Puff Puff Pass..1ST Single

Youngcity415 · 07-08-2007, 02:12 AM

This the first single off that text-tape.......North Meets South Collision Course.......

<Pistol>
Purple Haze, Blunts And Phillies...Watch The Dime Cook
My Mind Is A Maze, You'll Get Lost Readin My Rhyme Book...
Blow The Smoke To God, I Say AMEN! Dutchy....
This Kush Got My Mind Fried Like Kentucky....AhAhAha
I Found Ho's In NY, They Came Wit Me Bent~
Nickles-Dimes, I Aint Talkin Change, This Aint No Fifty Cent....
Only Bitch I Love Is Weed, You Can Say Im After Her....
Cuz Once I Hit That Shit, Itz A Massacre....Ya Dig
Victory Is Haze....Im Lookin Like A Winna, Told Ya....
Me And City Hang Around Trees Like Minnesota.....(TimberWolves)
Ya'll Can Share A Dutch But Don't Crowd Mine....
Smoke This Before I Sleep And Be On Cloud Nine

<Youngcity>
Stress free night me and my nigga banger smokin//
Hittin on dat Kush got both of my lungs choking//
2 Bitches in the back seat and we plan on stroking//
She told me to eat the pussy I told her stop joking//
Puff Puff then Pass keep that Dutch in it’s rotation//
Fuck the war and hit this joint we under one nation//
Higher than a plane I done reach a certain elevation//
Banger N City stay around trees jus like plantations//
Shit I lit it up wit out hesitation blunts for relaxation//
If you new to what we talking here’s the orientation//
Blow the kush in the air disrupt me I wouldn’t dare//
If you fuck up my high then death must be prepared//

This is just a lite single be prepared for the best.....Next Single Triple Threat(Ft Drunk N Munky)

....DeMoNiK.... · 07-08-2007, 02:15 AM

well this is a first,ive ever seen a text tape . .

I'll rate this soon

Youngcity415 · 07-08-2007, 02:50 AM

^^ werd thought we'd bring sumthing new to the board i think we gon do about 10 songs but this is jus the first drop we already put the intro up leave feed on that

Nanse · 07-08-2007, 02:56 AM

whudafxup?

Youngcity415 · 07-08-2007, 03:05 AM

^^^???????????????????????????????

....DeMoNiK.... · 07-08-2007, 04:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Youngcity415

This the first single off that text-tape.......North Meets South Collision Course.......

Code:

<Pistol>
Purple Haze, Blunts And Phillies...Watch The Dime Cook
My Mind Is A Maze, You'll Get Lost Readin My Rhyme Book...

Ok the opening bar wasnt to exciting but
okay start off .. .5/10

Blow The Smoke To God, I Say AMEN! Dutchy....
This Kush Got My Mind Fried Like Kentucky....AhAhAha

The AHAHAHA wasn't really necessary
but fried like kentucky lines played out . .

4/10

I Found Ho's In NY, They Came Wit Me Bent~
Nickles-Dimes, I Aint Talkin Change, This Aint No Fifty Cent....

okay . .one of the better bars but still
up it a little 4.5/10

Only Bitch I Love Is Weed, You Can Say Im After Her....
Cuz Once I Hit That Shit, Itz A Massacre....Ya Dig

:supershocked: wow nah i wasnt feeling this
bar to much to be serious but w/e
3/10

Victory Is Haze....Im Lookin Like A Winna, Told Ya....
Me And City Hang Around Trees Like Minnesota.....(TimberWolves)

probably the most outstood bar of your verse
could have been worded better 5.5/10

Ya'll Can Share A Dutch But Don't Crowd Mine....
Smoke This Before I Sleep And Be On Cloud Nine

weak closer more like a filler. .
3/10

you do the math

<Youngcity>
Stress free night me and my nigga banger smokin//
Hittin on dat Kush got both of my lungs choking//

opening bar was wasn't that impressive either
no disrespect both are going to have to work on that
but 2/10

2 Bitches in the back seat and we plan on stroking//
She told me to eat the pussy I told her stop joking//

didnt stick to the subject . .first weed now
your girl is telling you to eat her out . .wow
2/10

Puff Puff then Pass keep that Dutch in it’s rotation//
Fuck the war and hit this joint we under one nation//

Not much of a better bar but better than
the first few . . step it up a notch
2.5/10

Higher than a plane I done reach a certain elevation//
Banger N City stay around trees jus like plantations//

seems like a recycled bar because he[pistol banger] made
a reference to trees but used wordplay for timberwolves
get more creative 1.5/10

Shit I lit it up wit out hesitation blunts for relaxation//
If you new to what we talking here’s the orientation//

Blow the kush in the air disrupt me I wouldn’t dare//
If you fuck up my high then death must be prepared//

^ those two i'll leave alone
This is just a lite single be prepared for the best.....Next Single Triple Threat(Ft Drunk N Munky)

both of you need to focus on a subject matter that both of you can work with
Pistol banger seems like more of the expert on the kush,weed,piff etc. subject.
it would be better if both could PM eachother verses and tell one another what to work on and reword.In all honesty this should have been held off. Or redrop it later with more effort on it. I hope all goes well with the text-tape I wish the best to both of you will be looking forward to it. 1

North And South Collision

Youngcity415 · 07-08-2007, 12:54 PM

^^^ hmm im giving u rep 4 the fact thats its the most honest feed i have gotten since i been here and yea i can admitt writing bout weed and shit is not my forte i'd rather jus smoke it the next single will be much better

Youngcity415 · 07-08-2007, 12:57 PM

Demonik u shud rate the other drop.....if its hot its hot

....DeMoNiK.... · 07-08-2007, 01:08 PM

^ i will get to it . .let me download these two files
and put some music on . .

Raezr Productions · 07-08-2007, 01:33 PM

text-tape? ROFL!

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-09-2007, 12:50 PM

Upppin More FEED

Rebel INS {CF} · 07-09-2007, 01:38 PM

erm ........... lmfao

Youngcity415 · 07-10-2007, 08:40 AM

upppiiiiinnnnnnn

RodKnee · 07-10-2007, 08:46 AM

Lookin forward to the whole text tape brother. how many singles you droppin before it comes out?

Youngcity415 · 07-11-2007, 12:00 AM

hmm not to sure prolly bout 3 i noe the 2nd single will be comoing out soon

Kill Yourself · 07-12-2007, 04:34 AM

oh lord....."text tape"

LAWL

Youngcity415 · 07-12-2007, 08:41 AM

this idea and text tape have been scraped 4 a new project peep pistols sig dont know wen the first single will re-drop but trust is will be alot better

Rebel INS {CF} · 07-12-2007, 02:14 PM

forget scrapping the idea of a "text tape" what u need to do is scrap the idea of rapping in any way shape or form, ya digg ?

.Verbal Arts. · 07-12-2007, 02:25 PM

Lmfao at text-tape... although i dont hav a mic... & i am tempted to write seriously... *goes to write tracklist & begin writing*

Rebel INS {CF} · 07-12-2007, 02:32 PM

u should have a mic by now u fucca ....... i offically have a new one ! its just not here yet

.Verbal Arts. · 07-12-2007, 02:39 PM

i aint gna b gettin a mic for a while now... heres ma order of importance list

Save for Holiday (august)
Spend all ma money i get after tht on new clothes, gotta b fresh fo college knawmean?
Buy Metoird Prime
Buy Super Smash Bros
Buy Classic Controller
Buy Wifi Adapter
(gaming b4 my future, ya dig?)
Then the Mic, if i havnt forgotten anyfin...

Lil Lay · 07-12-2007, 02:51 PM

How much u selling this text tape for? At the launch party, are you gonna hand out sheets of paper?

Youngcity415 · 07-12-2007, 11:01 PM

^^ yall got jokes lol

Kill Yourself · 07-12-2007, 11:13 PM

Quote:

How much u selling this text tape for? At the launch party, are you gonna hand out sheets of paper?

^OHMYLORDY!!!!

ROFLMAO!!!!!!!

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-13-2007, 12:08 AM

Actually we were gonna do that......AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAH........That Was Funnny Tho...AHAHAHHAHAh

