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!!Deepz Is Bac!! *Need some feedbac bless*
its deepz im bac.im on attack.throwing my stacks.
theres boys that wanna hate.fell the vibe my bars create. hopeing dat i fail den keep waiting.juss stateing no1 spot im taking. ima game playa dat be playing da game. insane flow dat goes with the heated fast lane. im rolling with street teams.down elite streams.even palning in deep dreams. n seeing life for more then it seems. d.t make it rain wen its drouted. its d.t get to know about it . dis how we roll.got the goons on patrol. hat bac trousers low. in full control. too much weight on my shoulders so ima start dumping. im the heart of d.t so the heart ill be pumping. ima trouble maker.heart breaker.floor shaker. spitin my brains creations so call me da creator. .................................................. .................................................. ... ......***normal......messege***...... hit me bac with some feedbac need it kl can u tell the things u liked n dat n ill follow up the senders freestyles n leave some feedbac ...bless... |
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04-30-2007, 02:08 PM
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I See Potential But You Could Use Some Work If You Want It You Could Holla Whenever
5.5/10 Ps Rate My Drop Lyrical Assassin Pt. 3 |
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04-30-2007, 02:22 PM
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yh yh serious need some help still to tighten up bars .. im 14 init n ders still work to be done
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04-30-2007, 02:33 PM
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nedd more feedbac hit at me
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04-30-2007, 03:43 PM
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come give some feed bac its needed .. bless...
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05-01-2007, 12:31 PM
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uppin 4 feed where's da feed bac ????
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05-01-2007, 01:01 PM
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uppin 4 feed where's da feed bac ????
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05-01-2007, 01:03 PM
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i thought this was nice to be honest... everybody on here be hating
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05-01-2007, 02:00 PM
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05-01-2007, 02:00 PM
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uppin for some more feedbac .. bless..
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05-01-2007, 03:18 PM
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uppin
for some feedbac its needed |
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05-02-2007, 10:56 AM
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uppin need some feedbac
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05-02-2007, 04:52 PM
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uppin 4 feedbac
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05-02-2007, 04:59 PM
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I actually thought it was pretty decent also bruh.You could try and make the lines a bit even so your flow can go more fluent,and add some better multies,but other than that you on the right track
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