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Old 07-06-2007, 02:43 AM   #1
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AYOO....Peep this shit...Sneak peak...Text Tape Comin Soon...Banger And City Collab..U Know What It IS!!!!!!!!!!!!

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No Time for warning because these glocks stay warming//
Feel Death Forming when these bullets begin swarming//
No way of gettin on dis level I’ll have ya sitten wit da devil//
Bars is hot like they was coated I guess they were devilled//
Why collide weak foes I just divide hell is where you’ll reside//
Had the board shook ever since me and banger spit and allied//
Spitten till ya no longer exist Pass me ya life death I’ll assist//
Leave your soul in the mist incase pussy niggas try to resist//
Spit hot I could body a fever just call me a lyrical achiever//
You spitting fiction you couldn’t make Ripley A believer//
What Im Packing I’ll make ya crew retreat Banger and I elite//
Slam Ya Face Into the concrete make all your blood excrete//
It dont make sense for me to battle when da throne is my seat//
Make money and than stack it I got mo stock than wall street//
And before you start typing my name I just deflect like a mirror//
What Im really sayin is dat Im da best spit Hi-Def so its clearer//

Banger I Dont Think These Niggas Understand Kill Em

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Ima Spend For Life, Call Me A Soul Spender..
I’ll Have Niggas Shooting At Ya, Like You A Goaltender..
Pistol Banger Right From Peach Tree...
Kush Got Me So High, King Kong Can’t Reach Me..
And I Keep Shells Just Like Where The Beach Be...
Hoes Love My Pockets, But They Trying To Leach Me...
Young City Ride And Move On, I Got Bread Like Cruton’s..
I Don’t Just Hold Guns, I Pull Out Like Futon’s...AhaHah
I Spit Fire, My Lungs Puff Like A Cigarette..
Diamond’d Up, At Night, All You See Is A Silhouette...
And I Keep More Silver Than A Dinner Set...
So Obviously I Got Paper Like A Printer Get...Yessir Yessir


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Old 07-06-2007, 03:01 AM   #2
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Uppppppppiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn...Stop Sleepin!
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Old 07-06-2007, 12:12 PM   #3
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Old 07-06-2007, 03:29 PM   #4
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8.4/10 aiight collab

wanna hear more punchez from YoungCity though, i liked pistol's punchez/metaphors....both of yall stay up
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Yea Upppin More Feed
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Old 07-06-2007, 11:55 PM   #7
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Why collide weak foes I just divide hell is where you’ll reside//
Had the board shook ever since me and banger spit and allied//

Slam Ya Face Into the concrete make all your blood excrete//


I’ll Have Niggas Shooting At Ya, Like You A Goaltender..


I Spit Fire, My Lungs Puff Like A Cigarette..
Diamond’d Up, At Night, All You See Is A Silhouette...



This was hot. yall are 2 different types of MCs but yall complement each other well.
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Old 07-07-2007, 12:20 AM   #8
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ya'll boys creep bruh.Just gonna do a collab and not holla at cha boi,but it's all good.

This was a dope collab mayne
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Old 07-07-2007, 01:00 AM   #9
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Ay No Doubt....Ill Holla Next Time Fam....Upppin
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Old 07-07-2007, 01:06 AM   #10
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this was a good collabo 8.8/10
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Thanks Fam....Keep Feeding Niggaz!
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Old 07-07-2007, 03:13 AM   #12
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thax 4 the feed yall uppinnnn
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Old 07-07-2007, 05:16 AM   #13
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uppin this 4 mo feeed
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Old 07-07-2007, 02:50 PM   #15
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yea i wus short on a title name lol so i jus made sumthing up but fuck the title jus peep the lyrics
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uppin more feed...
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Old 07-08-2007, 01:40 AM   #17
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uppin banger where u at on aim u idle nigga lol
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this was hot, i was really feelin that goaltender line
Young City came with cool lyrics, but needed some punches
Pistol Banger brought some nice punches, shit was good collab
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^^^thanx uppin
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AYOO....Peep this shit...Sneak peak...Text Tape Comin Soon...Banger And City Collab..U Know What It IS!!!!!!!!!!!!

