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ThA ViiRu5 · 07-11-2007, 01:08 AM

..Never a flashy one, no response to my flirts..
..kicked it in wal-mart sneakers, cargos and a rocket power shirt..
..thick glasses spawned stereotypical classifications..
..no females..while spiritual, God turned down that application..
..i had to rely on wit and charm to get it on..
..wishin on wishin stars and bitch to those who'd listen, no smitten arms..
..around my body, just my lonely sheets at night, cold with no sounds or talking..
..bound by copies and fakes, society never gave me any ground for walking..
..time went by and i was continually sexually frustrated..
..stared consolingly at my reflection..if somebody would just date him..
..the adult's favourite....polite and respectful..of course earned girls gags ..
..nice guys get nowhere, contemplating the move to turn dirtbag..
..3 years..got my first girl, i'm still hearing "goodbye to stress"..
..i had secured the prettiest girl in the grade..jaw open..bewildered at my success..
..no more one-hearted ceremonies..no idea how to act, steppin in uncharted territory..
..i thought i had real feelings..but my stunned heart was very phony..
..the break-up ensued...bounced back instantaneously..
..why wouldn't I? i liked another girl simultaneously..
..the next year came and i dated the best person i've met to date..
..my nerves were on fire, and became worse when we met to date..
..wanna know my feelings...envison from guns to tha blow..
..late night, first kiss under the snow..
..meaningful relationship...i dumped her for the prettier girl..
..we dated for like a month? i miss the old one, stuck in the shittiest world..
..she wont come back, i could bend over my back till i snap my spine..
..if i was to go back in time..
..and tell the nerd where i've come, relay the memories of the days happened..
..he'd stare at me curiously...........

...........andd walk away laughing.

ThA ViiRu5 · 07-12-2007, 12:52 AM

bumpin my thread?

sofis2cated · 07-12-2007, 05:31 AM

Some dope shit my guy!! Always droppin that heat BOZZ!

ThA ViiRu5 · 07-12-2007, 05:37 PM

^^ whats good man? havent seen u in a minute

..and thanks for props

YoungJ · 07-12-2007, 05:54 PM

yea this is some bangin shit.. real talk
dudes shouldn't be sleepin on this man
SMH @ the wal mart sneakers!
lol nah but this was fire

ThA ViiRu5 · 07-12-2007, 06:06 PM

^^ haha thanks man

and dont worry i lost the glasses, the ratty sneakers and the clothes my mom bought me.

check pms J-Prov

-K.P- · 07-12-2007, 07:01 PM

this was nice, i realy liked it. gave an good insight and the imagery was nice. i get bored of this type shit often but i enjoyed this piece. had clear emotion and flowed well, great topical, real shit. liked the story and the way it progressed ect, kept me reading. check my new stuff please.

07-11-2007, 01:08 AM	#1
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	- - - \| The Transformation \| - - - [V] - - - \| The Transformation \| - - - [V] ..Never a flashy one, no response to my flirts.. ..kicked it in wal-mart sneakers, cargos and a rocket power shirt.. ..thick glasses spawned stereotypical classifications.. ..no females..while spiritual, God turned down that application.. ..i had to rely on wit and charm to get it on.. ..wishin on wishin stars and bitch to those who'd listen, no smitten arms.. ..around my body, just my lonely sheets at night, cold with no sounds or talking.. ..bound by copies and fakes, society never gave me any ground for walking.. ..time went by and i was continually sexually frustrated.. ..stared consolingly at my reflection..if somebody would just date him.. ..the adult's favourite....polite and respectful..of course earned girls gags .. ..nice guys get nowhere, contemplating the move to turn dirtbag.. ..3 years..got my first girl, i'm still hearing "goodbye to stress".. ..i had secured the prettiest girl in the grade..jaw open..bewildered at my success.. ..no more one-hearted ceremonies..no idea how to act, steppin in uncharted territory.. ..i thought i had real feelings..but my stunned heart was very phony.. ..the break-up ensued...bounced back instantaneously.. ..why wouldn't I? i liked another girl simultaneously.. ..the next year came and i dated the best person i've met to date.. ..my nerves were on fire, and became worse when we met to date.. ..wanna know my feelings...envison from guns to tha blow.. ..late night, first kiss under the snow.. ..meaningful relationship...i dumped her for the prettier girl.. ..we dated for like a month? i miss the old one, stuck in the shittiest world.. ..she wont come back, i could bend over my back till i snap my spine.. ..if i was to go back in time.. ..and tell the nerd where i've come, relay the memories of the days happened.. ..he'd stare at me curiously........... ...........andd walk away laughing. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

07-12-2007, 12:52 AM	#2
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	bumpin my thread? __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

07-12-2007, 05:37 PM	#4
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	^^ whats good man? havent seen u in a minute ..and thanks for props __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

07-12-2007, 06:06 PM	#6
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	^^ haha thanks man and dont worry i lost the glasses, the ratty sneakers and the clothes my mom bought me. check pms J-Prov __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

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07-12-2007, 05:31 AM	#3
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Some dope shit my guy!! Always droppin that heat BOZZ!

07-12-2007, 05:54 PM	#5
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	yea this is some bangin shit.. real talk dudes shouldn't be sleepin on this man SMH @ the wal mart sneakers! lol nah but this was fire

07-12-2007, 07:01 PM	#7
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this was nice, i realy liked it. gave an good insight and the imagery was nice. i get bored of this type shit often but i enjoyed this piece. had clear emotion and flowed well, great topical, real shit. liked the story and the way it progressed ect, kept me reading. check my new stuff please.