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Old 06-05-2007, 09:16 PM   #1
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Default The Blueprint For Makin Money

The Blueprint For Makin Money

Stay away from a mind that’s destructive only think productive//
Attract money like lightning I’m callin my pockets conductive//
Don’t Fall For the traps of a bitch stay away from the seductive//
Murder all that get in the way of the money call em obstructive//
I’ll give you the blueprint watch the money copy like reproduction//
But you must protect wats yours build up a team like construction//
You Must eliminate threats trust niggas ain’t out for your best interest//
Take over blocks Destroy spots and leave streets tightly compressed//
Move snow like Plows watch your pockets glow stock jus like Dow//
Trust no one treat niggas just like sour milk there nothing but foul//
Get money and watch niggas try and replicate what they can’t duplicate//
Only imitate if your sleepy with your money den I’ll give you a wake//
Keep your waist warm cuz niggas ain’t hesitant to take the presidents//
But tactics like that will cause me to unload all over your residence//
Keep it official or your family will miss you don’t want any issues//
Keep my money tight like abs and you won’t have to meet pistol//


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Old 06-05-2007, 09:30 PM   #2
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You had a very good concept,and the ryhmes were tight.The flow was a lil streched,maybe if you shorten them lines up then the flow can be perfect,but other than that it was nice
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Old 06-05-2007, 09:32 PM   #3
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Old 06-06-2007, 05:32 PM   #4
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Old 06-06-2007, 07:17 PM   #5
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nice vocab and all that

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Old 06-06-2007, 09:25 PM   #6
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Old 06-10-2007, 01:54 AM   #7
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Old 06-13-2007, 01:30 AM   #8
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Old 06-14-2007, 10:24 AM   #9
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Old 06-14-2007, 10:29 AM   #10
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I think dis waz some aight shit but not too special
Punchlinez were there and da flow waz good
I'd rate it 8/10

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Old 06-14-2007, 11:19 AM   #11
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