...Bum Killa...VOL.1(Only 6 lines)

*Danja* · 05-02-2007, 05:33 PM

...Lightwork...

Listen...

..yea im bak, no guns jus facts...i kno these bitch niggas whole game
all are lames, jus pussies like YOUNGSPARKS.......but im OLD FLAMES
my flow is Co-caine, truthfully Young.....ur bein bitch
but its aite....I CZECH BITCHES...like EUROPEAN CHICKS
now ima sit bak..watch as u try an get bak..its real funny ta me
in order ta be comin at me....u need rap VITAMINS C/SEE..like SUNNY-D

thas all fa now..

Komplex · 05-02-2007, 06:37 PM

but its aite....I CZECH BITCHES...like EUROPEAN CHICKS

aha. Danja still killin it. good to see u back fam.

*Danja* · 05-02-2007, 10:06 PM

nuthin serious jus lettin it be known im here...but good lookin my dude

Witty Qwan · 05-02-2007, 10:27 PM

nigga kill yaself

*Danja* · 05-02-2007, 10:31 PM

lets not get hostile

Witty Qwan · 05-02-2007, 10:32 PM

who the hell is u...lol took a shot at me not worth my attention

Reddi Ree · 05-02-2007, 11:16 PM

Kid wildin

....DeMoNiK.... · 05-02-2007, 11:18 PM

haha..I like that Czech line for sure i like most of it
but it was to short to see your full skills you feel me
stay up Larsin

*Danja* · 05-02-2007, 11:22 PM

i feel u homie...i kno it was short im jus tryna get bak into it

Reddi Ree · 05-02-2007, 11:25 PM

U kno Sparkz

*Danja* · 05-02-2007, 11:27 PM

he's nobody i need ta kno....neither are u

Reddi Ree · 05-02-2007, 11:31 PM

U Niggaz Get So Tough When Yall Get In Front Of Da Computer

*Danja* · 05-03-2007, 10:50 AM

..yea....u right

gunitworld50 · 05-03-2007, 12:39 PM

lol, dont we all...lol

-K.P- · 05-03-2007, 12:43 PM

this was wack as hell.

ant. . . · 05-03-2007, 08:40 PM

i liked that european chicks line
good shit overall

stay up 7/10

Homicidal Thots · 05-03-2007, 08:58 PM

kp still hating, SMH

shady yayo · 05-03-2007, 09:17 PM

your whack

єяіс є · 05-03-2007, 09:19 PM

kp is a hatin euro bastard...

...JuGGerNauT... · 05-03-2007, 09:59 PM

closer was meh...but tha czech line was hot, i liked that...

good shit danja, haven't seen u spit in a while...and holla @ me on aim wheneva i'm on nigga, its been agessssssssss...lol

*Danja* · 05-03-2007, 10:43 PM

Good lookin on da feed....fuck yall on da hate

Shogun · 05-03-2007, 10:56 PM

Eww@the praise for the Czech line.

"I Czech bitches" - doesn't make sense by itself; where one part of a "punch" doesn't make sense, the punch as a whole will, invariably, not make sense.

"I check bitches like European chicks" - the "punch" is meaningless; it's not like "European chicks" or "Czech" women have any notable reputation that elevates the line above nursery level.

As simple wordplay, the Czech/check thing would still be wack, but acceptable; in the form of a "punch", it's wack & not acceptable at all.

*Danja* · 05-03-2007, 10:58 PM

thanks fa tha feed mr. sho

Streets King · 05-04-2007, 03:23 PM

but its aite....I CZECH BITCHES...like EUROPEAN CHICKS

Best Line this is small work keep going ...

Tha Truth · 05-04-2007, 04:00 PM

and u tried to hate on me nigga

05-02-2007, 05:33 PM	#1
Danja Dont Get Mad....Get Swag Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: 2 Up,2 Down..Suffland, VA bitches Posts: 197 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	...Bum Killa...VOL.1(Only 6 lines) ...Bum Killa...VOL.1(Only 6 lines) ...Lightwork... Listen... ..yea im bak, no guns jus facts...i kno these bitch niggas whole game all are lames, jus pussies like YOUNGSPARKS.......but im OLD FLAMES my flow is Co-caine, truthfully Young.....ur bein bitch but its aite....I CZECH BITCHES...like EUROPEAN CHICKS now ima sit bak..watch as u try an get bak..its real funny ta me in order ta be comin at me....u need rap VITAMINS C/SEE..like SUNNY-D thas all fa now..

