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Old 06-05-2007, 08:35 PM   #1
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\a born nemisis....diabolical...thoughtz of a lyricist/
\a physicist....da weight of the world...dey neva hearin this/
\granted subpeona for my demeanor...still they fearin it/
\emotionz n mannerismz...not a single tear in it/
\yes...im still clearing the desk for my inaugaration/
\sent with barz from satan...last breath...i c a martyr hatin/
\all this patience....iz wearin me down to the breakin point/
\i hate 2 point fingaz...it lingerz...dat i juss made a point/
\not here 2 point....out...society or murder victimz/
\how can u ignore the bullet when u heard it hit him/
\so i guess...it suggestz....this iz fur n linen/
\how can u compare us...ur alwayz 2 detered to listen/
\i concur this victim iz da rap game...itz that plain/
\change the story that came before me because of my rap name/
\.....how ever it turnz out......i speak with a firm mouth/
\more then 1...of these sunz...i'll neva burn out/
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Old 07-06-2007, 09:40 PM   #2
 
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Old 07-06-2007, 09:52 PM   #3
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man.........best verse I've seen from u. The opening line was sick.....flow was crazy, good rhyme schemes, vocab....all that. on point. 1.
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Old 07-07-2007, 01:12 AM   #4
 
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Thankz......Niggaz Sleepin Heavy
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Old 07-07-2007, 01:15 AM   #5
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This Was Hot...8/10....Leave Feed On My New Free With YoungCity
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Old 07-07-2007, 01:22 AM   #6
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nice flow str8 vocab
donno y u beefed with "neighborhood" streets
he wack as fuck
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Thankz Nigga....Lol N Who Iz Dat lmao?
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Old 07-07-2007, 02:19 AM   #8
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he goes by lyrical messiah now
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Old 07-07-2007, 02:24 AM   #9
 
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O Dat Bitch Nigga
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Old 07-08-2007, 10:23 PM   #10
 
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Old 07-09-2007, 01:42 AM   #11
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this shit is hot, cant hate on Messiah though G, dont break yaself
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Old 07-21-2007, 08:34 PM   #13
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this is the best i've seen from u also...ight multies and some internal rhymes made the flow good...this should sound good in audio...it lacked ne thing that made u think..wow..though..its a decent drop fa sho though...leave some feed on my free 'flow fever' if ya could
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Old 07-22-2007, 04:19 PM   #14
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Yo how would u like to be my ghost writer?
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