These Feelin's..

♪Spoken Word♪ · 04-30-2007, 09:50 PM

Listen:...
i mastered this craft, shattering cats..
following colorful schemes but tha pattern is black..
impossible, these feelins come from arogent facts..
they say that we cause these dramatical acts..
fuck it, its all logic, dumbing these harsh prospects..
they say watch life, slumping this hard knowledge..
but if lifes so dark how could we all watch it?..
& if the war makes us broke, how could we all profit?..
stop it!, i'm tired of this bullshit, lyin bout a full clip..
sayin we cause death, but ya dyin from ya own lips..
the president made promises, he not tryin so its hopeless..
Katrina came but he aint, now these guys are fuckin homeless..
and we know this..
but as these emotions get darker im harder to break..
& is it sad that i wont stand for tha flag till 2008?..
what we're bound to embrace? im sick of fuckin hearin that..
tha reallist rap? we want tha reallist back..
show us where ya feelins at..

Lyrical Messiah · 04-30-2007, 10:04 PM

fuck it, its all logic, dumbing these harsh prospects..
they say watch life, slumping this hard knowledge..
but if lifes so dark how could we all watch it?..
& if the war makes us broke, how could we all profit?..
stop it!, i'm tired of this bullshit, lyin bout a full clip..
sayin we cause death, but ya dyin from ya own lips..
the president made promises, he not tryin so its hopeless..
Katrina came but he aint, now these guys are fuckin homeless..

8.5/10 maybe a 9
dude how deep can you get ^^^^^^^^^that shits bananas
nice flow
nice multies
nice wording
deliverly

♪Spoken Word♪ · 04-30-2007, 10:16 PM

Props Fam... Good Feed... Keep That Feedback Comin

Hazerd · 04-30-2007, 10:18 PM

Damn Duke Good Shit! Props

♪Spoken Word♪ · 04-30-2007, 11:13 PM

Props Fam... Keep Feedin Peoples

B Dope · 04-30-2007, 11:38 PM

damn titties you on a roll recently......u got the multies down excellent, havnt seen someone here better yet..........8.5/10

♪Spoken Word♪ · 05-01-2007, 03:33 PM

props fam... keep that feedback comin

Jeffro Bodine · 05-01-2007, 03:44 PM

This was heat bruh

♪Spoken Word♪ · 05-01-2007, 10:29 PM

Props Fam... Keep That Feedback Comin

Famoz · 05-02-2007, 02:55 AM

i slept on you wit ya other one..but you spit the truth.some true sit right here stay up man

♪Spoken Word♪ · 05-02-2007, 10:08 PM

thanx fam... keep that feedback comin

*Danja* · 05-02-2007, 10:18 PM

but if lifes so dark how could we all watch it?..
& if the war makes us broke, how could we all profit?..
stop it!, i'm tired of this bullshit, lyin bout a full clip..
sayin we cause death, but ya dyin from ya own lips..
the president made promises, he not tryin so its hopeless..
Katrina came but he aint, now these guys are fuckin homeless..

Real shit my dude...keep em comin(no homo)

♪Spoken Word♪ · 05-03-2007, 06:08 PM

props fam... keep tha feedback comin

♪Spoken Word♪ · 05-04-2007, 11:24 PM

Upps!!.......

ReFleXiOn · 05-05-2007, 07:49 PM

i need not speak longly on how this drop makes me feel...simply put u dropped true emotion and got a serious point across, feelin' all aspects of this drop...keep 'em comin' spoken...if u up 2 it we shud collab some time...1

♪Spoken Word♪ · 05-05-2007, 11:38 PM

jea fam... no doubt... i'll hit u up bout it... u got AIM?

k4mik4ze · 05-06-2007, 04:25 AM

flow was ight , some good worded bars here and there.

"but if lifes so dark how could we all watch it?..
& if the war makes us broke, how could we all profit?.."

that bar right there is tight mayn.
i wasnt feelin ya rhymescheme mayn , u only had end rhymes in most of the lines i think u coulda done better with some internal rhymes nam sayin.and u coulda done better with the multi's.
this drop was tight had good emotion.
7/10
keep doin ya thang mayn.

ReFleXiOn · 05-06-2007, 04:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spoken_Word

jea fam... no doubt... i'll hit u up bout it... u got AIM?

^nah man, i barely got ne access to a comp where I'm at now, work is top priority, 6 days a week, but I only work like 10 hr days so I gots some time to myself, lol, just PM me bout ne thing, it'll get done and it'll be fire...

Edit: why are all the garbage drops getting 10 times the feed ours is??? lmao

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DaShAdAtDuDe · 05-15-2007, 02:11 PM

Yea U showed me dis 1 b4 disz 1 is carzy

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 05-15-2007, 05:57 PM

Yo This Was Sum Good Shit Right Here

i mastered this craft, shattering cats..
following colorful schemes but tha pattern is black..
impossible, these feelins come from arogent facts..
they say that we cause these dramatical acts..

