!*ThA 360*! - ViiRu5

ThA ViiRu5 · 04-30-2007, 05:38 PM

Faced with cerebral starvation, the needs of my patience
are bleeded and wasted, my freezing relations are feeble and waning
as people degrade me I'm a mime in my emotional imprisonment
hoping I won't live with it, my soul, society choking and ripping it
they open my ribs with it and poke fun at my heart
stunned at the part where I was shunned from the start
when only love I impart...it's thrown back to my facial surface
my spatial verses a trade & service until you say it's worthless
a devestated person, sitting below the rainfall of heavenly tears
they're like seventy spears, sent to me here for repention and fear
retention is near, reputation shattered, i'm shackled in chains
people ask if I'm sane, but sanity is a difficult task to retain
trapped in my pain, my mind a greenhouse cultivating my stress
the ultimatums impress upon my tumultuous adress, stumbling in debt
I wonder if vets consider me amongst their success, but chin to the sky
inequatable disasters, but grin till i die, as long as I still flip on you guys wit da illest of rhymes...

Lyrical Messiah · 04-30-2007, 05:51 PM

Nice Flow
Nice Multies
Great Wording

when only love I impart...it's thrown back to my facial surface
my spatial verses a trade & service until you say it's worthless
a devestated person, sitting below the rainfall of heavenly tears
they're like seventy spears, sent to me here for repention and fear
retention is near, reputation shattered, i'm shackled in chains
people ask if I'm sane, but sanity is a difficult task to retain

I Understand Why You Got That Heavyweight Spot
Good Job ViiRu5

ThA ViiRu5 · 04-30-2007, 05:52 PM

i didnt./..im one away from heavyweight and one away from middleweight...lawl ..thanks for feed tho man...

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 04-30-2007, 05:53 PM

tight verse bruh

ThA ViiRu5 · 04-30-2007, 06:04 PM

^^ thx...

BAMPIN

Lyrical Messiah · 04-30-2007, 06:11 PM

Oh I Thought You Got It Lol My Bad

Btw Could You Leave Feed On My Drop LA Pt.3

ThA ViiRu5 · 04-30-2007, 11:21 PM

Bump for more feed.....and i got you///

LethalIsILL · 04-30-2007, 11:26 PM

i like this
nice flow multies was dope
vocab is better than usual
keep at it 7.5-8/10

ThA ViiRu5 · 04-30-2007, 11:27 PM

^^ thanks man, uppin 4 more feed...lawl at me doing this in 10 minutes in business class.....

....DeMoNiK.... · 04-30-2007, 11:58 PM

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Faced with cerebral starvation, the needs of my patience
are bleeded and wasted, my freezing relations are feeble and waning

okay good start on your first bar i like the vocab usage
the wording was good as well

as people degrade me I'm a mime in my emotional imprisonment
hoping I won't live with it, my soul, society choking and ripping it

decent multies yet again vocab was good

they open my ribs with it and poke fun at my heart
stunned at the part where I was shunned from the start

okay nice bar you keep being consistent on bar not
falling off to much i like the multies

when only love I impart...it's thrown back to my facial surface
my spatial verses a trade & service until you say it's worthless

okay decent this one fell off a little could have been worded
a little better

a devestated person, sitting below the rainfall of heavenly tears
they're like seventy spears, sent to me here for repention and fear

okay nice came back up on this bar...good multies were
decent
and vocab nice

retention is near, reputation shattered, i'm shackled in chains
people ask if I'm sane, but sanity is a difficult task to retain

You Have pulled off yet another one this was alright
i like the wording

trapped in my pain, my mind a greenhouse cultivating my stress
the ultimatums impress upon my tumultuous adress, stumbling in debt

I wonder if vets consider me amongst their success, but chin to the sky
inequatable disasters, but grin till i die, as long as I still flip on you guys wit da illest of rhymes..

the rest ima leave like that cause this free was good
you had decent multies,&flow.But what appeled to me
was the wording and vocab i like it
you have improved beyond what you usually do
keep it up yo
no doubt..1

ThA ViiRu5 · 05-01-2007, 12:02 AM

^^ thanks dude..props for in depth feed if it lets me...

....DeMoNiK.... · 05-01-2007, 12:04 AM

Its cool you aint gotta rep me for it

respect is all i require much towards you for the things
you
accomplished in a short period of time

ThA ViiRu5 · 05-01-2007, 12:08 AM

^^ hah yea what u gon do wit rep anyway> i dont understand these fools...but it says i must spread it around or some shit...good job tho man and thanks....

BUMPIN

ThA ViiRu5 · 05-01-2007, 05:01 PM

bump...............

YoungJ · 05-01-2007, 08:34 PM

the flow was straight with the multies i was feelin this whole drop
8/10 my dude.. thanks for murkin me twice
but yo holla at my latest drop

Homicidal Thots · 05-02-2007, 12:00 AM

i saw this shit on IHH, its aight nice multies, flow was nice vocab was nice good shit, 7.85

ThA ViiRu5 · 05-02-2007, 12:42 AM

thx dude........