<Youngcity>

No Time for warning because these glocks stay warming//
Feel Death Forming when these bullets begin swarming//

okay . .decent opener for your bar . .
5/10

No way of gettin on dis level I’ll have ya sitten wit da devil//
Bars is hot like they was coated I guess they were devilled//

the bar was alright . .you said 'devilled'
Devilled could be a mechanical device or a(n) evil sprit
who is at enmity with god. so the second line wouldn't
be good . cause your bars are 'hot' well you should get what
im saying

3.5/10

Why collide weak foes I just divide hell is where you’ll reside//
Had the board shook ever since me and banger spit and allied//

multies were decent held this bar since there was no
real metaphor or punch but good 5.5/10

Spitten till ya no longer exist Pass me ya life death I’ll assist//
Leave your soul in the mist incase pussy niggas try to resist//

this was more of a filler to me dont know why . .
the punch you tried to bring out wasn't established
that well . .i see you tried to keep the flow on point
but if you need to make lines longer to add that punch
do it and get back to your flow
3/10


Spit hot I could body a fever just call me a lyrical achiever//
You spitting fiction you couldn’t make Ripley A believer//

Lmao at second line your stepped up in this bar
. .nice to see you thought this line well
even though you have your inconsistencies
in some of your bars you make outstood bars
in most of your drop.

5.5/10


What Im Packing I’ll make ya crew retreat Banger and I elite//
Slam Ya Face Into the concrete make all your blood excrete//

could have been worded better not much i can say
multies were there but decent

4/10

It dont make sense for me to battle when da throne is my seat//
Make money and than stack it I got mo stock than wall street//

okay kind of original . .I had a wall street line before to[not saying you bit]
but mine never made a drop . . could have been a great
bar but need to be worded out alittle better

And before you start typing my name I just deflect like a mirror//
What Im really sayin is dat Im da best spit Hi-Def so its clearer//

kind of a weak ender for the most part . 
but your verse was decent above what most
spit on this board keep stepping up
would like to see more from you

4/10


Banger I Dont Think These Niggas Understand Kill Em


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Ima Spend For Life, Call Me A Soul Spender.. 
I’ll Have Niggas Shooting At Ya, Like You A Goaltender.. 


Goal tender kind of played . .meh opener
could have been better . .4/10


Pistol Banger Right From Peach Tree... 
Kush Got Me So High, King Kong Can’t Reach Me.. 


Okay decent . .5/10


And I Keep Shells Just Like Where The Beach Be... 
Hoes Love My Pockets, But They Trying To Leach Me... 

Leech is the word your looking for.
the bar was weak . . .2.5/10


Young City Ride And Move On, I Got Bread Like Cruton’s.. 
I Don’t Just Hold Guns, I Pull Out Like Futon’s...AhaHah 

I could have sworn cassidy said something similar to this
the bar was alright for the most part maybe your best bar
5/10


I Spit Fire, My Lungs Puff Like A Cigarette.. 
Diamond’d Up, At Night, All You See Is A Silhouette... 



Silhouette is a two-dimensional objects object
it appears dark in a(n) light back ground .. also its the outline
of an object
so that took away from the bar . .
could have been worded better . .

3/10 




And I Keep More Silver Than A Dinner Set... 
So Obviously I Got Paper Like A Printer Get...Yessir Yessir

Played bar . .2.5/10

North And South Collision Course...Coming Soon:gunsmilie: :gunsmilie:

Overview . .

Both styles go together its just the point of fixing eachothers
weak points . .both of you outshined one another on the drops
you both worked . . With PB [having the better verse on puff puff pash]
and young city[taking this one]. . both of you have potential
in this text thing . .hold off some of the drops and work on them
thoroughly. . .be honest with eachother nothing can go wrong
. .this text-tape collaboration will be something new to the board
but I need to see more effort . . . .but nonetheless the best
of the two drops . .keep working

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AYOO....Peep this shit...Sneak peak...Text Tape Comin Soon...Banger And City Collab..U Know What It IS!!!!!!!!!!!!