Flowed Well^

8/10

04-30-2007, 09:50 PM	#1
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	These Feelin's.. These Feelin's.. Listen:... i mastered this craft, shattering cats.. following colorful schemes but tha pattern is black.. impossible, these feelins come from arogent facts.. they say that we cause these dramatical acts.. fuck it, its all logic, dumbing these harsh prospects.. they say watch life, slumping this hard knowledge.. but if lifes so dark how could we all watch it?.. & if the war makes us broke, how could we all profit?.. stop it!, i'm tired of this bullshit, lyin bout a full clip.. sayin we cause death, but ya dyin from ya own lips.. the president made promises, he not tryin so its hopeless.. Katrina came but he aint, now these guys are fuckin homeless.. and we know this.. but as these emotions get darker im harder to break.. & is it sad that i wont stand for tha flag till 2008?.. what we're bound to embrace? im sick of fuckin hearin that.. tha reallist rap? we want tha reallist back.. show us where ya feelins at..

04-30-2007, 10:18 PM	#4
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05-06-2007, 04:25 AM	#17
k4mik4ze kAmikAZE Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Quetta Posts: 20 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ight flow was ight , some good worded bars here and there. "but if lifes so dark how could we all watch it?.. & if the war makes us broke, how could we all profit?.." that bar right there is tight mayn. i wasnt feelin ya rhymescheme mayn , u only had end rhymes in most of the lines i think u coulda done better with some internal rhymes nam sayin.and u coulda done better with the multi's. this drop was tight had good emotion. 7/10 keep doin ya thang mayn.

05-15-2007, 02:11 PM	#19
DaShAdAtDuDe 5*GeNeRaL Join Date: May 2007 Location: Law-Town Murda Mass. Posts: 26 Repped: 3 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Yea U showed me dis 1 b4 disz 1 is carzy __________________ If Yall Can Count Ya Money Yall Aint Got Enough

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04-30-2007, 10:04 PM	#2
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	fuck it, its all logic, dumbing these harsh prospects.. they say watch life, slumping this hard knowledge.. but if lifes so dark how could we all watch it?.. & if the war makes us broke, how could we all profit?.. stop it!, i'm tired of this bullshit, lyin bout a full clip.. sayin we cause death, but ya dyin from ya own lips.. the president made promises, he not tryin so its hopeless.. Katrina came but he aint, now these guys are fuckin homeless.. 8.5/10 maybe a 9 dude how deep can you get ^^^^^^^^^that shits bananas nice flow nice multies nice wording deliverly

04-30-2007, 10:16 PM	#3
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Props Fam... Good Feed... Keep That Feedback Comin

04-30-2007, 11:13 PM	#5
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Props Fam... Keep Feedin Peoples

04-30-2007, 11:38 PM	#6
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	damn titties you on a roll recently......u got the multies down excellent, havnt seen someone here better yet..........8.5/10

05-01-2007, 03:33 PM	#7
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	props fam... keep that feedback comin

05-01-2007, 03:44 PM	#8
Jeffro Bodine Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 162 Repped: 5 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	This was heat bruh

05-01-2007, 10:29 PM	#9
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Props Fam... Keep That Feedback Comin

05-02-2007, 02:55 AM	#10
Famoz Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 1,548 Repped: 126 Repped 391 Times in 210 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	i slept on you wit ya other one..but you spit the truth.some true sit right here stay up man

05-02-2007, 10:08 PM	#11
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanx fam... keep that feedback comin

05-02-2007, 10:18 PM	#12
Danja Dont Get Mad....Get Swag Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: 2 Up,2 Down..Suffland, VA bitches Posts: 197 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	but if lifes so dark how could we all watch it?.. & if the war makes us broke, how could we all profit?.. stop it!, i'm tired of this bullshit, lyin bout a full clip.. sayin we cause death, but ya dyin from ya own lips.. the president made promises, he not tryin so its hopeless.. Katrina came but he aint, now these guys are fuckin homeless.. Real shit my dude...keep em comin(no homo)

05-03-2007, 06:08 PM	#13
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	props fam... keep tha feedback comin

05-04-2007, 11:24 PM	#14
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Upps!!.......

05-05-2007, 07:49 PM	#15
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	i need not speak longly on how this drop makes me feel...simply put u dropped true emotion and got a serious point across, feelin' all aspects of this drop...keep 'em comin' spoken...if u up 2 it we shud collab some time...1

05-05-2007, 11:38 PM	#16
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	jea fam... no doubt... i'll hit u up bout it... u got AIM?

05-15-2007, 05:57 PM	#20
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Yo This Was Sum Good Shit Right Here i mastered this craft, shattering cats.. following colorful schemes but tha pattern is black.. impossible, these feelins come from arogent facts.. they say that we cause these dramatical acts.. Flowed Well^ 8/10