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Old 04-28-2007, 03:33 AM   #1
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My Anger Or Aggression..Please Depict On Whats Scarier..
N Your "Contact Is Soft In Everyway" Like Head-On Collisions Wit A Terrier
Ya Guns Ain't Clappin'..N Yu Rappin'? Is "More Redundent"
Den Being On Defense N Pickin' Precisions Of A Carrier..
I'll "Snap Pictures Of A Corpse" N Make Yu A "Splitting Image"
Like Cannablistic Photographers Feeding Off Divisions Of Ya Character..
Im Just Raping Raps..I Keep Ma Soul On Lock..So if Yu Look In The Chamber
Your Sight Will Get Fired By Flamming Gats..Yu Riskin' Ya Ligaments Battlin' Me..
Cuz I'll Have Yu "Goin' Out A Limb" Like Dismembered Firefighters Saving Cats..
Complex Rhymes Got Chu Groaping Chins..King Of Da Rap Game..Hints Da Flowing Wins..
N Yu Breathin' Now..Was In Da Past..As If I'm Holdin' Tense..Gotcha DNA Coding Bent..
While Watchin' Yu "Soil Yaself" By "Handing Yu A Lo{e}ss" Like
Losin' To "Mother Nature" At A Game Of "Blowing Wind"..
Yu Crackin' Jokes But No Ones Hearin' Ya Or Feelin' Ya..
So Who Yu Foolin' Da Dead?
Yu Makin' Me Resort To "Violence With Humorous Antics"..
By "Choppin' Off Ya Head" While I'm "Pulling Ya Leg"..

{Loess=Wind Erosion}


Never Light Loads..Ma Tools Heavy While U Got "Pyro" Meanin Ya "Tool's Lighter"..
Give Ya "Chest Fill-Ups/Phillips" Like Openin Treasures With Screw Drivers..
What Crews Tighter!? The Council.."Get It Right/Rite" Like Diet Soda..
ITs Ur "Time To Die" So If U Fail At "Hangin Ya Self"..Do "OT's" to "Tie It Ova"..
Ma Writes Beaten Upon Da Best Of Men.."Enuff Flow" To Over Kill Two Lips/Tulips..
Its Like Ya "Life Depends Upon a Testament" How I'll Make Ya "Lose Ya Will To Live"..
Ma Team Gettin Cream N Rippin Audioz Cuz We Juss Cool Edit/At It G..
U Can Take "Half Suck N Half Luck" And Still Couldn't "Make a Fool/Full Outta Me"..
Hyph RooK? I Passed It On N Took Ya Skillz..U PAST..As If I Hold Time Cards..
N Its Like Gettin "Blasted On A Football Field" How U'll Take "Da Whole Nine......Yards"..


Battle against Killuminati...Won Btw


I Rip-Tricks N Get Cha Tip-Split..I Come To "Gripz-Wit Death"!?..U Should Do-Urs-A-Lil-Tighter..
Get Da Burner N Sizzle-Da-Liar..Send Him On A "Mission To Meet God" So His "Future's-A-Lil-Brighter"..*
I Kno Yu Scared..I Got Cho Senses Tingling N Ya "Subconcious Ringin" As If I Fight-Fears..
He Thinks Hes "Head Of Da Game"..Well I'll Give Him a "Buzz Cut" Juss To "Shorten His Light Years"..
Yu Couldn't Bring "Posterior/rear Damage With Threads" If U "Sown Up Knees"..Leave Yu Sayin "Go-Soft-Please"..
Rippin ya Spleen N Winnin Wit Ezz..U MAD!? I'll Leave Yu "Suckin On Cylinders" Juss To "Blow Off Steam"..
Fat-Scars-Black-Yu..Watch Me Take His Spot N Make Him Evangelist/Even Jealous Like Matthew..
Fast-Bars-Attack-Yu..Gettin Ma Points? U Couldn't "Catch Ma Drift" If I "Threw Nascars"-At-Yu..
Da Fire Left U Merinatin Wit Ur Hatin Heart..N I ain't Talkin "Super Size Me" Wen I Say da "Plot Thickens"..
Ma Bladez Are Carvin N Rippin..Cuz Im"Penatratin Sir/Serrated Parts" Like Sawin' Women..
I'll Get U Wrecked N I Don't Have To Drop 4 U To "Tell Hes Dead" Like Snitchin' Funarals Son..
U Think U Won? Hyphy Kills Self-Esteem By "Toastin' Insecurities" Like Burning Mutual Funds..
Bullets Through His Chess/Chest Flips This Pawn..Ur Prayers Couldn't Get Ur Lyrical Flair Spawned..
Masterin Cripplin Arts..I'll "Do Wat It Takes" To Break Ur "Corresponding Parts".."By Any Means" Their Gone..