<Youngcity>

No Time for warning because these glocks stay warming//
Feel Death Forming when these bullets begin swarming//

okay . .decent opener for your bar . .
5/10

No way of gettin on dis level I’ll have ya sitten wit da devil//
Bars is hot like they was coated I guess they were devilled//

the bar was alright . .you said 'devilled'
Devilled could be a mechanical device or a(n) evil sprit
who is at enmity with god. so the second line wouldn't
be good . cause your bars are 'hot' well you should get what
im saying

3.5/10

Why collide weak foes I just divide hell is where you’ll reside//
Had the board shook ever since me and banger spit and allied//

multies were decent held this bar since there was no
real metaphor or punch but good 5.5/10

Spitten till ya no longer exist Pass me ya life death I’ll assist//
Leave your soul in the mist incase pussy niggas try to resist//

this was more of a filler to me dont know why . .
the punch you tried to bring out wasn't established
that well . .i see you tried to keep the flow on point
but if you need to make lines longer to add that punch
do it and get back to your flow
3/10


Spit hot I could body a fever just call me a lyrical achiever//
You spitting fiction you couldn’t make Ripley A believer//

Lmao at second line your stepped up in this bar
. .nice to see you thought this line well
even though you have your inconsistencies
in some of your bars you make outstood bars
in most of your drop.

5.5/10


What Im Packing I’ll make ya crew retreat Banger and I elite//
Slam Ya Face Into the concrete make all your blood excrete//

could have been worded better not much i can say
multies were there but decent

4/10

It dont make sense for me to battle when da throne is my seat//
Make money and than stack it I got mo stock than wall street//

okay kind of original . .I had a wall street line before to[not saying you bit]
but mine never made a drop . . could have been a great
bar but need to be worded out alittle better

And before you start typing my name I just deflect like a mirror//
What Im really sayin is dat Im da best spit Hi-Def so its clearer//

kind of a weak ender for the most part . 
but your verse was decent above what most
spit on this board keep stepping up
would like to see more from you

4/10


Banger I Dont Think These Niggas Understand Kill Em


<Pistol>
Ima Spend For Life, Call Me A Soul Spender.. 
I’ll Have Niggas Shooting At Ya, Like You A Goaltender.. 


Goal tender kind of played . .meh opener
could have been better . .4/10


Pistol Banger Right From Peach Tree... 
Kush Got Me So High, King Kong Can’t Reach Me.. 


Okay decent . .5/10


And I Keep Shells Just Like Where The Beach Be... 
Hoes Love My Pockets, But They Trying To Leach Me... 

Leech is the word your looking for.
the bar was weak . . .2.5/10


Young City Ride And Move On, I Got Bread Like Cruton’s.. 
I Don’t Just Hold Guns, I Pull Out Like Futon’s...AhaHah 

I could have sworn cassidy said something similar to this
the bar was alright for the most part maybe your best bar
5/10


I Spit Fire, My Lungs Puff Like A Cigarette.. 
Diamond’d Up, At Night, All You See Is A Silhouette... 



Silhouette is a two-dimensional objects object
it appears dark in a(n) light back ground .. also its the outline
of an object
so that took away from the bar . .
could have been worded better . .

3/10 




And I Keep More Silver Than A Dinner Set... 
So Obviously I Got Paper Like A Printer Get...Yessir Yessir

Played bar . .2.5/10

North And South Collision Course...Coming Soon:gunsmilie: :gunsmilie:

Overview . .

Both styles go together its just the point of fixing eachothers
weak points . .both of you outshined one another on the drops
you both worked . . With PB [having the better verse on puff puff pash]
and young city[taking this one]. . both of you have potential
in this text thing . .hold off some of the drops and work on them
thoroughly. . .be honest with eachother nothing can go wrong
. .this text-tape collaboration will be something new to the board
but I need to see more effort . . . .but nonetheless the best
of the two drops . .keep working

i dont agree with ya review, ex u gave the goltender line a 4/10 when imo i think that probably was the best punch their....u broke down definitons of Silhouette&Devilled....nigga u aint 10, wats ya real age
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edit: I've heard that goaltender line . .in a couple of boards . .
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