NU SHIT, freestyle called how it is

Bounce · 06-03-2007, 09:29 AM

yea

yo yo, straight fireee.................

gangsta......yea......im just somebody that feel like tellin how it is

i see these guys all day, aint they aint reppin NO MORE,
all ya rappers wack, thats some of the truiest shit i say
i see these guys all day, aint they reppin NO MORE,
all ya rappers wack, thats some of the truiest shit i say

yo yo

wen i say enough homie, lil dog i mean enough,
i aint trust ur ass, u the type do get me locked in cuffs,
sittin on the cage, thinkin bout ur mashin ur face,
so thats why im comin back in the game like murda mase,

nah nah, some real tough shit here

wen the suns come out, its like nash in the lane,
and wen ya boy on them curbs, his mum b prayin,
this game aint for playin, u in it for all, or not in it at all,
and how u get that ice, if ya dont kno how to ball,
u standin on the blocks, lil boy be tryin to sell them rocks,
this guy aint street, they stop, step out and he still smilin to the cops,
we i see them belted glocks, u kno im runnin for my life,
im not scared, i just dont wanna get sentenced 25 to life,
thats why i aint look that fly, i got my money locked away,
livin like a poor guy, i just aint put my dough on display,
i learned this kinda shit the hard way, ur homies that betray,
so ya betta leave the club now, before we leave that face diss-aranged

yea

UG homie, feed pls

Tha Truth · 06-03-2007, 11:32 AM

this was good keep workin on ya wordplay and punches ight my nigga 8/10

Bounce · 06-03-2007, 11:43 AM

cheers on the feed man

Witty Qwan · 06-03-2007, 02:37 PM

i see improvement

Famoz · 06-03-2007, 03:23 PM

it was creative. Nice
3/5

..L1EF.. · 06-03-2007, 06:45 PM

Blah, blah, blah, blah...All this tough talk ain't gonna elevate your skills....Creativity does. Honestly, i fell asleep during the 1st verse.

You need to improve on ALOT of things. Hit me up, and i'll hook you up with knowledge. -1-

Bounce · 06-03-2007, 10:05 PM

^^

cheers on feed guys and yea i kno i gotta elevate

06-03-2007, 09:29 AM	#1
Bounce Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 401 Repped: 24 Repped 92 Times in 17 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	NU SHIT, freestyle called how it is NU SHIT, freestyle called how it is yea yo yo, straight fireee................. gangsta......yea......im just somebody that feel like tellin how it is i see these guys all day, aint they aint reppin NO MORE, all ya rappers wack, thats some of the truiest shit i say i see these guys all day, aint they reppin NO MORE, all ya rappers wack, thats some of the truiest shit i say yo yo wen i say enough homie, lil dog i mean enough, i aint trust ur ass, u the type do get me locked in cuffs, sittin on the cage, thinkin bout ur mashin ur face, so thats why im comin back in the game like murda mase, nah nah, some real tough shit here wen the suns come out, its like nash in the lane, and wen ya boy on them curbs, his mum b prayin, this game aint for playin, u in it for all, or not in it at all, and how u get that ice, if ya dont kno how to ball, u standin on the blocks, lil boy be tryin to sell them rocks, this guy aint street, they stop, step out and he still smilin to the cops, we i see them belted glocks, u kno im runnin for my life, im not scared, i just dont wanna get sentenced 25 to life, thats why i aint look that fly, i got my money locked away, livin like a poor guy, i just aint put my dough on display, i learned this kinda shit the hard way, ur homies that betray, so ya betta leave the club now, before we leave that face diss-aranged yea UG homie, feed pls __________________ TO HHB Members Ima expose everyone one of u motherfuckers for who u really are To G-Unit and Game Fans Ya need to realise its not cool bein 25 and still dikridin these niggas

06-03-2007, 11:32 AM	#2
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	this was good keep workin on ya wordplay and punches ight my nigga 8/10 __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

06-03-2007, 11:43 AM	#3
Bounce Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 401 Repped: 24 Repped 92 Times in 17 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	cheers on the feed man __________________ TO HHB Members Ima expose everyone one of u motherfuckers for who u really are To G-Unit and Game Fans Ya need to realise its not cool bein 25 and still dikridin these niggas

06-03-2007, 02:37 PM	#4
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 483 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	i see improvement __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

06-03-2007, 10:05 PM	#7
Bounce Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 401 Repped: 24 Repped 92 Times in 17 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^ cheers on feed guys and yea i kno i gotta elevate __________________ TO HHB Members Ima expose everyone one of u motherfuckers for who u really are To G-Unit and Game Fans Ya need to realise its not cool bein 25 and still dikridin these niggas

06-03-2007, 03:23 PM	#5
Famoz Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 1,548 Repped: 126 Repped 391 Times in 210 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	it was creative. Nice 3/5

06-03-2007, 06:45 PM	#6
..L1EF.. Magus Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: In A Psychic MindFrame Posts: 583 Repped: 34 Repped 83 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Blah, blah, blah, blah...All this tough talk ain't gonna elevate your skills....Creativity does. Honestly, i fell asleep during the 1st verse. You need to improve on ALOT of things. Hit me up, and i'll hook you up with knowledge. -1-

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