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Young J
Join Date: Jul 2006
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J Prov These cats get high, try an' reach the stars --> Undisputed G'z We Are.. Toppin' ya dopest shit like lacin' coke, Destroy ya tape like VCR's AHEM, to Freeze these bars you'll need negative 4000 degrees for par Please retards.. I'm in the beamer blowing signs ($) like a Visa Card The Gifted Truth, authentic as a Jordan jersey stitched and signed Fuck, a card dealer aint even leavin as many finger prints on nines What? Did Prov lift your mind with all his acid scripts and rhymes..? That stiff ya spine.. Same dude with punches and karate kickin' lines? That's a positive, ya'll negative.. Prov's still that trend setta kid Jam's that make noise will leave you deaf/Def, yea that Vendatta Spit Baretta's gripped, you in a deficit.. prepare for the hardest punch Sky is the Limit.. Well im blowin' clouds like If God Had blunts PUNK Like Vince Carter Dunks, getchya pumped and highlightin' for months Even with ice.. ya fuckin wrist would melt if ya'll tried writin this stuff You'd think I'm high, writin' this stuff.. It's nuts, I got a fetish for crack Compete with me? Forget it, ya wack.. betta pray cuz the predator's back Tha Truth let me make this shit clear Tha Truth is wut u fear so when u see me in the street do like dog signs and beware my skill is foreverlastin call me verbal assassin these niggas starvin on the streets like they was muslims on they fastin the ruger is wut im blastin fake niggas is who im unmaskin im the general not a teacher therefore no more questions u should be askin i get money and more then enough to put food on the table niggas talkin about Truth pussy in the hood thats a fable ya'll niggas want beef its like me vs a fish simply catch em on the hook and devour em like stew out my dish(bowl) this here is lyrical assassination verbal annihilation me and J Prov showin ya the true meaning of affiliation niggas holdin back scared sittin there procrastinatin im top scale unlimited ratin niggas here debatin on whether im wack or not they hatin this gonna get uglier then seals matin these lame niggas is who ima bakin add a cup of career endin blows and call it history in the makin i keep it authentic ya skill is artificial these niggas is pussy u got point em out as an individual as soon as i get the grippin say goodbye ya brain is splittin these niggas is gettin hurt by every line like its was whippin but im heavily armed anxious to explode the baretta i cock back blast then reload tempted to to choke em to provoke em fall back or i'll smoke em or treat em like eggs and yoke (yolk)em these newly born niggas better learn some sense or ill flatten they ass like a pickett fence Undisputed Gz nigga |
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to Freeze these bars you'll need negative 4000 degrees for par
Please retards.. I'm in the beamer blowing signs ($) like a Visa Card that line hot this gonna get uglier then seals matin lmfaooooooooo 10/10
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..:General Truth:...
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damn this crack good job on ya verse Prov
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*~QuIk LiKe SiLvEr~*
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9.5/10......J Prov's Verse Was Insane....Truth U Was Hot 2 My Nigga.....Ayo PeeP My Free
*~HaRsH ReAlItY~*
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I Liked Thsi Both Came Nice
Prov I Would Have To Say HAd Teh Better Verse On this But Both Were Real Good 8/10 Stay up
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bump!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Yo shytz insane.........loved dis collab.(no homo)
J Prov did have da better verse, but Truth u had sum hot points in it 2..... Crack at its finest ya digg..... Overall: 9.5-10/10 hands down ya heard meh.....1
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woooooooo
9.5/10 shit was fire, Truth u stepped ya game up alot on this
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..:General Truth:...
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on the feed
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Young J
Join Date: Jul 2006
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good looks on all the feed
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Young J
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uppin this
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..:General Truth:...
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bumpin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Join Date: Nov 2006
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Didnt like The First Line But Other Than That
Nice Verse Scotty Multies Wording and Flow On Point I Give It A 8/10 |
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great shit man cant wait for our colloabo yo can u get em to me a lil early say tommorow or thursday thanks dawg
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Yeh, i was feelin J Prov's verse more also but both came hot, had some nice punches, Truth's verse just seemed a lil more basic but he still threw in some nice lines that i liked, overall 8/10
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Young J
Join Date: Jul 2006
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good looks on the feed
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The collaboration was alright.
J prov - came with some nice lines when you first started with the line 'These cats get high, try an' reach the stars --> Undisputed G'z We Are..' I think it was a filler. the metaphors were decent not to much complexity but you had the best verse of the collab Truth - you had a long and basic verse . .your lines that stood out were kind of weak not to many hot lines but you elevated somewhat though Get it shawty . .*robot music*
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Man, this was a real good drop man..
J Prov.. your multies and vocabulary are stellar dog. Shit, was cracking together.. but The Truth... it seems like you we're forcing a few lines.. you know.. but it was a nice.. work on your syllables per line for a more even flow homie. |
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Young J
Join Date: Jul 2006
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both yall good lookin
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Young J
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upppin this shit
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Young J
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need more feed on this shit
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***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG
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good shit man
yall killed that shit truth your shit waz hard and j i aint even gotta say shit. this shit waz off the hook 10/10 |
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Young J
Join Date: Jul 2006
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damn good looks on keepin this alive, i just got back
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y0 u goo0d holla at me nikka chek out minez
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Young J
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