Lyrical Arsenal (SPIT FOR RANK)

B Dope · 06-04-2007, 06:12 PM

The style remains underground but rappin for the gwap//
Gun claps in front of cops, the captain with the glock//
Too many Fake thug Wannabe's actin like there pac//
Slappin cats for the fun of it, faggots want none of it//
I'ma lyrical arsenal, raps packed full of punishment/
Rhymes 'crossin the lines' in these hardcore writings//
As If I drank of fifth of vodka before driving//
Line for line there there isnt a rapper who tops me//
I'm Blowin there shit out the water like a fuckin tsunami//
Always seen with two hotties, strapped with two shotties//
Keep spittin ether till ya whole fuckin crews bodied//
Punchin you assholes in the face till ya cant rhyme//
Have ya watchin ya step like a soldier in a field of land mines//

Remember to Rank me when givin feed

j pr0v · 06-04-2007, 06:31 PM

4/10

some weak punches and basic rhyming
but there were some ight lines, come more consistant
dont say you spit ether.. just spit it, it turns out alot better u know

right now id say lightweight but just trying to give advice, no hate

stay up

B Dope · 06-04-2007, 06:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J Prov

4/10

some weak punches and basic rhyming
but there were some ight lines, come more consistant
dont say you spit ether.. just spit it, it turns out alot better u know

right now id say lightweight but just trying to give advice, no hate

stay up

I disagree cause you said that other guys free was nice but it was way more simple then this...but good looks on feed

Sean Brown · 06-04-2007, 07:07 PM

pretty basic nothing special
what you were trying to attempt i dont know
the multies were meh..flow was alright..
punches meh

baller i would consider do you middleweight from your old drops
but you fell of big time lightweight

B Dope · 06-04-2007, 07:12 PM

hmmm....i must need to highlight my multies then....and yall ratin me light weight means ya sayin im in the same league as people rhymin cat, hat, that, with no multies and played punches

Sean Brown · 06-04-2007, 07:18 PM

baller ima a textcee just like you multi-syllable/multie rhyming was the 1st
technique i learned..
i understand you pointed them out; because i said meh
but meh in my terms is like average

B Dope · 06-04-2007, 07:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ....Concepts....

baller ima a textcee just like you multi-syllable/multie rhyming was the 1st
technique i learned..
i understand you pointed them out; because i said meh
but meh in my terms is like average

well you said meh and the multies and punches....meanin lightweight is average? I showed the punches to a couple vets before postin them and they said they were good.

Sean Brown · 06-04-2007, 07:27 PM

i didnt say meh on lightweight though.. ill tell you what i mean soon

єяіс є · 06-04-2007, 09:00 PM

haha baller is gettin shitted on

Killuminati · 06-04-2007, 10:52 PM

not like eric e the rappin dutch oven^^

anyways baller this wasnt bad...altho it wasnt great either. no need to highlight multies...real mc or "text"cees know them...btw im a little high

punches were aight but they did fit with the flow

however i would suggest that you make up the punch first, then form the bar around it...kinda hard getting used to but in the end it works...flow was good got thrown off in places, try using same syllables per bar starting off then you can branch off...other than that good shit

prolly inter

i will say that this would be better on audio cuz everybody expects a punch a bar on text...

B Dope · 06-04-2007, 10:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Killuminati

not like eric e the rappin dutch oven^^

anyways baller this wasnt bad...altho it wasnt great either. no need to highlight multies...real mc or "text"cees know them...btw im a little high

punches were aight but they did fit with the flow

however i would suggest that you make up the punch first, then form the bar around it...kinda hard getting used to but in the end it works...flow was good got thrown off in places, try using same syllables per bar starting off then you can branch off...other than that good shit

prolly inter

i will say that this would be better on audio cuz everybody expects a punch a bar on text...

Big Props...thanks for the feed

Sean Brown · 06-04-2007, 10:57 PM

^ this was what i was trying to say baller..but
do you..

B Dope · 06-05-2007, 12:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ....Concepts....

^ this was what i was trying to say baller..but
do you..

ight then.....2 mid one light uppin

06-04-2007, 06:12 PM	#1
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Lyrical Arsenal (SPIT FOR RANK) Lyrical Arsenal (SPIT FOR RANK) The style remains underground but rappin for the gwap// Gun claps in front of cops, the captain with the glock// Too many Fake thug Wannabe's actin like there pac// Slappin cats for the fun of it, faggots want none of it// I'ma lyrical arsenal, raps packed full of punishment/ Rhymes 'crossin the lines' in these hardcore writings// As If I drank of fifth of vodka before driving// Line for line there there isnt a rapper who tops me// I'm Blowin there shit out the water like a fuckin tsunami// Always seen with two hotties, strapped with two shotties// Keep spittin ether till ya whole fuckin crews bodied// Punchin you assholes in the face till ya cant rhyme// Have ya watchin ya step like a soldier in a field of land mines// Remember to Rank me when givin feed

06-04-2007, 06:31 PM	#2
j pr0v Stats (1-0) 1 KO Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: CT Posts: 38 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	4/10 some weak punches and basic rhyming but there were some ight lines, come more consistant dont say you spit ether.. just spit it, it turns out alot better u know right now id say lightweight but just trying to give advice, no hate stay up __________________

06-04-2007, 10:52 PM	#10
Killuminati ..........FUHCKA......... Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: You Know What It Is... Posts: 3,522 Repped: 178 Repped 141 Times in 71 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 10 Posts	not like eric e the rappin dutch oven^^ anyways baller this wasnt bad...altho it wasnt great either. no need to highlight multies...real mc or "text"cees know them...btw im a little high punches were aight but they did fit with the flow however i would suggest that you make up the punch first, then form the bar around it...kinda hard getting used to but in the end it works...flow was good got thrown off in places, try using same syllables per bar starting off then you can branch off...other than that good shit prolly inter i will say that this would be better on audio cuz everybody expects a punch a bar on text... __________________

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06-04-2007, 07:07 PM	#4
Sean Brown 2RawForTheStreetz Join Date: May 2007 Location: PHILA,PA Posts: 518 Repped: 22 Repped 23 Times in 14 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	pretty basic nothing special what you were trying to attempt i dont know the multies were meh..flow was alright.. punches meh baller i would consider do you middleweight from your old drops but you fell of big time lightweight

06-04-2007, 07:12 PM	#5
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	hmmm....i must need to highlight my multies then....and yall ratin me light weight means ya sayin im in the same league as people rhymin cat, hat, that, with no multies and played punches

06-04-2007, 07:18 PM	#6
Sean Brown 2RawForTheStreetz Join Date: May 2007 Location: PHILA,PA Posts: 518 Repped: 22 Repped 23 Times in 14 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	baller ima a textcee just like you multi-syllable/multie rhyming was the 1st technique i learned.. i understand you pointed them out; because i said meh but meh in my terms is like average

06-04-2007, 07:27 PM	#8
Sean Brown 2RawForTheStreetz Join Date: May 2007 Location: PHILA,PA Posts: 518 Repped: 22 Repped 23 Times in 14 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i didnt say meh on lightweight though.. ill tell you what i mean soon

06-04-2007, 09:00 PM	#9
єяіс є REPPIN' THE LOX/D-BLOCK Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: On Tha' Block 24/7 Posts: 1,043 Repped: 30 Repped 333 Times in 168 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	haha baller is gettin shitted on

06-04-2007, 10:57 PM	#12
Sean Brown 2RawForTheStreetz Join Date: May 2007 Location: PHILA,PA Posts: 518 Repped: 22 Repped 23 Times in 14 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^ this was what i was trying to say baller..but do you..