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Old 05-01-2007, 05:21 PM   #1
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Do What You Gotta Do To Keep It Loyal.. Just Never Regret
My Mentality Increases.. Develop Strategies For Beefing
Tear 'em Limb By Limb To Pieces.. Almost Magically He Sleeping
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Y'all Aint Run With Stars Unless It's Getting Chased In Ya Bapes
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Old 05-01-2007, 05:58 PM   #2
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decent shit, nice wording and everything, played concept though i guess, seen a few multies, stretched lines though, needa be shorten upped a bit, stay up nephew
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Old 05-01-2007, 07:47 PM   #3
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Old 05-01-2007, 07:53 PM   #4
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good shit 8/10
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Old 05-01-2007, 08:05 PM   #5
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ai good rhymes man
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Old 05-01-2007, 08:32 PM   #6
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good rhymes good lookz^
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Old 05-01-2007, 10:04 PM   #7
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Haha

I Agree with baller

Its A Played Concept
Many People Have Done This
But You Had Your Own Way Of Doing It
Which I Like And Your Starting To Develop
You Own Swagger With You Lyrics

Anyway

The Lyrics Were Decent/Good
You Were A Little Off On Consistency
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i like the flow
the structure was also nice
you dig keep it up
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Old 05-02-2007, 05:11 PM   #8
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Old 05-02-2007, 06:56 PM   #9
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Old 05-02-2007, 09:43 PM   #10
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good shit i liked the flow, wanna hear somemetaphors though, stay up
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Old 05-03-2007, 05:44 PM   #11
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