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Old 05-02-2007, 09:54 PM   #1
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God's Heart Sympathises Those With Harsh Demises
And His Hands Feel for Pain Without Plain Disguises
Eyes Watch Upon Those Whose Home They Chose To Flee
While Im Aware of This I Ponder If This Applies To Me

I Wasn't Planning On It To Be Like This, Assistance I Fiend
But Resistance Of The Futile System Caused Thinking To Cease
I Used To Preach Peace, Until Peace Broke Me Down To Pieces
I Was Overwhelmed And Held My Helm Up Toward Jesus
Thought It Was Negligent Of God To Cause So Much Pain
While The Rain Pounded On Me, I Hung My Head in Shame
"How Could He Let Her Pass Away? She Was My Light!"
I Questioned His Judgement Till I Was Too Strung Out To Fight!
Now Overcome By Darkness, I Felt As Alone As I Ever Have
While Clouded Skies Damp Both My Future And Past
He was Spoken Of As If All Knowledge, He Had Mastered
Yet His Presence In Her Heart Couldn't Sway The Final Factor
Her Final Chapter, Occured And Such a Crude Way To End
So Now I Sit, To Conquer The Fact That My Mother Is Dead


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God's Heart Sympathises Those With Harsh Demises
And His Hands Feel for Pain Without Plain Disguises
Eyes Watch Upon Those Whose Home They Chose To Flee
While Im Aware of This I Ponder If This Applies To Me

It Was A Regular Day, I Fought Myself To Keep Piece With Him
A Step Dad, I Questioned My Mom's Sanity, What Did She See In Him?
Nontheless, I Cool My Stress and Keep A Smile Upon My Face
I Complain About The Messy House As I Crawl Beyond The Waste
Beer Bottles Stained The Homey Scent While Laundry was Cluttered
As I Approached Their Room, I Heard Him Raise His Voice To Mother
I Tried To Hold Back, Hoping To Myself This Would End Today
But When His Sillouhette's Arm Raised, His Face I Wished To Grace
I Wrestled The Bottle From His Hand, Pain Was Unfelt To Me
Thought Of It As War, Hoping This Man Would Be A Casualty
As Each Hit Connected, Reality Soon Took Its Place
As I Quit, I Noticed My Mother Showed Pain Upon Her Face
I Lunged Off Him, Rushing to Her Side So I Could Aid Her
Inside, I Struggled To Fight Whether I Dearly Love Or Hate Her
She Spoke To Me Silently, Only Her Blinks Delayed Her Messege
The Thought Of Blaming Her For This, I Strongly Questioned
With That She Ceased Breathing, Her Happiness At A Peak
I Couldn't Hold The Flow Of Tears That Ripped Across My Cheek
And I Thought...

God's Heart Sympathises Those With Harsh Demises
And His Hands Feel for Pain Without Plain Disguises
Eyes Watch Upon Those Whose Home They Chose To Flee
While Im Aware of This I Ponder If This Applies To Me

Hmm.. Only Thing Decent Aye..
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Old 05-02-2007, 09:55 PM   #2
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