 PM	#21
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	up................. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

07-16-2007, 09:50 AM	#22
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	...................................... __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

07-16-2007, 11:06 PM	#23
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	....................

07-21-2007, 08:04 PM	#24
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	Uppin.............

07-22-2007, 06:58 AM	#25
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	.............................. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

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