04-30-2007, 05:38 PM	#1
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	*!ThA 360! - ViiRu5* *!ThA 360! - ViiRu5* Faced with cerebral starvation, the needs of my patience are bleeded and wasted, my freezing relations are feeble and waning as people degrade me I'm a mime in my emotional imprisonment hoping I won't live with it, my soul, society choking and ripping it they open my ribs with it and poke fun at my heart stunned at the part where I was shunned from the start when only love I impart...it's thrown back to my facial surface my spatial verses a trade & service until you say it's worthless a devestated person, sitting below the rainfall of heavenly tears they're like seventy spears, sent to me here for repention and fear retention is near, reputation shattered, i'm shackled in chains people ask if I'm sane, but sanity is a difficult task to retain trapped in my pain, my mind a greenhouse cultivating my stress the ultimatums impress upon my tumultuous adress, stumbling in debt I wonder if vets consider me amongst their success, but chin to the sky inequatable disasters, but grin till i die, as long as I still flip on you guys wit da illest of rhymes... __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

04-30-2007, 05:52 PM	#3
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	i didnt./..im one away from heavyweight and one away from middleweight...lawl ..thanks for feed tho man... __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

04-30-2007, 05:53 PM	#4
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	tight verse bruh __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

04-30-2007, 06:04 PM	#5
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	^^ thx... BAMPIN __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

04-30-2007, 11:21 PM	#7
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	Bump for more feed.....and i got you/// __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

04-30-2007, 05:51 PM	#2
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	Nice Flow Nice Multies Great Wording when only love I impart...it's thrown back to my facial surface my spatial verses a trade & service until you say it's worthless a devestated person, sitting below the rainfall of heavenly tears they're like seventy spears, sent to me here for repention and fear retention is near, reputation shattered, i'm shackled in chains people ask if I'm sane, but sanity is a difficult task to retain I Understand Why You Got That Heavyweight Spot Good Job ViiRu5

04-30-2007, 06:11 PM	#6
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	Oh I Thought You Got It Lol My Bad Btw Could You Leave Feed On My Drop LA Pt.3

04-30-2007, 11:26 PM	#8
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,964 Repped: 138 Repped 1,010 Times in 217 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 57 Posts	i like this nice flow multies was dope vocab is better than usual keep at it 7.5-8/10 __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

04-30-2007, 11:27 PM	#9
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	^^ thanks man, uppin 4 more feed...lawl at me doing this in 10 minutes in business class..... __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

04-30-2007, 11:58 PM	#10
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Faced with cerebral starvation, the needs of my patience are bleeded and wasted, my freezing relations are feeble and waning okay good start on your first bar i like the vocab usage the wording was good as well as people degrade me I'm a mime in my emotional imprisonment hoping I won't live with it, my soul, society choking and ripping it decent multies yet again vocab was good they open my ribs with it and poke fun at my heart stunned at the part where I was shunned from the start okay nice bar you keep being consistent on bar not falling off to much i like the multies when only love I impart...it's thrown back to my facial surface my spatial verses a trade & service until you say it's worthless okay decent this one fell off a little could have been worded a little better a devestated person, sitting below the rainfall of heavenly tears they're like seventy spears, sent to me here for repention and fear okay nice came back up on this bar...good multies were decent and vocab nice retention is near, reputation shattered, i'm shackled in chains people ask if I'm sane, but sanity is a difficult task to retain You Have pulled off yet another one this was alright i like the wording trapped in my pain, my mind a greenhouse cultivating my stress the ultimatums impress upon my tumultuous adress, stumbling in debt I wonder if vets consider me amongst their success, but chin to the sky inequatable disasters, but grin till i die, as long as I still flip on you guys wit da illest of rhymes.. the rest ima leave like that cause this free was good you had decent multies,&flow.But what appeled to me was the wording and vocab i like it you have improved beyond what you usually do keep it up yo no doubt..1 __________________ RASD

05-01-2007, 12:02 AM	#11
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	^^ thanks dude..props for in depth feed if it lets me... __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

05-01-2007, 12:04 AM	#12
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Its cool you aint gotta rep me for it respect is all i require much towards you for the things you accomplished in a short period of time __________________ RASD

05-01-2007, 12:08 AM	#13
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	^^ hah yea what u gon do wit rep anyway> i dont understand these fools...but it says i must spread it around or some shit...good job tho man and thanks.... BUMPIN __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

05-01-2007, 05:01 PM	#14
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	bump............... __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

05-01-2007, 08:34 PM	#15
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	the flow was straight with the multies i was feelin this whole drop 8/10 my dude.. thanks for murkin me twice but yo holla at my latest drop

05-02-2007, 12:00 AM	#16
Homicidal Thots Banned Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: behind you (no homo) :ninja: Posts: 2,692 Repped: 485 Repped 352 Times in 127 Posts Neg Reps: 9 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 7 Posts	i saw this shit on IHH, its aight nice multies, flow was nice vocab was nice good shit, 7.85

05-02-2007, 12:42 AM	#17
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	thx dude........ __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

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