05-02-2007, 06:37 PM	#2
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	but its aite....I CZECH BITCHES...like EUROPEAN CHICKS aha. Danja still killin it. good to see u back fam. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

05-02-2007, 10:27 PM	#4
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,052 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	nigga kill yaself __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

05-02-2007, 10:32 PM	#6
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,052 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	who the hell is u...lol took a shot at me not worth my attention __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

05-02-2007, 11:16 PM	#7
Reddi Ree Everybody'z Favorite Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: C-M-D, Nu Jerzey Posts: 1,000 Repped: 230 Repped 29 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 4 Posts	Kid wildin __________________ myspace.com/reeyaboy

05-02-2007, 10:06 PM	#3
Danja Dont Get Mad....Get Swag Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: 2 Up,2 Down..Suffland, VA bitches Posts: 197 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	nuthin serious jus lettin it be known im here...but good lookin my dude

05-02-2007, 10:31 PM	#5
Danja Dont Get Mad....Get Swag Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: 2 Up,2 Down..Suffland, VA bitches Posts: 197 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	lets not get hostile

05-02-2007, 11:18 PM	#8
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	haha..I like that Czech line for sure i like most of it but it was to short to see your full skills you feel me stay up Larsin __________________ RASD

05-02-2007, 11:22 PM	#9
Danja Dont Get Mad....Get Swag Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: 2 Up,2 Down..Suffland, VA bitches Posts: 197 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i feel u homie...i kno it was short im jus tryna get bak into it

05-02-2007, 11:25 PM	#10
Reddi Ree Everybody'z Favorite Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: C-M-D, Nu Jerzey Posts: 1,000 Repped: 230 Repped 29 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 4 Posts	U kno Sparkz __________________ myspace.com/reeyaboy

05-02-2007, 11:27 PM	#11
Danja Dont Get Mad....Get Swag Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: 2 Up,2 Down..Suffland, VA bitches Posts: 197 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	he's nobody i need ta kno....neither are u

05-02-2007, 11:31 PM	#12
Reddi Ree Everybody'z Favorite Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: C-M-D, Nu Jerzey Posts: 1,000 Repped: 230 Repped 29 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 4 Posts	U Niggaz Get So Tough When Yall Get In Front Of Da Computer __________________ myspace.com/reeyaboy

05-03-2007, 10:50 AM	#13
Danja Dont Get Mad....Get Swag Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: 2 Up,2 Down..Suffland, VA bitches Posts: 197 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	..yea....u right

05-03-2007, 12:39 PM	#14
gunitworld50 Brainstorm Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: IN Posts: 2,722 Repped: 959 Repped 677 Times in 173 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 2 Posts	lol, dont we all...lol

05-03-2007, 12:43 PM	#15
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this was wack as hell.

05-04-2007, 04:00 PM	#25
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	and u tried to hate on me nigga __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

05-03-2007, 08:40 PM	#16
ant. . . Veteran Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: California Posts: 1,750 Repped: 3 Repped 64 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i liked that european chicks line good shit overall stay up 7/10 __________________

05-03-2007, 08:58 PM	#17
Homicidal Thots Banned Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: behind you (no homo) :ninja: Posts: 2,692 Repped: 485 Repped 352 Times in 127 Posts Neg Reps: 9 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 7 Posts	kp still hating, SMH

05-03-2007, 09:17 PM	#18
shady yayo Fuck Yeah Join Date: May 2005 Location: Connecticut Posts: 1,217 Repped: 307 Repped 20 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	your whack

05-03-2007, 09:19 PM	#19
єяіс є REPPIN' THE LOX/D-BLOCK Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: On Tha' Block 24/7 Posts: 1,043 Repped: 30 Repped 333 Times in 168 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	kp is a hatin euro bastard... __________________ Real Niggaz listen to Real Hip-hop

05-03-2007, 09:59 PM	#20
...JuGGerNauT... ...Who Am I?... Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Right Coast Posts: 3,426 Repped: 2 Repped 91 Times in 33 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	closer was meh...but tha czech line was hot, i liked that... good shit danja, haven't seen u spit in a while...and holla @ me on aim wheneva i'm on nigga, its been agessssssssss...lol __________________ All it takes...is a little push.

05-03-2007, 10:43 PM	#21
Danja Dont Get Mad....Get Swag Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: 2 Up,2 Down..Suffland, VA bitches Posts: 197 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Good lookin on da feed....fuck yall on da hate

05-03-2007, 10:56 PM	#22
Shogun Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 718 Repped: 0 Repped 13 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Eww@the praise for the Czech line. "I Czech bitches" - doesn't make sense by itself; where one part of a "punch" doesn't make sense, the punch as a whole will, invariably, not make sense. "I check bitches like European chicks" - the "punch" is meaningless; it's not like "European chicks" or "Czech" women have any notable reputation that elevates the line above nursery level. As simple wordplay, the Czech/check thing would still be wack, but acceptable; in the form of a "punch", it's wack & not acceptable at all.

05-03-2007, 10:58 PM	#23
Danja Dont Get Mad....Get Swag Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: 2 Up,2 Down..Suffland, VA bitches Posts: 197 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks fa tha feed mr. sho

05-04-2007, 03:23 PM	#24
Streets King ~NBS~ Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 65 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	but its aite....I CZECH BITCHES...like EUROPEAN CHICKS Best Line this is small work keep going ... __________________

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