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ccolao32792: would u rather collab with young gunna or william hung
ccolao32792: audio x Sho Kase x: man thats tough.. they are both respected asian performers.. but i guess Hung.. so he can sing me a hook PWNED Lyrical Assassin Pt 3 The Forceful, Glowing Instrumentals I Cant Hold Back The Feeling My Minds In Competition With My Gun And They’re Known For Drastic Killings Every Word, Comes From The Heart And Provide Intellectual Meanings The Flow, Like A Period Rather Considering It Wet Like Expectable Dreaming Honor Is Esteeming, Every Vision Clip’s There To Give You A Mixture Illusions I Paint, I Understand Why Other Rappers Can’t Live Through The Picture Needles And Pins, Picking My Way Through The Bottom Of The Haystack Scribbling Along The Pads I Should Change My Name To Did He Really Just Say That Automatically Disclaimed, Like Chains But My Fame Should Never Tarnish Crumbling Emcees, In The Palm Of My Hand Like Ruffled Chips I Forever Demolish Cold As A Sickle, Acknowledge The Cells He Interpreted I Spit Disease Malicious With Words, Killing Drops to Help Murder Rates With Ice Picks Increase Stimulate, By Time Because As The Minute Goes You Grow Wiser Immortal With The Tools, But I'm Unlicensed So I'm Screwed With No Driver Rejection At The Slighted Peak, Shame On You For Denying Streetz And You Ran Out Of Shrimp Fried Rice So Only Thing You Could Bite Is Beef I Set The Bar High, Like Gym Class When Its Time To Hit The Weights Fast Forward Past Your Smart Remarks, So Irrelevant Let The Remote Click Ya Fate Your Looking At The Weakest Rapper On Hhboard Muthafuckers |
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Haha
This was nice on vocab the flow was good as well the disses with CC and Sho Kase Were Also funny multies were there had some decent punches as well keep it up
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yhyh im felling dat!! like the way u switched the flow
bout my freestyle : yh u can give me some pointers n dat cause im 14 n need to tighten some things up in my bars bless |
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^^^^^^^^^No doubt
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to bad it wasnt a freestyle
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^^^Meaning
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Young J
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im feeling this. the flow was straight and vocab was good
this is one of ur best in a while id have to say a 9 on this im likin it keep this shit comin |
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Thanks Scott
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ccolao32792: would u rather collab with young gunna or william hung
ccolao32792: audio x Sho Kase x: man thats tough.. they are both respected asian performers.. but i guess Hung.. so he can sing me a hook PWNED Lyrical Assassin Pt 3 The Forceful, Glowing Instrumentals I Cant Hold Back The Feeling My Minds In Competition With My Gun And They’re Known For Drastic Killings First Line Makez Little sense......."Glowing Instrumentals"????...And Feeling And Killings Don't Rhyme Every Word, Comes From The Heart And Provide Intellectual Meanings The Flow, Like A Period Rather Considering It Wet Like Expectable Dreaming Your Wording Makez The Last Line Confusing...."Expectable Dreaming"...Has Nothing To Do With Wet Dreamz Honor Is Esteeming, Every Vision Clip’s There To Give You A Mixture Illusions I Paint, I Understand Why Other Rappers Can’t Live Through The Picture "Esteeming" Iz Not An Adjective...."Give You A Mixture" Of What?.....How Can You Live THROUGH A Picture? Needles And Pins, Picking My Way Through The Bottom Of The Haystack Scribbling Along The Pads I Should Change My Name To Did He Really Just Say That Hmmm Decent Bar.... Automatically Disclaimed, Like Chains But My Fame Should Never Tarnish Crumbling Emcees, In The Palm Of My Hand Like Ruffled Chips I Forever Demolish "Automatically Disclaimed, Like Chains"....That Makez No Sense....Tarnish and Demolish Do Not Rhyme Cold As A Sickle, Acknowledge The Sells He Interpreted I Spit Disease Malicious With Words, Killing Drops to Help Murder Rates With Ice Picks Increase "Cold As A Sickle"...How Iz That Cold?.....First Line Makez No Sense At All......How Can Killing Drop But Murder Ratez Increase...Thatz Contradiction...And Increase And Disease Do Not Rhyme.... Stimulate, By Time Because As The Minute Goes You Grow Wiser Immortal With The Tools, But I'm Unlicensed So I'm Screwed With No Driver (Switch The Flow) Another Decent Bar Rejection At The Slighted Peak, Shame On You For Denying Streetz And You Ran Out Of Shrimp Fried Rice So Only Thing You Could Bite Is Beef Rather Clever But Simple At The Same Time I Set The Bar High, Like Gym Class When Its Time To Hit The Weights Fast Forward Past Your Smart Remarks, So Irrelevant Let The Remote Click Ya Fate Decent Bar Oh Mizfit I Aint Forget This Bitch, Distracted By The Blade Get His Lip Split I'm Mortal Kombat, Mixed With BMX Sports I Retain To The Bicycle Kick Quick Lol I Aint Even Know This Was A Diss To Me....Thought It Was Squashed But Ok....."I Retain To"....You Used The Word "Retain" Wrong.... Messiah Lyrically Hard, Punishing You Pussies Just Call Me A Stiff Dick Most Played Line Ever Your Looking At The Weakest Rapper On Hhboard Muthafuckers I Just Notice These Two Fucks Have Something In Common They Both Left GLK And One Is In A Shit Hole The Other Is A Vet Because Lord Knows Prolly From Serving Up Some Of The Best Chinese Food Anyways Enjoy This 6.5/10.......I Dont Know How Anyone Could Give This A 9/10 No Hate....Just Feed |
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That Was My Last Shit Aimed Towards You
Thanks For The Feed But I Rather Explain My Bars Ice Sickles Are Cold=Cold As A Sickle=Sickle Sell Wet Dreams Are Expected In SOme Cases Live Through THe Pictures Interacts With I Paint Illusions Simply Meaning YOu Could Visualize My Words And Live It |
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Well Every Other Person I Showed The Verse To Seemed To Think Differently But Thanks For Your Opinion Souljah It Means Alot
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Hmmm This Shit Was Pretty Hot... Vocab Was On Point... Multies Was Strong... Punches Was Hot And A Couple Of Nice Metaphores... This SHit Was Pretty Nice... Too Bad It Was A Diss And Its Not Gonna Get Tha Recognition It Deserves... I Give It A 8/10
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Totally Agree Thought About Taking That Part Off And Adding More To ItGuess They Got To Wait Another Couple Months For 4 |
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this twas ight....a few weak spots and wording issues here and there...but still decent...7/10
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Thanks Lotus PA Stand Up
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Wheres My Feed?????????????
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Dont Worry About J-Souljahs Feed
I Did Thee Exact Bar By Bar Breakdown On His Please Dont Swagger Jack J Stay In Your Lane Ill Give This A Real Bar For Bar Later
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Go play somewhere im busy
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make ya multies more complex as long with your punches and work and ya wordply a lil more
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Why Thank You
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