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When He Came Back..He Made a thread called

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Posterior Is a part of your knee..Poster-Rear



Battle Against LadyV...Won By HO-Show


I'ma Fein-Detectin'-this-Catch-And..Battlin Me? U should "Leave-Acceptin'-This-Match-Man"..
RiPpin' Ya So Called-Fans..And Its Like Im "Stealin Da Internet" When I Get This Broad-Ban[ne}D..

Like Cars-On-Low..I-Thirst-For-Da-Pump..Wen i Start-Ta-Flow You Squirt-From-Da-Rump..
Dots On Ya Back Like Frogs..You wanna Jump? And i Kno da "Bottom Hurts"..But Its Ain't Da "First-Of-Da-Month"..*

I'll See Ya Back-Fast Wen Da Gat-Pop..+ She A Rican Wit a Fat-Ass..No Guess She Get a Back-Shot..
Put Her In a Bag-Ock..Somethin "Pokin Out da Sack...Trail'in"..Don't Think i Think "Drag Is Hot!!"..

Ma Verses Lyrically Show What U-Usually-Lack..Da Flow U-Use-Wack..Burnin' da 2-2's Leavin Ya-TUTU's-Black..
I Stay StyLiN On You-JacK..While Im Stain'iN aH-Few-BacKs..+ U "Got Da Cal On You "Cuz You-Fat!..**

Like Lookin Throoh Da Devils Eyes..U A "Sad Sight To See"..N Ur Record..U'll "Put a Beat On" Like Freeway-{V.S}-Cassidy..
Im "Grindin To Rip"..Like U Got A Sign "Please-Rap{e}-Rapidly"..N Ur Next Match is @ Da Cheese-Cake-Factory..***

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Freeway Wanted to put a beat on to spit ova wen he lost to Cass..
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Old 04-28-2007, 09:21 AM   #2
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Heavyweight ez...one of the best on the board if not the...I remember u showin me some of the first drop on AIM b4 u posted it too lol
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Old 04-28-2007, 11:18 AM   #3
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heavyweight easy.....wasnt really feelin da last verse...btu da others had nice wordplay n punches.....so yea
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Old 04-28-2007, 11:25 AM   #4
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Old 04-28-2007, 01:25 PM   #5
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Solid lightweight.
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Old 04-28-2007, 01:51 PM   #6
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Old 04-28-2007, 11:34 PM   #7
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Old 04-28-2007, 11:38 PM   #8
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sumo weight?
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Old 04-28-2007, 11:54 PM   #9
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^^ dats wat it is
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Old 04-29-2007, 12:04 AM   #10
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sumo weight?
lol......heavy weight, in real life and on the keyboard
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Old 04-29-2007, 12:12 AM   #11
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overweight.............


no really.....you need to go on a diet fat ass.....................
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Old 04-29-2007, 12:41 AM   #12
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^^lawl lotus always on that jokin shit
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Old 04-29-2007, 01:17 AM   #13
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no really.....you need to go on a diet fat ass.....................
yea? but why this is yu




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Old 04-29-2007, 02:35 AM   #14
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....................no really it isn't.........................see...you are actually fat.......i'm no where close to even "semi-fat"
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Old 04-29-2007, 03:04 AM   #15
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prove im fat..
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Old 04-29-2007, 05:11 PM   #16
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.................................................. .....you have to many typo's......its because you got sausage fingers........................................... ................plus....you then mistake them for actual sausages and try eating them....which results in ace band-aids......which then makes you fingers huge..............
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Old 04-29-2007, 06:01 PM   #17
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heavyweight...................
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Lightweight; granted, it's not as hopeless as some here, but I cannot condone such wackness nonetheless.
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Old 04-30-2007, 10:55 AM   #20
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Old 05-01-2007, 07:38 PM   #21
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Old 06-20-2007, 09:54 PM   #22
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very nice very nice, only problem is ya flo sometimes

i feel like u put a word in sometimes that u dont need to but u got skills

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Old 06-20-2007, 09:57 PM   #23
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heavyweight even though the spit4rank shit died it seems

nice drop though, real shit..
holla at my drop wen u get time..
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Old 06-20-2007, 10:36 PM   #24
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i dunno about the flow and the rhyme scheme....but punches and wordplay was definately there....

i think this is the first time i read one of your pieces...

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Old 06-20-2007, 10:50 PM   #25
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u spit tha first one on ma track lol
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