Perpetual Emnity

start out by sayin, i am a mod and regular over at Ballerstatus.net, just wanted to expand and get ya'll thoughts on some of my stuff and possibly move my way up, etc.

so please check out my freestyle here, leave some feed, and lemme know...peace

think you dead, with how u see the light right next to you //
got bread, my money stack and flip more than a bi-sexual //
step to the kid, and ya record sittin dusty on the next shelf //
im spittin on emo tracks, you can tell by how they cut themself //
never gain rights, you the same dike, aight? i score fights //
you must got eatin contests, in ya time off, practice more bites //
it's time you leave, you aint relevent, im tellin it, listen please //
you aint real no more, got a white sleeve like paper cased CD's //
get to the back of the line, stand, wait, you aint next see //
breathe deep, they have a sigh-on right after tha iron Ex-B //
start thinkin you homeless, cuz in a box you lyin like the XB //
you under me, next ta bury, and im tha best you heard forever //
moved past the dictionary, with all the words i put together //
ya shit aint on time, you need to stop, tha kid can rhyme //
its like internet movies, how i put these quotes on lines //
you can quit wit tha hate checks, cuz tha fake hold bets //
now ya "see K's" in tha case like im sellin a fake rolex // (rolecks)