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Old 05-04-2007, 02:39 AM   #1
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pointless problems is what they addressin us, fuck callin me a pessimist
they under contract with a foot up they ass like a retarted ventriloquist//
carrying knowledge in our heads? no we have books that are items of trifle
switching on and off periods like a bitch with a fucked up menstrual cycle//
hands of clocks in my vision... my patience is gettin' the best of me
grab the marker of my thoughts and write on the whiteboard of revery//
envisioning the power of my pen, I scribble rhymes soon-to-be testaments
give em a,b,c, and d for four choices of my wrath fueled by their negligence//

what do you guys think? something I just scribbled a little while ago
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Old 05-04-2007, 07:25 AM   #2
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its iigh for a dude who doesnt really make raps that much.....vocab was nice....lines were a lil long but its iigh u made them flow well.....so ya it was pretty good....7.5/10...stay up
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Old 05-04-2007, 09:30 PM   #3
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^ propz fam..

and ya the lines are long cuz I go more with a poetical approach rather than making them fully 'rap compatible'. If I was to spit it... I would edit it a bit and chop it down a little bit.
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