Slowly Taken Over

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 04-28-2007, 09:58 PM

slowly taken over my nigga

he never stops he never gets writers block for some reason

lord make him stop

the hip hop assasin is back mutha fucka

once a mutha fucken again my nigga

check this out boss

the flow is crazy

real niggas don't talk to feds but fuck boy you sang
have niggas around ya crib deeper than WU-tang
have ya teeth twisted like the fingers on 2 gangs
riden on anybody no matter what set you claim
see threw steel boots nigga step up ya shoe game
hotter than the average rapper nigga i spit blue flames
took more beatings than slaves i can live threw pain
ryhmes get ya skinny and ugly nigga the flow cocaine
swagger snatch ya bitch the coke get threw ya ho vains
spit without a mind nigga i' am verbally insane
retarded actions plus i'm holding weight like slick rick chains
not please ya ho,can't blame you,it's a big dick thang
one dose of me bet cha ho slide off her wed-ding rang
red air forces,and blue jeans but no i don't bang
i encourage the lil niggas that wanna be,try and be me
but i'm on my casper swagger cause they can't see me
i'm on my slavery swagger cause they can't read me
i'm on my Jesus swagger mostly everybody believe me
in the state of florda and city of lauderdale is where we be
busten niggas head if he say the wrong thing out his mouf piece
doubt me?how could you doubt or come and dislike me
the hip hop spike lee,

fuck boi try me

never run out i got 199 more busta

B Dope · 04-28-2007, 10:12 PM

You like lil Wayne

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 04-28-2007, 10:13 PM

Hell naw Wayne fucken garbage

What made you think i like Lil Wayne?

....DeMoNiK.... · 04-29-2007, 01:19 AM

lol sarcasim is all over this board

he has a wayne avy...a wayne signature

but i like cassidy.............so you get no feed

ill get around to it tommorrow though

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 04-29-2007, 09:13 AM

Whats with the Cassidy and Lil Wayne thing bruh

Niggas be like "Fuck Cass He aint better than Wayne"

Then another nigga be like "fuck wayne he aint better than Cassidy"

....DeMoNiK.... · 04-29-2007, 11:10 AM

I Have no clue i like both artist alot no homo

This freestyle was good
you had multies some were forced
the flow was alright come time alittle choppy
you had some alright vocab
the consistentness on this was on and off
the structure was alright as well
a couple punches not a lot but
nonetheless its nice

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 04-29-2007, 11:15 AM

aight thanks for the feedback boss

~ILLEGAL~ · 04-29-2007, 08:31 PM

kool.....................

B Dope · 04-29-2007, 10:37 PM

heres a tip for ya, multies are simple, its ight for that but make them a lil better, try puttin more than one multie in a line, work on ya punches, last thing, don't put out like 6 frees in one day, concentrate on one and make it real good,

DrUnK-N-MuNkY · 04-30-2007, 08:21 AM

^^ aight homie

04-28-2007, 09:58 PM	#1
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Slowly Taken Over Slowly Taken Over slowly taken over my nigga he never stops he never gets writers block for some reason lord make him stop the hip hop assasin is back mutha fucka once a mutha fucken again my nigga check this out boss the flow is crazy real niggas don't talk to feds but fuck boy you sang have niggas around ya crib deeper than WU-tang have ya teeth twisted like the fingers on 2 gangs riden on anybody no matter what set you claim see threw steel boots nigga step up ya shoe game hotter than the average rapper nigga i spit blue flames took more beatings than slaves i can live threw pain ryhmes get ya skinny and ugly nigga the flow cocaine swagger snatch ya bitch the coke get threw ya ho vains spit without a mind nigga i' am verbally insane retarded actions plus i'm holding weight like slick rick chains not please ya ho,can't blame you,it's a big dick thang one dose of me bet cha ho slide off her wed-ding rang red air forces,and blue jeans but no i don't bang i encourage the lil niggas that wanna be,try and be me but i'm on my casper swagger cause they can't see me i'm on my slavery swagger cause they can't read me i'm on my Jesus swagger mostly everybody believe me in the state of florda and city of lauderdale is where we be busten niggas head if he say the wrong thing out his mouf piece doubt me?how could you doubt or come and dislike me the hip hop spike lee, fuck boi try me never run out i got 199 more busta __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

04-28-2007, 10:13 PM	#3
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hell naw Wayne fucken garbage What made you think i like Lil Wayne? __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

04-29-2007, 01:19 AM	#4
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	lol sarcasim is all over this board he has a wayne avy...a wayne signature but i like cassidy.............so you get no feed ill get around to it tommorrow though __________________ RASD

04-29-2007, 09:13 AM	#5
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Whats with the Cassidy and Lil Wayne thing bruh Niggas be like "Fuck Cass He aint better than Wayne" Then another nigga be like "fuck wayne he aint better than Cassidy" __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

04-29-2007, 11:10 AM	#6
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I Have no clue i like both artist alot no homo This freestyle was good you had multies some were forced the flow was alright come time alittle choppy you had some alright vocab the consistentness on this was on and off the structure was alright as well a couple punches not a lot but nonetheless its nice __________________ RASD

04-28-2007, 10:12 PM	#2
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	You like lil Wayne

04-29-2007, 11:15 AM	#7
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	aight thanks for the feedback boss __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

04-29-2007, 08:31 PM	#8
~ILLEGAL~ Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 57 Repped: 14 Repped 3 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	kool.....................

04-29-2007, 10:37 PM	#9
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	heres a tip for ya, multies are simple, its ight for that but make them a lil better, try puttin more than one multie in a line, work on ya punches, last thing, don't put out like 6 frees in one day, concentrate on one and make it real good,

04-30-2007, 08:21 AM	#10
DrUnK-N-MuNkY Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gunshine State Posts: 1,437 Repped: 19 Repped 104 Times in 56 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^ aight homie __________________ "Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode