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Old 07-06-2007, 08:50 PM   #1
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This Is The Harsh Reality Of Life In The Hood, Don't Get Caught In The Mix...
U Rarely See A Nigga Doin Good, Feens Do Anything For A Fix...
U Got Gangstas Loadin Up Clips, 44. Knock The Door Off The Hinges...
Addicts Beggin 4 Crystal Rocks, Pregant Women Shootin Up Wit Dirty Syringes... This Is Life In The Hood, Where We Look Up To The Local Suppliers...
I Been Thru The Fire,Kids Wit No Shoes Instead They Hangin on Telephone Wires...
We Don't Carry Books, Instead We Carry Da Heat...
Instead Of Dyin Old We Die In The Streetz, But We Dyin 2 Eat...
I Swear It Aint Fair, That We Livin This Weak...
Instead Of Reachin For Peace, These Niggaz Rather Reach 4 They Piece...
See These Homies Care For The Least, They Only Care For The Feast...
They Rather See U Dead, Before U Try And Preach Ya Beliefs...
This Hood Just Murders Our People, No One To Speak To...
The Home Of Death, Where Life And Suicide Is Equal...
Its Lethal, Everyday I'm Forced 2 Run From The Jakes...
This Is The Only Place Where I Pray For Death Before Wake...

*2 Late*


FEEDBACK WOULD BE MUCH APPRECIATED...
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Old 07-07-2007, 01:34 AM   #2
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Yup...Still Waitin 4 Feedback...

C'MON UPPIN
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Old 07-07-2007, 12:54 PM   #3
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Old 07-07-2007, 08:44 PM   #4
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I like this drop,cause you spoke some real shit bruh.You got straight to the point,and you actually talked like somebody who has been in the hood,and been threw some tough times
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Old 07-08-2007, 11:52 AM   #5
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Old 07-08-2007, 12:09 PM   #6
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This Is The Harsh Reality Of Life In The Hood, Don't Get Caught In The Mix...
U Rarely See A Nigga Doin Good, Feens Do Anything For A Fix...

Opening bar[Intro] could have been worded way better
a little simple and basic. Fiends not feens
2.5/10


U Got Gangstas Loadin Up Clips, 44. Knock The Door Off The Hinges...
Addicts Beggin 4 Crystal Rocks, Pregant Women Shootin Up Wit Dirty
Syringes...

1 of the most forced bars of the drop
Pregnant not pregant . .work on your vocab
work on all catogories so you can incorporate
these type of thing into your drops . work seems rushed
1.5/10


This Is Life In The Hood, Where We Look Up To The Local Suppliers...
I Been Thru The Fire,Kids Wit No Shoes Instead They Hangin on Telephone Wires...

No everybody in the 'hood' looks up to local suppliers
what a pharmacist,corner store workers . .only time i look
up to a 'local supplier' is when i'm asking for a pack of skittles
you tired to get alittle deeper on the 2nd line . .but the first line
took away from it 2.5/10



We Don't Carry Books, Instead We Carry Da Heat...
Instead Of Dyin Old We Die In The Streetz, But We Dyin 2 Eat...

Played bar i hear this in like 85% of reality topics for the hood
not everyone carries guns . . .
could have been worded better the multies were weak
. .but w/e
1.5/10


I Swear It Aint Fair, That We Livin This Weak...
Instead Of Reachin For Peace, These Niggaz Rather Reach 4 They Piece...

second line has been said by many . .get original
1.5/10

See These Homies Care For The Least, They Only Care For The Feast...
They Rather See U Dead, Before U Try And Preach Ya Beliefs...
This Hood Just Murders Our People, No One To Speak To...
The Home Of Death, Where Life And Suicide Is Equal...
Its Lethal, Everyday I'm Forced 2 Run From The Jakes...
This Is The Only Place Where I Pray For Death Before Wake...


^ the rest you decide on
I wasn't feeling this drop to much the originality in your bars
slipped with using old saying or things I've heard from alot
of drops on the topic[of the hood] keep working on it.
maybe its just me maybe im a hater . . but take it how you want
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Old 07-08-2007, 05:31 PM   #7
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I wasn't feeling this drop to much the originality in your bars
slipped with using old saying or things I've heard from alot
of drops on the topic[of the hood] keep working on it.
maybe its just me maybe im a hater . . but take it how you want

Maybe Your A Hater??.....I Think So.....Who Takes The Time To Correct Minor Spelling Errors Like That.....But Anyway


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Old 07-08-2007, 08:39 PM   #8
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Old 07-09-2007, 09:42 PM   #9
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i was feelin this touched on some real true shit 9/10 good drop my nigga
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Old 07-09-2007, 09:50 PM   #10
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i like this shit son 9.5/10
u were speakin on some hood shit here
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Old 07-10-2007, 06:06 PM   #11
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