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07-04-2007, 03:33 AM
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The Worst Birthday - 07/04/2007
Let this be a reality check..
We under the assumption we bein' told the truth Government corruption, confronted by America's youth They repetitively, spending tax dollars excessively Lie after lie still we fight this war aggressively Controlled by Republican pirates, fueled by violence Bush still alive yet JFK died for makin' race an alliance Overlookin' the borders, we need to get shit in order His decisions questioned, 30 percent supporters The man we suppose to trust is so distant That we despise his presidential existance Fought for the country, No he only enlisted And if it were '04 our president would be different Now it's our nation's birthday we suppose to be proud Lookin' around, our foundin' fathers roll in the ground Lien' everytime he faces the nation, a better presentation Would be a gift in the form of his resignation ......Open your eyes and realize the truth!! Leave feed or don't either way it's all good.
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07-04-2007, 04:16 AM
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what up bitch..
this was a good drop.. nice vocab.. nice topic flow was on point 'cept for maybe a bar or two rhymes were nice.. multies here and there... overall. 8.5/10 something was missin'.. but it still turned out good |
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07-04-2007, 03:37 PM
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my birthday is tomorrow :) btw i aint readin dis suckah
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07-04-2007, 10:07 PM
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interseting topic. . .although i feel like your content was generic. . .i've heard plenty of pieces with the same info/message. . .i like the fourth of july ''twist'' to it though. . .i'd say just get a little deeper. . .add some personal experiences. . .
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07-04-2007, 10:37 PM
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unless he is America....there is nothing personal he can add
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07-05-2007, 03:07 AM
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Good looks on feed, lol @ me having to be America. (Which is true)
But, from the looks of things, unless a freestyle doesn't have anything to hate on. Then no one is going to leave feedback. Haha..
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07-05-2007, 03:38 AM
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if you want hate feedback holla i got plenty......and ill be fair and hate w/o even reading it
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07-05-2007, 03:53 AM
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Probably the first post that I didn't find funny. :-/ I feel robbed.
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07-05-2007, 04:57 AM
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unlike sum of deez bitch ahhs neegaz.....I READ IT!
i got what yu were trying to put out der..i like how yu jumped into da topic w/o fuckin around...real gangsta shit.....i would have liked for it to be a bit longer.....8 bars just ain't gon do it these days......feel me?.... ..but lets face it....da only way America is going to get any better is by internally fixing itself......when people in congress fight for whats right {for real..not for show}..without da worry of being excuted....... |
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07-05-2007, 10:42 AM
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never going to happen with the state of our nation being about military power and the oil business
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