Haters-Subliminal (Diss)

TheHoodKid · 07-05-2007, 02:15 PM

Who the fukk is you niggas ya scripts depiction of innocent victims
Probably an autobiography, fulfill it when this rivalry's finished
I style on gimmicks, undeniably supplyin the business
Your body of work make survival, a buyer's market has it die in a minute
Eager for the kill, stagger for a sec I'll put this fag go to his death
I'll draw heat, just to jump the gun and put a dagger in ya chest
Taggin up the best, bombin a gimmick like action-comdey writtens
you afraid of hood, only rises after all the drama is finished
On the real, you got out the first round to be pounded and turned down
To get to ya skill level, I'd be drillin to I got to Yao Ming's first house
Ya words will depart, they say less is more, you really took it to heart
The bullet will be next, I tried to pen a close match, but butchered ya part
Burnin the crime scene, you better skate, you aint workin the grind G
If punchlines power verses
Your's a 'blackout' like Ocean flicks when Bernie & Don leave
Ya not ready to take crowns, jumpin in shyts creek, belly-flop face down
What the fukk do you expect from Hookl, its best died wit James Brown
I'm spiteful in rap, but your a good act, so its delightful to clap
Bet it hurts that you'll only get noticed, when checkin writers I sliced in my past
Lining an epitath before hand as a sequel to the eulogy in fact
They wanted a shining obituary for ya, but I aint a good enough writer for that

Haterz · 07-05-2007, 02:30 PM

hmmm....where u going with this niggas "im ready 4 war"

Haterz · 07-05-2007, 02:36 PM

didnt get mention so....

u mad????

Witty Qwan · 07-06-2007, 04:42 PM

u get sleeped on^^^^^

TheHoodKid · 07-06-2007, 04:44 PM

yo man i always rep your shit why u talkin smack

Haterz · 07-06-2007, 06:12 PM

is that directed to me or sparks

if me i asked u where u was going with this and u didnt say, so i grew impatient...should edit and put a outro up thier...peace

Witty Qwan · 07-06-2007, 06:18 PM

.................................

TheHoodKid · 07-06-2007, 06:47 PM

na this aint about u homie

Komplex · 07-06-2007, 09:45 PM

verse was actually good.

who was it aimed at?

TheHoodKid · 07-06-2007, 10:49 PM

damn dawg i even forgot who it was bout lol

TheHoodKid · 07-07-2007, 02:04 PM

damn dawg thanks for the thanks props kid

07-05-2007, 02:15 PM	#1
TheHoodKid RAP tIL dEATH Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 250 Repped: 12 Repped 20 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Haters-Subliminal (Diss) Haters-Subliminal (Diss) Who the fukk is you niggas ya scripts depiction of innocent victims Probably an autobiography, fulfill it when this rivalry's finished I style on gimmicks, undeniably supplyin the business Your body of work make survival, a buyer's market has it die in a minute Eager for the kill, stagger for a sec I'll put this fag go to his death I'll draw heat, just to jump the gun and put a dagger in ya chest Taggin up the best, bombin a gimmick like action-comdey writtens you afraid of hood, only rises after all the drama is finished On the real, you got out the first round to be pounded and turned down To get to ya skill level, I'd be drillin to I got to Yao Ming's first house Ya words will depart, they say less is more, you really took it to heart The bullet will be next, I tried to pen a close match, but butchered ya part Burnin the crime scene, you better skate, you aint workin the grind G If punchlines power verses Your's a 'blackout' like Ocean flicks when Bernie & Don leave Ya not ready to take crowns, jumpin in shyts creek, belly-flop face down What the fukk do you expect from Hookl, its best died wit James Brown I'm spiteful in rap, but your a good act, so its delightful to clap Bet it hurts that you'll only get noticed, when checkin writers I sliced in my past Lining an epitath before hand as a sequel to the eulogy in fact They wanted a shining obituary for ya, but I aint a good enough writer for that __________________ Crew Cut Men

07-06-2007, 04:42 PM	#4
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	u get sleeped on^^^^^ __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

07-06-2007, 04:44 PM	#5
TheHoodKid RAP tIL dEATH Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 250 Repped: 12 Repped 20 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yo man i always rep your shit why u talkin smack __________________ Crew Cut Men

07-06-2007, 06:18 PM	#7
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	................................. __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

07-06-2007, 06:47 PM	#8
TheHoodKid RAP tIL dEATH Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 250 Repped: 12 Repped 20 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	na this aint about u homie __________________ Crew Cut Men

07-05-2007, 02:30 PM	#2
Haterz Join Date: May 2007 Location: NY/NC Posts: 729 Repped: 24 Repped 68 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 11 Times in 10 Posts	hmmm....where u going with this niggas "im ready 4 war"

07-05-2007, 02:36 PM	#3
Haterz Join Date: May 2007 Location: NY/NC Posts: 729 Repped: 24 Repped 68 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 11 Times in 10 Posts	didnt get mention so.... u mad????

07-06-2007, 06:12 PM	#6
Haterz Join Date: May 2007 Location: NY/NC Posts: 729 Repped: 24 Repped 68 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 11 Times in 10 Posts	is that directed to me or sparks if me i asked u where u was going with this and u didnt say, so i grew impatient...should edit and put a outro up thier...peace

07-06-2007, 09:45 PM	#9
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	verse was actually good. who was it aimed at? __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

07-06-2007, 10:49 PM	#10
TheHoodKid RAP tIL dEATH Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 250 Repped: 12 Repped 20 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	damn dawg i even forgot who it was bout lol __________________ Crew Cut Men

07-07-2007, 02:04 PM	#11
TheHoodKid RAP tIL dEATH Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 250 Repped: 12 Repped 20 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	damn dawg thanks for the thanks props kid __________________ Crew Cut Men

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