07-08-2007, 02:12 AM	#1
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Puff Puff Pass..1ST Single Puff Puff Pass..1ST Single This the first single off that text-tape.......North Meets South Collision Course....... <Pistol> Purple Haze, Blunts And Phillies...Watch The Dime Cook My Mind Is A Maze, You'll Get Lost Readin My Rhyme Book... Blow The Smoke To God, I Say AMEN! Dutchy.... This Kush Got My Mind Fried Like Kentucky....AhAhAha I Found Ho's In NY, They Came Wit Me Bent~ Nickles-Dimes, I Aint Talkin Change, This Aint No Fifty Cent.... Only Bitch I Love Is Weed, You Can Say Im After Her.... Cuz Once I Hit That Shit, Itz A Massacre....Ya Dig Victory Is Haze....Im Lookin Like A Winna, Told Ya.... Me And City Hang Around Trees Like Minnesota.....(TimberWolves) Ya'll Can Share A Dutch But Don't Crowd Mine.... Smoke This Before I Sleep And Be On Cloud Nine <Youngcity> Stress free night me and my nigga banger smokin// Hittin on dat Kush got both of my lungs choking// 2 Bitches in the back seat and we plan on stroking// She told me to eat the pussy I told her stop joking// Puff Puff then Pass keep that Dutch in it’s rotation// Fuck the war and hit this joint we under one nation// Higher than a plane I done reach a certain elevation// Banger N City stay around trees jus like plantations// Shit I lit it up wit out hesitation blunts for relaxation// If you new to what we talking here’s the orientation// Blow the kush in the air disrupt me I wouldn’t dare// If you fuck up my high then death must be prepared// This is just a lite single be prepared for the best.....Next Single Triple Threat(Ft Drunk N Munky)

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RodKnee Dr. Pussy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Catsville Posts: 2,133 Repped: 710 Repped 364 Times in 202 Posts Neg Reps: 73 Neg Repped at 28 Times in 25 Posts	Lookin forward to the whole text tape brother. how many singles you droppin before it comes out? __________________ Put me in you

07-08-2007, 02:15 AM	#2
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	well this is a first,ive ever seen a text tape . . I'll rate this soon

07-08-2007, 02:50 AM	#3
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^ werd thought we'd bring sumthing new to the board i think we gon do about 10 songs but this is jus the first drop we already put the intro up leave feed on that

07-08-2007, 03:05 AM	#5
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^^???????????????????????????????

07-08-2007, 12:54 PM	#7
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^^ hmm im giving u rep 4 the fact thats its the most honest feed i have gotten since i been here and yea i can admitt writing bout weed and shit is not my forte i'd rather jus smoke it the next single will be much better

07-08-2007, 12:57 PM	#8
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Demonik u shud rate the other drop.....if its hot its hot

07-08-2007, 01:08 PM	#9
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^ i will get to it . .let me download these two files and put some music on . .

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Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Repped: 164 Repped 365 Times in 73 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	text-tape? ROFL!

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Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	upppiiiiinnnnnnn

07-11-2007, 12:00 AM	#15
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	hmm not to sure prolly bout 3 i noe the 2nd single will be comoing out soon

07-12-2007, 04:34 AM	#16
Kill Yourself Banned Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 87 Repped: 2 Repped 5 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	oh lord....."text tape" LAWL

07-12-2007, 08:41 AM	#17
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this idea and text tape have been scraped 4 a new project peep pistols sig dont know wen the first single will re-drop but trust is will be alot better

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Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 645 Times in 302 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	forget scrapping the idea of a "text tape" what u need to do is scrap the idea of rapping in any way shape or form, ya digg ? __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

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.Verbal Arts. .Your Only Problem. Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Manchester Posts: 98 Repped: 0 Repped 13 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Lmfao at text-tape... although i dont hav a mic... & i am tempted to write seriously... goes to write tracklist & begin writing __________________ Afghanistan kids got no time for blingin', get their tongues lashed out of their face just for singin' You think havin' a gat makes a gangsta? that shit's fake, coz' there's youths in Rwanda that been strapped since 8

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Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 645 Times in 302 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	u should have a mic by now u fucca ....... i offically have a new one ! its just not here yet __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

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.Verbal Arts. .Your Only Problem. Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Manchester Posts: 98 Repped: 0 Repped 13 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i aint gna b gettin a mic for a while now... heres ma order of importance list Save for Holiday (august) Spend all ma money i get after tht on new clothes, gotta b fresh fo college knawmean? Buy Metoird Prime Buy Super Smash Bros Buy Classic Controller Buy Wifi Adapter (gaming b4 my future, ya dig?) Then the Mic, if i havnt forgotten anyfin... __________________ Afghanistan kids got no time for blingin', get their tongues lashed out of their face just for singin' You think havin' a gat makes a gangsta? that shit's fake, coz' there's youths in Rwanda that been strapped since 8

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Lil Lay Fallen Angel Join Date: May 2005 Location: Homer Posts: 3,897 Repped: 1 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	How much u selling this text tape for? At the launch party, are you gonna hand out sheets of paper?

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Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^ yall got jokes lol

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