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Old 04-30-2007, 12:59 AM   #1
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Lyrical Assassin Pt. 3

ccolao32792: would u rather collab with young gunna or william hung
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Crumbling Emcees, In The Palm Of My Hand Like Ruffled Chips I Forever Demolish
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Old 04-30-2007, 08:17 AM   #2
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This was nice on vocab the flow was good
as well
the disses with CC and Sho Kase Were Also funny
multies were there
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Old 04-30-2007, 10:57 AM   #3
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Old 04-30-2007, 02:01 PM   #4
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yhyh im felling dat!! like the way u switched the flow
bout my freestyle : yh u can give me some pointers n dat cause im 14 n need to tighten some things up in my bars bless
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Old 04-30-2007, 03:48 PM   #6
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im feeling this. the flow was straight and vocab was good
this is one of ur best in a while id have to say a 9 on this im likin it
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ccolao32792: would u rather collab with young gunna or william hung
ccolao32792: audio
x Sho Kase x: man thats tough.. they are both respected asian performers.. but i guess Hung.. so he can sing me a hook

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Lyrical Assassin Pt 3

The Forceful, Glowing Instrumentals I Cant Hold Back The Feeling
My Minds In Competition With My Gun And They’re Known For Drastic Killings
First Line Makez Little sense......."Glowing Instrumentals"????...And Feeling And Killings Don't Rhyme


Every Word, Comes From The Heart And Provide Intellectual Meanings
The Flow, Like A Period Rather Considering It Wet Like Expectable Dreaming
Your Wording Makez The Last Line Confusing...."Expectable Dreaming"...Has Nothing To Do With Wet Dreamz


Honor Is Esteeming, Every Vision Clip’s There To Give You A Mixture
Illusions I Paint, I Understand Why Other Rappers Can’t Live Through The Picture
"Esteeming" Iz Not An Adjective...."Give You A Mixture" Of What?.....How Can You Live THROUGH A Picture?

Needles And Pins, Picking My Way Through The Bottom Of The Haystack
Scribbling Along The Pads I Should Change My Name To Did He Really Just Say That
Hmmm Decent Bar....

Automatically Disclaimed, Like Chains But My Fame Should Never Tarnish
Crumbling Emcees, In The Palm Of My Hand Like Ruffled Chips I Forever Demolish
"Automatically Disclaimed, Like Chains"....That Makez No Sense....Tarnish and Demolish Do Not Rhyme

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Stimulate, By Time Because As The Minute Goes You Grow Wiser
Immortal With The Tools, But I'm Unlicensed So I'm Screwed With No Driver
(Switch The Flow)
Another Decent Bar


Rejection At The Slighted Peak, Shame On You For Denying Streetz
And You Ran Out Of Shrimp Fried Rice So Only Thing You Could Bite Is Beef
Rather Clever But Simple At The Same Time

I Set The Bar High, Like Gym Class When Its Time To Hit The Weights
Fast Forward Past Your Smart Remarks, So Irrelevant Let The Remote Click Ya Fate
Decent Bar

Oh Mizfit I Aint Forget This Bitch, Distracted By The Blade Get His Lip Split
I'm Mortal Kombat, Mixed With BMX Sports I Retain To The Bicycle Kick Quick
Lol I Aint Even Know This Was A Diss To Me....Thought It Was Squashed But Ok....."I Retain To"....You Used The Word "Retain" Wrong....


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That Was My Last Shit Aimed Towards You
Thanks For The Feed But I Rather Explain My Bars

Ice Sickles Are Cold=Cold As A Sickle=Sickle Sell
Wet Dreams Are Expected In SOme Cases
Live Through THe Pictures Interacts With I Paint Illusions Simply Meaning YOu Could Visualize My Words And Live It
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Well Every Other Person I Showed The Verse To Seemed To Think Differently But Thanks For Your Opinion Souljah It Means Alot
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Hmmm This Shit Was Pretty Hot... Vocab Was On Point... Multies Was Strong... Punches Was Hot And A Couple Of Nice Metaphores... This SHit Was Pretty Nice... Too Bad It Was A Diss And Its Not Gonna Get Tha Recognition It Deserves... I Give It A 8/10
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Hmmm This Shit Was Pretty Hot... Vocab Was On Point... Multies Was Strong... Punches Was Hot And A Couple Of Nice Metaphores... This SHit Was Pretty Nice... Too Bad It Was A Diss And Its Not Gonna Get Tha Recognition It Deserves... I Give It A 8/10

Totally Agree Thought About Taking That Part Off And Adding More To It
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this twas ight....a few weak spots and wording issues here and there...but still decent...7/10
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The Forceful, Glowing Instrumentals I Cant Hold Back The Feeling
My Minds In Competition With My Gun And They’re Known For Drastic Killings
2/5 good flow multie was ok coulda used it better
Every Word, Comes From The Heart And Provide Intellectual Meanings
The Flow, Like A Period Rather Considering It Wet Like Expectable Dreaming
3/5 vocab was str8 flow multies and punches was coo
Honor Is Esteeming, Every Vision Clip’s There To Give You A Mixture
Illusions I Paint, I Understand Why Other Rappers Can’t Live Through The Picture
2.5/5 wordplay coulda been better str8 bar
Needles And Pins, Picking My Way Through The Bottom Of The Haystack
Scribbling Along The Pads I Should Change My Name To Did He Really Just Say That
2/5 2nd line was funny multie was alright
Automatically Disclaimed, Like Chains But My Fame Should Never Tarnish
Crumbling Emcees, In The Palm Of My Hand Like Ruffled Chips I Forever Demolish
3/5 vocab was str8 punch was decent
Cold As A Sickle, Acknowledge The Sells He Interpreted I Spit Disease
Malicious With Words, Killing Drops to Help Murder Rates With Ice Picks Increase
3/5Vocab was used well multies was good so was the flow
Stimulate, By Time Because As The Minute Goes You Grow Wiser
Immortal With The Tools, But I'm Unlicensed So I'm Screwed With No Driver
3/5 wordplay was good multie to simple tho
(Switch The Flow)
Rejection At The Slighted Peak, Shame On You For Denying Streetz
And You Ran Out Of Shrimp Fried Rice So Only Thing You Could Bite Is Beef
2.5/5 lol good multies and flow personal was good also
I Set The Bar High, Like Gym Class When Its Time To Hit The Weights
Fast Forward Past Your Smart Remarks, So Irrelevant Let The Remote Click Ya Fate
3/5 your best punchline so far multie was average
Oh Mizfit I Aint Forget This Bitch, Distracted By The Blade Get His Lip Split
I'm Mortal Kombat, Mixed With BMX Sports I Retain To The Bicycle Kick Quick
Messiah Lyrically Hard, Punishing You Pussies Just Call Me A Stiff Dick
3/5 good closer wordplay was coo
25/50=50%

make ya multies more complex as long with your punches
and work and ya wordply a lil more
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